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Published: 2011-03-20 01:01:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 47145; Favourites: 1539; Downloads: 1282
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Description AAHHH NQN DID A COMIC

I need to practice comicking though, so... This.

BECAUSE THIS: [link]

Once you defeat the Elite Four in Black and White, you meet Looker and the similarities are uncanny. So. I HAD TO 8D

I'm playing through White with Rodney, haaa. I used Finch in SoulSilver, so it was only fair. :I

Criticism is highly encouraged! I'm pretty new to this whole comic thing and I want to get better, so SOCK IT TO ME.


Rodney © me
Doctor Who © BBC
Pokemon © Nintendo/Game Freak
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Comments: 282

badgwolf In reply to ??? [2011-03-24 09:21:25 +0000 UTC]

This is just...I lack the words
*fangirl awaaaaay*

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CrazyRedhairWhovian In reply to ??? [2011-03-24 09:15:54 +0000 UTC]

ITS A CONSPIRACY!!!

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thenextdoctor42 In reply to ??? [2011-03-24 02:39:11 +0000 UTC]

so, so true... especially how Looker/Doctor always seems to show up at exactly the right time when you capture the sages... OMG MUST GO FIND TARDIS IN MY GAME!!!

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LadyLunaTheLunatic In reply to ??? [2011-03-24 02:31:50 +0000 UTC]

*clicks link out of confusion* ..................... OMG YOUR RIGHT!

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RikuMurasaki In reply to ??? [2011-03-24 00:42:03 +0000 UTC]

XD YES!

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CountingMyStars In reply to ??? [2011-03-23 23:55:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm not a big fan of Pokemon, but this is great, haha.

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Queen-Obsessed In reply to ??? [2011-03-23 22:50:52 +0000 UTC]

This is love! And then I went and looked at the link, and was just like "wow. That's... wow." It fits, and not only does it fit, but it's really almost scary how it fits. But as I said, much love. It made me laugh.

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wolfstare5 In reply to ??? [2011-03-23 21:34:20 +0000 UTC]

I LITERALLY JUST SAW SOMETHING ABOUT THIS YESTERDAY.
I am incredibly scared now. D:

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waii-neko-shojo In reply to ??? [2011-03-23 21:31:33 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha this is great. Especially the "WOT" panel. I like the balance between the 10th Doctor's design and the pokemon character.

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Sonikku0691 [2011-03-23 21:16:40 +0000 UTC]

xDD omg that's so true Cx

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DoubleKatanaSayuri In reply to ??? [2011-03-23 20:15:13 +0000 UTC]



For the epic win my friend...cherish it always lol

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cgratzlaff In reply to DoubleKatanaSayuri [2011-03-23 20:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Aww sweet, I shall try to use it wisely~

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DoubleKatanaSayuri In reply to cgratzlaff [2011-03-24 16:33:19 +0000 UTC]

yes, you must!

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reapergeek [2011-03-23 19:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Now I'll never be able to see this guy as anything else. *falcepalm* Seriously though, much love for this comic. Made my day. ^_^

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chantal-l In reply to ??? [2011-03-23 17:15:40 +0000 UTC]

Haha this is great! It's funny and very well done. I love it. c:

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EliteMuse In reply to ??? [2011-03-23 17:10:33 +0000 UTC]

X3
Awesome~

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KaiserFlames [2011-03-23 16:15:20 +0000 UTC]

UNCANNY INDEED. D:

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zombiefruits [2011-03-23 02:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Haha, this is very cute.

WHO TOLD YOU OF THE TARDIS

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cgratzlaff In reply to zombiefruits [2011-03-23 20:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha :D

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TinaCaper [2011-03-23 01:26:50 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Ridel In reply to ??? [2011-03-23 00:46:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear goodness. Do you know how many times I've found myself re-reading this comic since I faved it a few days ago?

A lot of times.

Even though I have not as yet played this particular brand of Pokemon, (Haven't bought a new one since fire red. And the one I had before that was yellow. ;;>.> ) I still can't help loving this and laughing Every. Dang. Time.

I hereby you.

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cgratzlaff In reply to Ridel [2011-03-23 00:59:00 +0000 UTC]

akasldhkh aww I'm glad you like it that much, haha :D

lol I didn't get a new Pokemon game until I got SoulSilver and a DS as a grad gift last year. X) Before that I hadn't played it since Pokemon Red. 8D

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Ridel In reply to cgratzlaff [2011-03-25 01:46:08 +0000 UTC]

I really do. I dunno, I just... >w<

Lol! I think Fire red is the only version I've ever actually had in cartridge form.
The Yellow Blue and Red versions that I played (you know, way back when it was all so shiny and new) were just roms that my brother had somehow got to work on our computer. (Which was pretty dang old even in the late 90's)

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LordOfPastries [2011-03-22 04:46:00 +0000 UTC]

THE BEST CROSSOVER

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RedRodent [2011-03-21 03:22:31 +0000 UTC]

AAA! Spoilers! I'm not that far in the game! Still. AWESOME!

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Cryptid-Creations [2011-03-21 02:18:26 +0000 UTC]

I really love the way you've initiated the panels, they flow very well into one another. I honestly can't find anything to critique on, you've done a great job concerning the expressions as well. You should definitely make more comics!

Hehe, I find it really neat that you've used two of your NQN characters in your pokemon games xD

(You're so right, the Looker does bear a striking resemblance to Dr. Who xD)

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cgratzlaff In reply to Cryptid-Creations [2011-03-21 06:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

Haha using my own characters makes it more interesting to me. :I Even if it does just distract me from developing my regular NQN stories with things like how they would get to the Pokemon world and stuff. X) AUGH

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TherrinNinja In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 22:48:26 +0000 UTC]

Why yes, he is QUITE a looker!

