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Published: 2012-04-07 21:05:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 25059; Favourites: 483; Downloads: 64
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Left to Right: Fireheart(star), Cloudkit(tail), Princess.
All characters belong to Erin Hunter.
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why dont you like her i do
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I love this <3.
Princess look like Honeyfern in my picture
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OMG CLOUDKIT IS SOOOOO CUTE!!!! I KNEW HE'D MAKE A GREAT CHARACTER!
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Thanks. ^^
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I just finished Fire and Ice and Cloudkit is so cute!
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what was cloudkit's kittypet name??
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Cloud. Princess said his name was Cloud but the clan re-named him CloudKit when he was taken, who knows XD
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They never said. xD
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ooh i see.. haha it might have been an interesting on though i bet
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Princess looks like one of the prettiest she cats in the world.
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In this picture, but in the book, she sounds a little under average.
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Okay, so this is nearly perfect. I think that Cloudkit(tail)βs eyes should be shut, since he was so young. He is also a little big. As a slightly-older-than-newborn, he should be much smaller.
Next- I find Fireheart(star)βs ears a bit big. Try making them a tiny bit smaller. His muzzleβs a bit pointy, but other than that? Perfect-o!
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I made Cloudkit's eyes open because it made him look more adorable. Cx
If you pretend that Cloudkit was on the ground beside Princess, he'll look pretty small.
The ears...? If you compare them to Princess's, they're the same size...unless Princess's ears are too big as well. xD
I always make my muzzles somewhat pointy...I guess it's just my style.
Anyways, thanks for the critique! I'll keep the things you pointed out in mind. c:
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All right, I understand
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Nawww.
Cloudkit's just like, 'What's going on?'
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Hehe, yes. cx
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He's adorable.
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I expected it like Roger from American Dad.
Princess: Take him, Fireheart!
Fireheart: Thank you, umm *puts Cloudkit in the bin* no...
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I've practiced. cx
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