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Published: 2004-09-12 18:23:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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I decided it was time to break my fractal trend and resort to my true artistic talent {NOT}. Right now I'm working on a series about this wolf-like thing. Kind of how he grows up and the shit he goes through in life. This was going to be part of it but there were some things that just didn't fit well. Critique away and let me know how to fix it up so when I get around to rest they will look better.Related content
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Oh yeah, critique. Fisrtly, woves do not have manes. Secondly, I would give it better ears, and make it look more male, since from last night I gathered it was supposed to be. Lastly, the muzzle should be longer and more tapered in the ones where you want him to look more adult. As it is, he looks like a pup. (which I know you want in some of them)
I like your rocks.
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Firstly, the mane stays. I don't why but i like it. Secondly how do i fix the ears? what's really wrong with them anyway? and yeah, it's supposed to be male. i just didn't want to get TOO detailed. One the muzzle, yeah... on the other's where he's about dead it is.
And thanx on the rock. they are bloody hell to draw.
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I didn't mean male like that. The maleness and the ears fit in together. As it is, the ears look like little girly tufts of fur on top of his head. Set them farther back and make the sticky up triangles. It'll kill two birds with one stone.
As an afterthought, you should add more shading and contrast in the final versions.
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Ah. I will work on that for my final version then.
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I knew it! That was the entire point of using that emote.
Be gald I didn't use
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Ah Bryon, you are so funny.
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