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This is the final maquette before my exam final piece, this is the first piece I've made that has every aspect stemming from a message. With other pieces I usually illustrate an idea as I'm creating, however this is the first picture I've created that had a message from the beginning. In terms of my overall opinion for the final picture I'm proud but not satisfied, one massive drawback with chalk and charcoal is the size, as the size determines how much detail you can put into a canvas, and that was the issue issue I struggled with the most with this piece. In the end I wouldn't say I succeeded in any goal other than creating a picture I wanted to create.

My main influence came from Pink Floyd The Wall with the ideas of linearity and Society.

Personally I don't know whether I like or dislike this piece, I appreciate the ideas I've portrayed but the visual quality isn't as detailed as I initially planned, so please let me know your opinions below be as negative as you want.

Description
This is the final maquette before my exam final piece, this is the first piece I've made that has every aspect stemming from a message. With other pieces I usually illustrate an idea as I'm creating, however this is the first picture I've created that had a message from the beginning. In terms of my overall opinion for the final picture I'm proud but not satisfied, one massive drawback with chalk and charcoal is the size, as the size determines how much detail you can put into a canvas, and that was the issue issue I struggled with the most with this piece. In the end I wouldn't say I succeeded in any goal other than creating a picture I wanted to create.

My main influence came from Pink Floyd The Wall with the ideas of linearity and Society.

Personally I don't know whether I like or dislike this piece, I appreciate the ideas I've portrayed but the visual quality isn't as detailed as I initially planned, so please let me know your opinions below be as negative as you want.