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Hyroglyphic [2013-03-29 18:19:58 +0000 UTC]

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Hey, well done portrait i really like how you captured the essence of this actor e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>. The photo quality as you mentioned could be better and im sure it'll do some more justice for this beast e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/>.

The only things that i noticed straight out was the shading and a little with the placement of things. For the shading, the cast shadow made by his hair i feel should be a little darker, also maybe a little more contrast of shades going near the band on the face. You want to band to kind of fade in.

Now for the placement of things , if you were to draw a line straight down from his head between his eyes - nose - mouth - to the chin you'll notice the mouth and the chin are a little offset. Which could be a case of the photo you were using for ref led you to do that but typically a smirk like that wouldn't require someone to move their jaw.

Also the left nostril ( his right e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/> ) is a little higher than the one on the left. I feel like the one on our right ( his left e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/> ) would be the one with a slight bit more height because of his facial muscles tugging on the nose .

Lastly the left collar ( his right ) doesn't quite seem to wrap around his neck.

Hope any if some of that helps e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/> . please feel free to critique my stuff anytime.

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