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Tell me againHow it will be
When we'll sail together
Out there on the sea
Where we'll laugh
Where we'll cry
Where we'll live, and we'll die
But together we'll be
For all eternity
But tell me once more
Yes. . .please once again
How it will be
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Comments: 3
livingfiction [2004-03-15 05:02:17 +0000 UTC]
I like it. I'd change "how will it be" to "how it will be". I like the way it flows better, but good meter.
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