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It was a beautiful night In the Corona Kingdom. The Princess Moonlight Shimer was looking through the window, Her new student from Equestria was about to arrive. She walked away to his brother's room to wake him up, since he was resting from work. When she knocked and opened the door, she saw Midnight sleeping in his bed."midnight!" she said kinda annoyed "We have to meet our new visitant from equestria!"
The grey alicorn hugged one of the pillows, making noises.
"come on, sleepyhead, He might be about to arrive" she smiled and walked away yo the entrance of the castle.
minutes later, Midnight went out of his room and walked over the princess with messy mane and not too prepared.
"Mid, we have to look alright for our guest...!"
The stallion whispered something that Moony couldn't understant, but in that instant the guards opened the gates, and an orange unicorn entered.
He seemed really exited and nervous, but when he saw the princess and the prince, he couldn't help but smile. The stallion trotted over them and bowed down "Princess Moonlight Shimmer, Prince Midnight Shadow, It's a pleasure to meet you!".
The alicorn mare smiled proudly "same goes to you! You might be Starburst, right?"
Starburst was smiling even more "y-yes! haha! I can't believe I'm going to be your student!"
Midnight looked away , Moony thought that he was kinda disappointed for not having any student.
"Oh... yeah, me too! It's the first time I have one from so far away!" She smiled at him "I'm really glad the princesses from equestria contacted us"
"well, I wanted to ask you something else... I actually have a friend In equestria who would like to come too and be your student, Midnight..." He looked at the male alicorn, who was looking at him surprised "Would you like to be his teacher? well, uhm, If you want, of course."
Midnight smiled widely and nooded with energy "Yes! of course, I'd love too!"
Moonlight smiled at his brother, he hasn't seen him that happy since a lot of time, getting an student would be a good way of distracting his mind.
This drawing is horrible
my english is horrible
everything is horrible, rfehuweoufrxhnwe8rhfxom
I didn't even whanted to finish this drawing (shading and adding details) because I thought that I would loose my time qvqvqvq
but yeh, that's life
so, you remember these children?
Featherflash will not be Mid's student, I will create a new one
I just don't like the idea, I'm sorry ;;
The new student will be either luna's or celestia's children
I dunno yet, my babies.
what do you think?
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I really like what you did with the perspectives of the background and it really captures the emotions. You can see the obvious nervousness of Sunburst, the grumpiness of Prince Midnight Shadow, and the happiness of Princess Moonlight Shimmer.
Some things I'd say you could work on includes more varied posing, facial expressions, and perhaps some shading. To me the posing is very stiff in this. The two rulers, it makes sense, but for one who is bowing it seems more of a light bow. One of a more informal nature if you ask me. Perhaps more bent front legs might help with it? As for the two rulers I'd say it fits their position. Also don't be afraid to try out some new perspectives. For example maybe you could have more of a booty angle of the bowing Sunburst and more front angles of the royals looking down nicely upon their new Equestrian guest.
As far as expressions go, don't be afraid to go more... Extreme? (for lack of a better description) Feel free to play with eyebrow movements and more opened/closed eyes? I know eyes can make a big difference with as much as a small narrowing in one part. Also some more facial angles and different smiles might help a lot too. Plus maybe some bigger irises and pupils? idk something to me seems off about the princess. Her eyes make her almost give her a manic look? Perhaps I'm just too used to not seeing as much shading in an eyeball e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
I think I said this in one of my previous critiques of your work, but don't be afraid of going more extreme in shading! it really brings a new pop to an image and brings it into a whole new dimension of... Awesomeness!
Hope this helps at least a little bit e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
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Actually, I thought the drawing was pretty good. The only thing I can think of that would've improved it is maybe redoing the eyes; Moonlight's eyes are kind of narrow and her pupils so small that she seems kind of...well, hostile.
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