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Skeet [2004-09-05 23:00:57 +0000 UTC]

ok, constructive feedback:

my favorate thing about thsi piece is the text at the bottom and the three blue strips, getting the txt right is something always struggle with and this looks classy, and fits the theme of the piece nicely. The robot/figure looks a bit stark, naked, boring, dead compared to all the light blurs and effects on the canvus, I think one looks to crisp and a photo and the rest looks very manufactured and effects. An idea to blend the two better might be to blurr, or add some sort of effects to the photo, just an idea.

I could be wrong, im no master at it myself but thats my opinion

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ArtFreak55 [2004-08-23 23:00:35 +0000 UTC]

i don't think the light at the top is too distracting, but i don't think it looks like an explosion...if you take out the two vertical "bracket" thingies on the right and left side, and replace them with more horizontal-like likes, i think it would seem to radiate out better and read more as an explosion, right now it more reminds me of an abstracted lens flare...and i didn't even know that was a beam of light until i read your comments...it first struck me as a string or something to hang the figure from...i think if you thickened it up a little, and maybe fuzzed out and put just a hint of a color cast, it wouldn't read like it's a string, or like it's coming out of the explosion...sorry to critique so much, but you wanted help..so here it is, otherwise, you have a really good, original idea going here...props to you for creativity...with a little tweaking..this could be awesome!!!...keep up the good work.

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sargeras [2004-08-23 06:48:31 +0000 UTC]

sweet, this new version looks great. i actually like the new elements though, i think they fit with the theme.

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sandervandenberg [2004-08-22 14:17:38 +0000 UTC]

I think those...spots (whatever you call them) are a bit too distracting. I'm not sure how to fix that...but I like the previous one better.

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robotuna [2004-08-22 02:25:25 +0000 UTC]

I think the bottom is better, but the nice glow on the was better in the previous version. It's just to cluttered on the top. Other than that I think it's decent. Simple and clean.

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