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I'll make a comic that kind of shows how the Shadyhole actually works later, but for now there's this. :3This is so weird... I'm actually being... productive. I've got a bunch of short comic ideas lined up and the bigger stories are coming together... aaaa :D
Oohh boy time travel, you sure are fun to write about.
Also, as always, if there's anything you feel I could have done better comic-wise, feel free to point it out! It's not very likely that I'm going to go back and change this as it's mostly just a practise page, but anything you think that I should keep in mind for the future will help a lot! 8D
Finch, Shady and Krysty © to me!
To learn more about my characters/story, visit my website! [link]
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cgratzlaff In reply to ??? [2011-09-12 06:01:55 +0000 UTC]
oohh, good point! I guess I just wanted to break up the panel sizes a bit but you're right, that one might have been a bit much. X) Thanks!
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max7345 [2011-09-12 05:41:18 +0000 UTC]
Why not just call it a portal and be done with it? After all, it doesn't even look like a hole, it looks like a wall of energy that you can go through and end up somewhere else. So...why call it what it's not? Apart from it being hilarious with how potentially dirty it sounds. xD
Now that that's said, awesome work. ^_^ Very funny comic.
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cgratzlaff In reply to max7345 [2011-09-12 05:47:08 +0000 UTC]
Exactly right! It's actually kind of like the opposite of a hole. Not a wall, but a non-hole, ripped apart by negative energy to access the fourth dimension. It's just for the sake of having a name. 8D
Thanks!
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julianwilbury In reply to cgratzlaff [2011-09-12 07:40:15 +0000 UTC]
I accidentally read that as "Hawking name." Heeeheeeheeeee.
"I call it a Hawkinghole."
"HEY! YOU STOLE THAT! I found it first!"
Actually "Fryhole" trumps the rest of them on the potentially dirty factor...
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cgratzlaff In reply to julianwilbury [2011-09-12 16:22:20 +0000 UTC]
I call it a Hawking-chamber
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Stamps [2011-09-12 05:32:14 +0000 UTC]
That's just dripping with awesome sauce. The only suggestion I have comic-wise, which you may or may not care about changing, is I would recommend adding a question mark to Finch's line, "Why does it have to have the word hole in it?" That is my favorite line in the comic.
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cgratzlaff In reply to Stamps [2011-09-12 05:43:15 +0000 UTC]
Haha that was one of the things I debated over... Some things seem funnier to me without proper punctuation, I guess. D: I shall keep this in mind though. c:
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StevenRoy In reply to cgratzlaff [2011-09-13 00:03:52 +0000 UTC]
Punctuation in a comic page could be considered a depiction of emotion or inflection. At least that's what I think is going on here. I guess the question is: Which is more important here? Grammatical accuracy, or showing, for example, exactly how flatly Finch is "asking" his probably-rhetorical question?
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cgratzlaff In reply to StevenRoy [2011-09-13 00:17:36 +0000 UTC]
Oohhh thank you, you said it much better than I could. This, exactly. :D
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NatAsplund [2011-09-12 03:29:42 +0000 UTC]
wooooooaaaahhhh!so awesome!!! Shadyholes lol ("ew" LOL) omigosh you are so fantastic at comics!! Im super excited for more!
Shadys face haha
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Jakethecat [2011-09-12 03:26:57 +0000 UTC]
shadys face in the last three panels is just pure epic XD
great job!
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koukatsu [2011-09-12 02:10:18 +0000 UTC]
Shady's face in the second to last panel is so much win. Day is made. Love the comic hope to see more
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jamesgunner123 [2011-09-12 00:49:46 +0000 UTC]
....very funny strip here....the "Shadyhole" sounds like a kinky nightclub though....X3
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bingles [2011-09-12 00:38:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh man this looks exciting! Can't wait to see more!
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Oly-RRR [2011-09-12 00:09:44 +0000 UTC]
Face it, Finch, it's a hole. That's why it has to have that word it it.
Aw man, this is neat! I love your art, I love your story, and when those two are blended together in AN ACTUAL COMIC it's just fantastic for the lack of a better word! Can't wait for more!
And the poses and expressions and colors are so gooood! Aww yiss!
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cgratzlaff In reply to Oly-RRR [2011-09-12 03:02:00 +0000 UTC]
WELL TECHNICALLY, it's not so much a hole as... the opposite of a hole. Not a wall, but a non-hole. It's just a name though. d:
I'M REALLY GLAD YOU'RE LIKING THESE COMICS, really, it means so much haha <3
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Oly-RRR In reply to cgratzlaff [2011-09-12 15:50:44 +0000 UTC]
But it's like a tunnel or a passage, right? Which doesn't make it physically a hole but linguistically it's a hole the same a doorway would be. Unless I misunderstand it, I haven't read about wormholes for a while and I don't know how they work in your story. And yeah, it's just a name.
Anyway, looking forward to the next comic!
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cgratzlaff In reply to Oly-RRR [2011-09-12 16:50:09 +0000 UTC]
No you're right, you're not misunderstanding it! The Shadyhole is the name for the space itself, "inside" the hole. Because a hole implies that you would go through it to go into something (inside or outside), and when going into the Shadyhole, you pretty much just stay where you are, even though you went through it. Except now you're surrounded by visible time as well as space. 8D
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Oly-RRR In reply to cgratzlaff [2011-09-14 21:59:13 +0000 UTC]
Ah, now I totally get it! Neat!
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Flexico [2011-09-11 23:55:40 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome. I have been waiting for this stuff for like EVAR. Shady's faces are EPIC. I need to do more stuff with your chars! <3 Wait ... have I even done ANY NQN stuff since that old fanfic thing in '06? SHAME!
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cgratzlaff In reply to Flexico [2011-09-12 00:06:02 +0000 UTC]
HAHA OH YEAH, I had forgotten about that! :I Man, it sure has taken me long enough to get my butt in gear with these stories.
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SinLigereep [2011-09-11 23:54:54 +0000 UTC]
FFFF YES. I love this series of yours and have been waiting to see something new pop up :'D
I love the whole comic thing <3
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Falcolf In reply to ??? [2011-09-11 23:45:52 +0000 UTC]
Shady rocks, this was hilarious! MOAR!
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ticktockgo [2011-09-11 23:34:44 +0000 UTC]
D'AW. That is so precious!! Finch's complete lack of resistance to Shady's cutesy eyes is great.
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honeybreeze1 In reply to ??? [2011-09-11 23:33:27 +0000 UTC]
why does it have to have the word "hole" in it
Lol. So much.
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NoctusKerobian [2011-09-11 23:17:45 +0000 UTC]
I confess, I lol'ed. Big time. Esp. At Shady's Face.
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PepperJackCoyote In reply to ??? [2011-09-11 23:17:38 +0000 UTC]
Shady's face in panel 6. TOO CUTE! xD
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shapeshifter29 [2011-09-11 23:16:20 +0000 UTC]
Shady's face in the second to last panel: Hilarious and cute.
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Willow-Pendragon In reply to ??? [2011-09-11 23:14:32 +0000 UTC]
Aww this is cute! and cool!
I like how you do comic pages.
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