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Flexico In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 21:09:25 +0000 UTC]

Also, you captured Ten perfectly. ^_^

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Flexico In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 21:08:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm a looker too! *wink*

*facepalm*

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CyberUnitItalia [2011-03-20 19:48:28 +0000 UTC]

lol O_o nice

xD

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Hitokiri-Shinzui [2011-03-20 19:00:56 +0000 UTC]

thats....freaking...WEIRD!!!! i love it, haha!!!

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doccy In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 16:54:24 +0000 UTC]

IM SO GLAD I WASN'T THE ONLY ONE THAT THOUGHT THIS.


well obviously your version rocks more socks tho

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flying-katana In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 11:48:08 +0000 UTC]

The similarities... THEY REALLY ARE UNCANNY, AREN'T THEY.

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Phoeline [2011-03-20 10:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww! Rodney's in White!! YEAH YEAH YEAH!

More comics plz? ^^

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sharded [2011-03-20 06:48:15 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha!!

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AnthroTsuneon In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 06:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Win

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artemisio In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 06:31:28 +0000 UTC]

ahaha <3 holy shit it's uncanny indeed!!!


ps: ...is the little guy baked or something.. ?:c

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cgratzlaff In reply to artemisio [2011-03-20 06:47:17 +0000 UTC]

Aahhh his eyes are just naturally ~dark and evil~ but... Yes, I guess he does look like that, ha. Fail XD

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Wheatart In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 06:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha, awesome! I love the dialogue flow!

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portheiusJ In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 06:01:27 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's kinda iffy, but I think it would help if your first panel was more of an establishing shot instead of a middle shot. This would give more of a context of the environment (but then again, for something like this, it's not really about the environment is it?). I do like the three panel shots of the emotional slide, if you will, but I don't think the second panel is needed, since the first and third would be enough to show the character is skeptical.
You may want to be more consistent with your word balloon shapes, there is one that isn't as rounded as the others and it kinda seems out of place. It's also a little odd to see "wot" not being in any form of balloon as well... Some panels could use a little more room for the words and images.
A little more polishing on your backgrounds could help it look a little more professional.
Some of your expressions could maybe be upped a little bit, but otherwise I think they are all good. A little bit of moving the camera around could make the comic a little more entertaining from a visual standpoint (but don't over-do that too!).
Certainly a good start though!

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cgratzlaff In reply to portheiusJ [2011-03-20 06:15:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the crits!

I kind of thought about having an establishing shot first too, but since this was about Looker looking a lot like the Doctor, I wanted to have a close up of that first, but I get that it might be a bit confusing as to who he's talking to right off the bat, which is why I put the establishing shot second. :I

I tried to move the camera around as much as I could without making it too over-dramatic... That's just a personal preference, I guess! I come from more of a storyboard/animation background so I don't like moving the camera unless there's an absolute story-telling need to.

Thanks again! I really appreciate it! :D

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portheiusJ In reply to cgratzlaff [2011-03-20 22:13:14 +0000 UTC]

No problem!
That does kinda make sense, so it could probably go either way.
Yup. Perfectly legitimate. :3

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julianwilbury In reply to cgratzlaff [2011-03-20 08:37:41 +0000 UTC]

I duuuuunno, it may have worked with the establishing shot first looking like "Hay look it's gonna be a Pokemans comic with the Looker" and THEN next panel be a close up and you go "hay waitaminute he looks kind of like...OH MAN HOW DID I NOT NOTICE THAT BEFORE?!"

*shrugs* Jus' me.

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cgratzlaff In reply to julianwilbury [2011-03-20 17:13:19 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh yeaaahh, I guess you're right. That didn't even cross my mind! That would have been better ;_;

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Maiden-Chynna In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 04:44:04 +0000 UTC]

That is so awesome it's scary!

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NatAsplund In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 04:07:22 +0000 UTC]

see.... THIS is why you need to do comics! Its looks amazing!!!!!
one thing... thats just a personal preference not really a rule. when you do off screen characters i like to put an indent/chip thing cause when its just a circle sometimes you just assume its the same character continuing their talk. But i mean a lot of comic artist just do a circle without a knick in it, so it's nothing much.

I think you have a knack for comics.
yup!

did you use paint tool sai?
i need to try it out.... probably the one thing i don't like about my mac is the lack of graphic software available for it. :I

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cgratzlaff In reply to NatAsplund [2011-03-20 06:40:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeaaahhh, I was kind of wondering about what to do in that situation, so I might give that a try next time. I noticed it in your comics and thought it was pretty clever. x)

I used sai to sketch and do the lines, all the colours and bgs were done in Photoshop. :I I want to try doing one all in Photoshop though... As much as I like the way sai does lines, they end up being too thin to colour in a timely manner. X)

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NatAsplund In reply to cgratzlaff [2011-03-22 04:42:44 +0000 UTC]

yeah, i mean it totally works without, but sometimes in some situation it helps. Like if you are introducing a character off screen which you didnt know was there before, if someone just sees a word bubble then they don;t know what it is, but if it has a tick in it then its like oh, thats another character..


Its so tempting to get a pc just for the extra software.

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dawnriku In reply to ??? [2011-03-20 04:01:29 +0000 UTC]

i like this.. exspecially the part where i was able to read it in DT's voice.

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