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Published: 2011-09-17 23:13:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 24318; Favourites: 223; Downloads: 95
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REMAKE : Try and hit me, Jayfeather!Breezepelt's attacking Jayfeather D:
Left to right: Brokenstar, Breezepelt, Jayfeather and Honeyfern.
I had no more room for Poppyfrost. :C
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Arkstar stared at the cat she had come so far to kill. Arkstar's ginger fur pricked as he rose his nose and opened his mouth. He turned to Arkstar and snarled. Arkstar lunged at the cat and pushed him in the lake. He yowled at the force that knocked him to where it was deep. He hit the water with a splash, and his legs thrashed underwater, until he eventually gave up and fell still as the water's grip brought him to the Dark Forest. Arkstar snarled, "One less traitor in the forest." Her claws twitched, glad that she had killed without any blood being shed...
But when she turned around, she saw the same cat behind her, grinning insanely...
"HElLo arksTar..."
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AND THE GHOST FALCON PUNCHED ARKSTAR INTO A 90 DEGREE ANGLE WHERE SHE COULD LICK SALT DEPOSITS OFF CLIFFS
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Wait what!? You would hit your half brother just because your father choose him over you?! It's not HIS fault! It's your father! And Breeze was a complete jerk. Crow loved him,but he was like Spottedleaf and Firestar. They know they can't be together,but they still love each other. CrowxLeaf = FirexSpotted. Breeze should be happy to have siblings,unlike most cats like Tallstar,Tigerstar,Whitestorm,and Brokenstar. Only two of those cats turn evil,and the other two were good guys....I lost my self.....
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"Nightcloud was older than Crowfeather and was starting to be concerned she would never have the chance to bear kits, so when Crowfeather invited her to be his mate, she accepted with a sincere belief she could make the tomcat fall in love with her. However, she soon realized he only did so to be Loyal to WindClan. She is stubborn, short tempered and defensive, so she stuck by Crowfeather's side even though she didn't respect him or liked him all that much, but she truly loved Breezepelt with a ferocity that came from anger because Crowfeather didn't love him equally. Nightcloud coddled her son, making him believe he was better than everyone else, her bitterness for Crowfeather tainted Breezepelt with its poison, but its hard to blame her when Crowfeather put her in such a difficult position. Breezepelt could have been great, but thanks to BOTH his parents, he became arrogant and angry towards his father, that ultimately lead him to join the Dark Forest cats in order to get revenge on everyone that made his life difficult"
- The Ultimate Guide
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BREEZPELT IS A SUCKER
Willowstripe(my OC)
Breeze:k
Willow
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Don't go crazy cause I died (Which I didn't)
I only got blinded from that swipe and i killed him :/
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1. Jayfeather was already blind
2. Breezepelt is still alive as of Shattered Sky
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Well, If I Had a Half Brother That My Father would Prefer Over Me I'd Do That >.<
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breezepelt.....do not touch da medicine cat
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Im NOT a medicine cat D:
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yeah u are
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Uh yeah yeah i uh i knew that -walks away awkwardly- O3O i haz done nothing
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I know what you're thinking about...
thats CINDERPELT she looks like me :/
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Someone push him into that Moonpool and Drown him!!
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He drowned he drowned.... dont worry i pushed him he did..
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Breezepelt is a total butthead in this book. >.
just read this part in the book o.o I hate breezepelt even more now!
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Ahhuh... *Loves Breezepelt* Ish okay.. you only wanted love *Huggles breezepelt*
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He slapped Jay... I only liked him when he was going to the tribe of rushing water and then I kinda felt bad for him on the last hope...
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Same, but he ish mer litter burdy *Huggles Breezepelt and gets clawed in the face* So cute!
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Brokenstar: Bitch, slap him... BITCH, SLAP HIM GOOD!!!
Breezepelt: YES, MASTER!!!
Jayfeather: WTF DID I EVER DO TO YOU???
Honeyfern: DAMMIT!!! StarClan couldn't do anything... then again, we never do...
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i loved this scene . ;n;
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Durr...can't remember what book this was in...
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The Fourth Apprentice, I think.
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It's fine. xD
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It kinda looks like Breezepelt is going to start swinging his arms back and forth..... D8 I'm gonna have bad dreams tonight of Breezepelt doing that...
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I made a new account, gotta subscribe again! X3
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