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BubbIeBunny — Spring Break

Published: 2015-02-23 00:59:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 565; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description I call this piece spring break because, I miss spring break so much. I just wanna sleep for 4 days  
sleep is so precious now a days. 
School is just ridiculous. Ohmygoodness, I've only had one weekend where I haven't had homework and that was the weekend after finals. BUT, if you don't count that, I can't remember a weekend where I have not had homework to finish. And I haven't had a week without a test or quiz or anything. School is just a butt OtL 
I know I'm not the only one with these problems so sorry for ranting.snjfma;fwmk'a 

ANYWHO- 
This picture in particular took me a few days, because I started it 2 weeks ago? But the girl in the middle took me about 3 sketches to finally get what I wanted. I mean it was really bad before! I was so blind last week to think my first sketch was not bad. 
No it was bad. 
This is the progress of what the girl in the middle started as;   

I really have to thank my cousin ; WorldTraveler128 , She seriously helped me A L O T ! It can't be put into words how much she helped me. Shes actually the one artist I look up to most / v \ Shes really good <3  

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As a quick Update; For the people I owe art too, I'm sorry ITs taking me so long to work on it, I have a lot of my sketches done. 
But honestly, My self confidence level is going kind of downhill. I don't know why, since the beginning of 2015 I've not been able to see any good in the things I draw. *If that makes any sense* 
I just think I'm not good enough asnfjkkamfw'am wkl' I've made a ton of sketches but I scribble out enough to fill a city ahah I feel I can't draw well. Which is really true. I mean compared to other people BUTBTUBTBTUTUBTU i know the only way to get better is practice, and I'm really trying my best to get as much practice as possible! ANYWHO, I'm trying my best to get my to do list done. Another HUGE thing in my way is school obviously.  
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I don't really write this in my descriptions, but Thank-you if you comment or favorite! c':
and thank-you if you read this far! / v \ <3 
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**DO NOT COPY/STEAL/TRACE MY ART! IT WILL NOT BE TOLERATED IN ANYWAY! **  


ALSO, I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE SOME CRITICISM SO I CAN TRY TO IMPROVE ! THANK-YOU! 
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Comments: 4

blandkid [2015-03-16 07:19:20 +0000 UTC]

HHHHHHHHH SO MUCH IMPROVEMENT, NAT.

just a few things to point out:
although the clouds are vibrant and lovely, they don't actually look like clouds. you should find your light source then shade the clouds. also, they kinda just look like blobs. otl the wind direction looks like it's to the left, so the dress should blow to the left. also, a dress shouldn't shape the legs unless it's tight. the yellow flower on the right side seems a bit unnecessary. you should add more flowers like that if you don't want it to look awkward. and also, it should be facing to the left.

i really do love the design on the dress though, and the grass looks amazinggg. //q//)99 and i'm totally in love with your hair shading. it's just asdfghjkl- /dead/

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Umagii [2015-02-28 08:20:58 +0000 UTC]

BRUUHHHHHHHH SO ADORABLESss. i really love the dress, and how you did the foreshortening with the flower petals //some criticism// For the clouds, you should try to make more a light source so you can tell where the shadows are going to be, because it looks like the shadow is covering the whole cloud, so you can try to indicate more where the light is coming from ( ^ ^ )   

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artificialdreaming [2015-02-23 09:09:51 +0000 UTC]

the only thing I would say is be clearer on wind direction - kinda like what internetaddiction said (the hair seems to be blowing sideways, the dress backwards and the petals forwards). However, apart from that aspect, I really like this piece! The colours you've used are so pretty and compliment each other really well. Also, I like the fact that the clouds are so blue - it's slightly abstract and interesting!

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InternetAddiction [2015-02-23 02:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Dude, I'm really loving the blends of the color, hhhhh!!

This is my opinion on the art uvu!! 
>Your character's right hand thumb is off oAo?
>LOL, the little hair that's sticking out isn't even attached to the head. 
>I found the background flower on the right awkward since I'm assuming the wind is blowing to the left??
>Oh the clouds are extremely blue too LOL
>The dress is a little unusual since the wind is blowing to the left ish and the dress itself is shaping the legs.

omg, I'm not clear enough of where the wind is blowing. Sorry orz" jhxcgduysHGDUYSaus

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