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This is my entry for my own contest about Couples & Duos !!! 8D I'm gonna let myself win hahahahaha.

Just kidding of course.
I can't join my own contest boohoo.


Changed the file to a cropped version. Like it much better this way!

~Nic




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.:Short story:.

"Mel..."

The tall guy didn't know how to finish his sentence. A few strands of his ebony hair covered his shoulder. The puzzled look in his eyes didn't tell any good either as his voice started to shiver.

"Melody... I can't do this no more. I mean-"
As soon as he noticed a tear fell down from his eye, he moved his face away. She didn't notice.

Melody, who was standing next to him, stared in front of her. Despite of the fact that she did know what he was trying to tell her, she didn't want to hear it.

"Please don't say it" she said, her gaze now aimed at his face. "I don't want to know. You're all live for. Don't make it end. Not tonight..."

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.:Explanation:.

My original character Melody with the one she loved the most: Dagen.

He's made of darkness, the opposite of Melody.
His age is unknown.

Dagen is an irish name and means 'black-haired'.



I wanted to draw the moment when Melody lost her voice. Sadly she had to let go her love for unknown reasons. He knew why, but couldn't bare to tell what it was.

He gave her a last kiss before he heard her heart breaking and fainted in his arms.
Ever since that moment she has lost hear healing voice and hearing. She hasn't seen him after that particular day/night.

Will she find him again?

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.:Characters & info:.

My other original characters so far:
Nora
Melody
Gaea


Reference used: Love Stock by ~Kaalvoet-Stock .


Stuff used:
  • 4H, 2H, H, HB, B, 2B, 3B 0.5mm mechanical pencils

  • 2 tissues and tortillions for blending

  • regular and kneaded eraser

  • reference image: Love Stock

  • HahnemΓΌhle sketchbook paper

  • imagination

  • Time spent: 2,5 days
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    Comments: 575

    Kbskantingirl [2009-07-04 21:10:29 +0000 UTC]

    that was so sweet. When i saw it my heart clenched. I love this and hope to be able to do that some day...
    right now ive been in a sort of drawers block (last year i did some anime and it sort of killed my drawing skills... now im back to traditional stuff but its just missing something...) do u have any tips?

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    camilah [2009-07-04 21:08:54 +0000 UTC]

    This is a really beautiful drawing

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    Bella-Dean [2009-07-04 20:41:57 +0000 UTC]

    They do look like such opposites, it's really fantastic. Great picture.

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    AloraKitten [2009-07-04 20:33:57 +0000 UTC]

    Awesome, always love seeing your OC's! And I like the stories that go with them....if you ever publish a book, let us know!! Haha.....but seriously. Can't wait to see more from you (as always).

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    TurquoiseMonkey [2009-07-04 19:41:01 +0000 UTC]

    Aww, their story is so sad This is a lovely picture.

    He looks like Axel

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    Aracely [2009-07-04 19:22:11 +0000 UTC]

    That's so sad that he had to go. I can see how great their love is by the way you drew them. I do hope you have Melody find her love.

    P.S. Eventhough you can't enter your own contest, I'd vote for you!

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    crazym0nk [2009-07-04 19:19:58 +0000 UTC]

    Always loved the O/C, I hope more then anything your ok Nic.


    --
    Why is it when some vital information about the person you care about is required you have no way to obtain it. Nothing more painful then feeling hopeless.

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    freakyfan3754 [2009-07-04 17:49:38 +0000 UTC]

    Aw, sad story...I love the hair though lol.

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    Sharingan--Uchiha [2009-07-04 17:43:19 +0000 UTC]

    GAHH SO SAD!! TAT;; πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

    suicune94 [2009-07-04 17:29:35 +0000 UTC]

    Sooo beautiful picture!

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    Unmeimiru [2009-07-04 17:25:43 +0000 UTC]

    ur skillz r so amaz'n!

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    xidarkchyldexi In reply to ??? [2009-07-04 17:25:28 +0000 UTC]

    I really do love your style! I am so drawn to the warmth that is infused within it.

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to xidarkchyldexi [2009-07-04 17:55:04 +0000 UTC]

    thank you so much!

    long time no talk by the way (: how are things going on your side?

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    xidarkchyldexi In reply to Cataclysm-X [2009-07-05 03:47:27 +0000 UTC]

    I know, I kinda dropped off the face of the planet, eh? Things are going well enough. I just discovered a new place that I would love to live, but getting there is going to prove to be a challenge. Mostly, because my husband is kind of rooted here in CA. So, I'm not sure how we're going to manage this, but that's the biggest thing that's been going on. How about you? You seem to be hustlin' and bustlin' with your artwork these days.

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    MGZolyn In reply to ??? [2009-07-04 17:22:49 +0000 UTC]

    LOVE this!

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    noobzero In reply to ??? [2009-07-04 17:22:11 +0000 UTC]

    great !. will try.

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to noobzero [2009-07-04 17:39:11 +0000 UTC]

    will try what?

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    noobzero In reply to Cataclysm-X [2009-07-05 00:42:45 +0000 UTC]

    I mean the contest or you have something to do, to join the contest ?.

