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Published: 2009-09-27 23:33:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1387; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 9
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Description I didnt know what to call this...

holy crap, my pc slowed down so much becuase of this.


I wanted to make another project before school started. so i made this. Before this, i studied some concepts for coloring and shading. and im happy with it. :3
so i used that to my advantage and created this.
and it was fun >:3333

photoshop 7

i want that hoodie >:C

EDIT: added extra stuff and changed size
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Comments: 9

Atimist [2009-09-30 04:04:40 +0000 UTC]

You draw the most amazing clothes... Gawd, wonderful job here... it looks so smooth and at the same time, edges with attitude
Nicely done sir!

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MachinesBleedToo [2009-09-29 02:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Heyy, thanks for dropping by and asking for me to give you a critique- it always makes me happy when I see artists that are enthusiastic about improving. x3

I like your style, it's an interesting take on anthro. I really love how you've coloured the eyes and the shading is ace- it's good to see you're using colours in your shadows and highlights, not just black and white. You got the right idea with the clothes folds too, I like the ones in the pants a lot.

The major issues come from anatomy, though. It's hard to draw a figure under such baggy clothes- if you don't already do it I suggest drawing the frame of the character first, and then the clothes so it...sits right, on their figure.

Here, there seems to be a lack of shoulders- even with a hoodie, they should be broader. Also with the arms, the elbows should align with the bottom of the ribcage.

In order to give the perspective effect you're going for I would suggest that the leg closest to the viewer be moved to the right more, so it's not on such an unnatural angle. The thigh of that leg looks flat and the knee bends strangely; in this view, the thigh would be shorter due to foreshortening, and more straight-on than angled.

As for the other leg- that extreme perspective doesn't really work unless the "camera" is more...well, above the character, so the top half would be under the same effect. Also the thigh is too long and too...broad, for it to be as far back as is suggested.

I suggest studying anatomy- using references, doodling people you see down the street. I know how much of a bore life drawing is but it's one of the best ways to improve on the anatomy front.

I'm very fond of the movement in this, too, actually; the way the hoodie strings are swaying, and the hair also. The action in the pose is suggested very well.

Excellent. I hope I was helpful!

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Kiqo7 [2009-09-28 23:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Wow much love for the style!! O3O Man, you've been improving so much! >D

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Azuris [2009-09-28 22:56:02 +0000 UTC]

There's one thing I really like about this picture, it's the style. It's something totally unusual and unique! All looks very consistent, making it look terribly awesome, and with no "odd spots". The prespective was well applied, and the detail on the clothing is very good!

I like

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DaXXe [2009-09-28 19:16:27 +0000 UTC]

I worship how yeh wrinkle stuffzzies! It's very detailed and nicely cell-shaded on every each part :]

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Renisu [2009-09-28 02:41:38 +0000 UTC]

"awsummm" agreed *nods head* really nice pic XD

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daikotoDwolv [2009-09-28 00:19:32 +0000 UTC]

you could call it "awesome"

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Dragnerz [2009-09-28 00:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Woah, great colors. Great shading. Great job! xD

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hat-man [2009-09-28 00:03:19 +0000 UTC]

great colors on this O:

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