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"You look as if you're in trouble." A voice sounded from the reeds. Jayfeather jerked his head around and saw an orange face peering at him through the stalks."Flametail!" The ShadowClan cat was watching him coldly. "Help me! I'm drowning!"
Flametail took a step forward, then stopped, his eyes burning. "I know how you feel."
"Can you reach me?" Jayfeather strained to see the ground beneath him. Perhaps it was solid enough to take Flametail's weight.
"Why should I?" Flametail's mew was icy. "You didn't save me."
-The Last Hope, Pg. 181-182
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Comments: 210
XxLasthopehxX In reply to ??? [2014-06-21 03:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Throws tomatoes at Flametail. YOU STINK. Okay. *Favorites this picture and walks away.*
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ToxicKltty [2014-05-23 15:47:05 +0000 UTC]
wow imagine if u died in a mud hole in starclan? that would be like if u dies in heaven
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n3v3ahbl00m [2014-05-21 22:33:25 +0000 UTC]
Well,it WASN'T Jayfeather's time to die...he had a great destiny.Rock was right...to an extent.
I haven't read The Last Hope yet,so...
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WildberryCP [2014-02-01 07:17:11 +0000 UTC]
Well it wasn't all Jayfeather's fault that Flametail died. Rock actually didn't help. But really, Erin Hunter? Tawnypelt's kit? Die?
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VioletTheUnicorn78 [2013-12-11 00:49:25 +0000 UTC]
If Jayfeather was killed, i would have riped the book apart and cry
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Wolfcat47 [2013-11-15 16:35:16 +0000 UTC]
Jay- SAVE MEH STUPID!!!!
Flame- you didn't save me....
Jay- JUST SAVE ME ;(
Flame- ............
Jay- YOU BUTT!!!
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Kawaiikiwibird [2013-11-05 23:26:13 +0000 UTC]
no jayfeather i did not read this book what happend to jayfeather
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CascadingSerenity In reply to Kawaiikiwibird [2013-11-05 23:30:59 +0000 UTC]
He fell into mud and couldn't get out.
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SCARLETREMIX In reply to CascadingSerenity [2013-11-07 00:33:52 +0000 UTC]
IS HE ALIVE??!?!?
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hghhtrjhtrhtr In reply to ??? [2013-10-26 19:08:52 +0000 UTC]
flame tries ot save him rock: no no do not save him i need him to die so he cant save you from a horrid thing JUST THE SOME I DID TO YOU flametail: wait what rock: nothing
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mapleheartchained [2013-10-13 13:41:05 +0000 UTC]
poor flametail. its kinda rock's fault....
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Cat3o4 In reply to ??? [2013-09-14 02:07:44 +0000 UTC]
i didn't remember that part. OMAGAWD I GOTTA READ THAT BOOK AGAIN.
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JungleTail [2013-08-02 17:14:05 +0000 UTC]
I want to play in teh mud with him D: you lucky @$3)&"!!!!
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AllyTheMawtail In reply to ??? [2013-08-01 00:24:36 +0000 UTC]
Jayfeather's like, "HELP ME DAMN IT!!!" And Flametail's like, "You didn't save me and plus, It's too farrrr.... ;n;"
Heh. Excuse my language please.
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LilboBaggins [2013-07-26 03:55:29 +0000 UTC]
Flametail, stop being a butt and save the Jayfeather.
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rocksliide [2013-07-16 11:35:04 +0000 UTC]
Flametail, I dare you to come back to life and then go to Jayfeather. He'll slaughter yo face. >:c
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0o-Ask-Jayfeather-o0 In reply to ??? [2013-07-15 01:55:58 +0000 UTC]
ene That's what I have against Flaimtail.
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XxDoomedSoulsXx In reply to ??? [2013-07-06 17:27:44 +0000 UTC]
Flametail. I have nothing against him, I lovez him, and the same with Jayfeather. it WAS A ROCK. AN EVIL ROCK KILLED HIM
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Mistykittyartist829 In reply to ??? [2013-06-29 01:14:56 +0000 UTC]
dang, how do people draw so flippin good? THIS IS AWESOME
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CascadingSerenity In reply to Mistykittyartist829 [2013-06-29 01:21:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! <3
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Starfox-pokemon [2013-06-28 20:51:05 +0000 UTC]
Why is everyone hating on Flametail? I know the oh-so-amazing and not very grumpy Jay-Jay was in trouble, but quite frankly, if you were dying and someone COULD Help you didn't purposely didn't, you be just a tiny bit annoyed, no? At the very least, he could be able to let Jayfeather suffer for a second, THEN help?
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Hyperbreeze In reply to Starfox-pokemon [2013-08-04 19:39:41 +0000 UTC]
Jayfeather tried to help him, but starclan said it was Flametails time to die. Jayfeather didn't want to let go but he had to. Jayfeather didn't let him die starclan made him let flametail die.
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Romeh96 [2013-06-27 05:36:39 +0000 UTC]
IT WAS YOUR TIME TO DIE, NOT HIS! THATS WHY HE DIDNT SAVE YOU, FLAMETAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Winterfur123 In reply to Romeh96 [2013-06-29 16:41:13 +0000 UTC]
*Slaps*THIS WAS ROCK'S FAULT.
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warriorjayfrost [2013-06-23 19:21:01 +0000 UTC]
it wasnt jayfeathers fault. if he kept swimming after flametail he would have drowned too. jayfeather was also part of a prophecy so he couldnt die yet
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stormfire87 In reply to ??? [2013-06-19 19:14:38 +0000 UTC]
I can't believe Flametail did that to Jayfeather. If I remember correctly, at Flametail's death, he was all accepting of what was happening, saying "Don't fight it Jayfeather" and "It's so calm and peaceful." Then he goes and acts like a butt to Jayfeather. Seriously Flametail? T__T
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LittleRedisDead In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 23:17:15 +0000 UTC]
I read the part where Flametail died I kept reading and rereading like "What? No! This can't be happening!"
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ExiledAbsol [2013-06-15 00:43:36 +0000 UTC]
I have a request to make:
DRAW MORE POT LEAF MAPLESHADE!!!
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CascadingSerenity In reply to ExiledAbsol [2013-06-15 01:10:12 +0000 UTC]
i don't do requests.
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