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to noobzero [2009-07-05 13:08:04 +0000 UTC]

    I'm afraid I don't understand

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    noobzero In reply to Cataclysm-X [2009-07-06 07:09:51 +0000 UTC]

    lol OK didn't you make a contest where anyone have to draw the best couple picture or something like that and you posted so your friends will summit their stuff? and join the contest. I should explain my self better in the first place I apologize for that. hope you have understand it now lol ^__^

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to noobzero [2009-07-06 12:16:09 +0000 UTC]

    oh yes, yeah you're right

    sometimes I get a bit confused. I get so many messages everyday, it's hard to keep them apart sometimes! (:

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    noobzero In reply to Cataclysm-X [2009-07-06 20:43:03 +0000 UTC]

    so I can participate in the contest ?.. or there is any requirements?..

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to noobzero [2009-07-06 21:33:24 +0000 UTC]

    well if you check the rules at my news article you'll be fine (;

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    noobzero In reply to Cataclysm-X [2009-07-11 06:54:34 +0000 UTC]

    I already did thanks.

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    YUMEchan357 [2009-07-04 17:20:42 +0000 UTC]

    the guy... he reminds me of zack :'(

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to YUMEchan357 [2009-07-04 17:39:39 +0000 UTC]

    lol yeah I know, I was working on that Zack drawing at the same time (still not finished by the way )

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    Blacksheep5555 In reply to ??? [2009-07-04 17:18:23 +0000 UTC]

    Great Couple Drawing !

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    No-2B [2009-07-04 17:08:10 +0000 UTC]

    Thats really... sad!

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    fireonice1292 [2009-07-04 17:04:07 +0000 UTC]

    his hair is amazing....i want to touch it

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    Dagger-13 In reply to ??? [2009-07-04 17:01:18 +0000 UTC]

    This is lovely I really like this, but I love the background/surrounding glow - nice

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    Noe-LIA-m [2009-07-04 16:50:20 +0000 UTC]

    Perfect hair and perfect shading, as USUAL.
    I won't dare to join your contest BWAHAHHAA!

    Very sweet though, I like it!

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    girlxwithxtalent [2009-07-04 16:48:06 +0000 UTC]

    wow it's amazing!!! and I love the story behind it^^

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    TerrorTyrant In reply to ??? [2009-07-04 16:46:30 +0000 UTC]

    This is really beautiful!

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    KoniraThax In reply to ??? [2009-07-04 16:44:42 +0000 UTC]

    I like that guys hair. O_o It's amazingly serrated.

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    Evanescenceheart In reply to ??? [2009-07-04 16:35:36 +0000 UTC]

    Freakin cheater.

    lol Just kidding, this looks really cool, I love the expressins on their faces.

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to Evanescenceheart [2009-07-04 17:48:29 +0000 UTC]

    my contest, my rules!

    ( but in fact I reposted this to promote my contest!)

    thanks

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    Evanescenceheart In reply to Cataclysm-X [2009-07-04 18:30:13 +0000 UTC]

    Ah that is very clever of you lol

    You're quite welcome

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    Evanescenceheart In reply to Evanescenceheart [2009-07-04 16:35:55 +0000 UTC]

    Expressions*

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    Hodzi [2009-07-04 16:30:18 +0000 UTC]

    this is very NICE very great job

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    iloveargento In reply to ??? [2009-07-04 16:28:09 +0000 UTC]

    I always adore seeing your OCs. <3 This image is so soft...and I love the light around Dagen. So sad but so good. I'm excited to hear the stories behind these two. You always pack your images full of emotion, and to hear that there is a rich history behind that emotion is exciting!

    To be silly: BAD CATACLYSM! No contest for you! *taps your nose* Your art is too awesome, you would win your own contest and we would all cry!!! XD

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to iloveargento [2009-07-04 17:50:41 +0000 UTC]

    Thank you so much!!!

    LOL well I'm the only person on deviantart who can't join the contest, so pity me instead!

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    iloveargento In reply to Cataclysm-X [2009-07-04 18:18:28 +0000 UTC]

    Aw! But I bet all the gorgeous entries will make you smile!

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to iloveargento [2009-07-05 13:08:29 +0000 UTC]

    they do!

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    EatToast [2009-07-04 16:22:40 +0000 UTC]

    cheating! you submitted this way ahead of time! it's like you knew this contest was coming.....=__=...



    just kidding.

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to EatToast [2009-07-04 17:54:37 +0000 UTC]

    Yes! Maybe I'm psychic who can tell!

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    toniart57 In reply to ??? [2009-07-04 16:20:53 +0000 UTC]

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    Natizilda In reply to ??? [2009-07-04 16:19:52 +0000 UTC]

    By the way, you should search for a song:

    One Last Cry - Marina Elali.

    Or Mariana Elali, I don't remember now... But you should pay attention to the lyric

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    JurgenDoe [2009-07-04 16:17:30 +0000 UTC]

    this is absolutely wonderful and amazing

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    Cataclysm-X In reply to JurgenDoe [2009-07-04 17:51:30 +0000 UTC]

    thanks JΓΌrgen

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    JurgenDoe In reply to Cataclysm-X [2009-07-04 21:07:18 +0000 UTC]

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