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ChazieBaka — My Immortal chapter 3 [NSFW]

Published: 2009-08-29 16:42:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 31325; Favourites: 311; Downloads: 115
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Description Continued adaptation of the fanfic "My Immortal".
In case you're wondering, yes she's reading Twilight in the first panel (the chapter said "I read a depressing book while I waited for it to stop bleeding" so there you go...)
As much as I dislike their work, apologies to Benji and Joel Madden, Hilary Duff, and Marilyn Manson for this disgrace.

(also: Joel Madden is now seeing Nicole Richie. Sorry Ebony, he only likes preps!)

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[link] (First: Cover)

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Comments: 112

Autumn-Sacura [2011-01-04 14:06:34 +0000 UTC]

You know, your art is too good to illustrate this... fanfic ^__^ You need to lower the degree of your awesomeness somehow ^__^

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Suinaliath [2010-11-25 22:23:41 +0000 UTC]

LMAO @ the panel with Draco and Ebony all strung out.

After smoking so many drugs, I did wonder how they drove anywhere, or made any sort of words when they spoke.

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ChazieBaka In reply to Suinaliath [2010-11-28 21:44:39 +0000 UTC]

They're just goff that way. You just don't understand.

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MetroidMaster56 [2010-11-24 17:53:02 +0000 UTC]

You make Ebony look good, unfortunately it doesn't say much considering how bad the original is. So I guess that makes you some kind of art god you did a good job, and you even took out all the crappy grammatical errors.

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ChazieBaka In reply to MetroidMaster56 [2010-11-24 20:36:51 +0000 UTC]

No, I didn't take out any grammatical errors. I copied the text as it was (with a few outtakes here and there) but she had a beta reader for the first 16 chapters so there are fewer mistakes than in the following.

Thank you!

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MetroidMaster56 In reply to ChazieBaka [2010-11-25 04:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow, she didn't make many there.

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mcrvampire55 [2010-11-17 02:56:53 +0000 UTC]

The Forbidden Forest!
Dun dun dun!

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Keiitan In reply to ??? [2010-10-09 22:02:07 +0000 UTC]

Third of last panel- Draco's all like ! XD

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ChazieBaka In reply to Keiitan [2010-10-16 23:24:31 +0000 UTC]

Yup, that's one of those little easter egg jokes I like to slip in.

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itsonlynaomi [2010-09-03 00:01:14 +0000 UTC]

OMIGOSH shes reading twilight! xDDDDD

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ChazieBaka In reply to itsonlynaomi [2010-09-04 19:56:36 +0000 UTC]

"a depressing book" :3

It seemed to fit her taste...

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itsonlynaomi In reply to ChazieBaka [2010-09-06 05:59:28 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, it does.

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valentinevar In reply to ??? [2010-08-16 18:46:01 +0000 UTC]

lmao... the panel in the car where they are getting high is epic. It made me crack up so bad XD great job on this

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SoneaSandre In reply to ??? [2010-08-02 15:23:34 +0000 UTC]

XDDD I lulzed at that first panal so much!!! I choked on my cough medicine D: But you had it perfectly!!!

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Drakon-the-Demon In reply to ??? [2010-05-26 02:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I also feel sorry for Green Day and Simple Plan...

THEIR NAMES WERE USED IN VAIN! TT-TT

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bloodonthemoon5 [2010-04-16 07:50:39 +0000 UTC]

Are Manson's lyrics supposed to be wrong? o.O

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ChazieBaka In reply to bloodonthemoon5 [2010-04-16 18:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Nope I got them wrong by accident... They weren't actually quoted in the fanfic.

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bloodonthemoon5 In reply to ChazieBaka [2010-04-17 13:50:40 +0000 UTC]

No, that's okay. I adore Manson, that's all. Just wondering if it had been accidental or on purpose

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BlackWolfDestiny [2010-03-24 20:51:54 +0000 UTC]

look at how far away joel (is that him?) has ebony from him...lulz!!

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ObsessedWithCake [2010-02-20 15:42:28 +0000 UTC]

This is so fucking awesome XD!! I love Good Charlotte, so reading this story made my soul die a little..

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ChazieBaka In reply to ObsessedWithCake [2010-02-20 19:27:35 +0000 UTC]

Hard to see something you like being butchered, right?
(I hope I drew them properly by the way xD)

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ObsessedWithCake In reply to ChazieBaka [2010-02-20 20:04:33 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it was painful. I also like Simple Plan >_< I read a horrible similar story, and Billy, the guitarist from Good Charlotte was in that one TOO.

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amber-romance [2010-02-04 02:14:13 +0000 UTC]

I actually listened to a reading of this fanfic on youtube... And my brain tried to eat itself to escape it But you make it bearable and absolutely funny to read. Kudos to you!

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LadyMortiana [2010-01-10 13:53:35 +0000 UTC]

'This is the new shit' scene just killed me

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ChazieBaka In reply to LadyMortiana [2010-01-11 00:16:45 +0000 UTC]

lol the only Marylin Manson lyrics I could think of xD

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Kephazard In reply to ChazieBaka [2012-03-18 19:38:17 +0000 UTC]

Slightly misheard though

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ChazieBaka In reply to Kephazard [2012-03-18 23:03:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know, someone told me back when I first posted it.

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Kephazard In reply to ChazieBaka [2012-03-19 00:58:41 +0000 UTC]

I realized that after i commented. Loved those comics. I need to reread the original masterpiece.

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WillowTreeCosplay [2010-01-07 04:52:57 +0000 UTC]

Why does Benji (that is Benji, right? Uh...)

Restarts, why does the guitar player remind me of Kenpachi Zaraki? XD

Very funny.

Be glad, I'm not losing as many braincells reading this comic than I did reading the actual story...

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ChazieBaka In reply to WillowTreeCosplay [2010-01-07 07:37:20 +0000 UTC]

I had no idea who that was until I Googled it xD I never read past the first volume of Bleach.
I think he had that haircut long before Bleach even started publishing...

Oh, well I hoped you would...

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Sapphz [2009-12-02 16:48:58 +0000 UTC]

My Immortal is a crime against nature, I agree, but it's still ****ing hilarious, I don't like Draco, so I just about rotflmao every time I read it!
Keep up the good work!!

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ChazieBaka In reply to Sapphz [2009-12-02 20:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Haha xD
I love how Malfoy fans and non-fans laugh at My Immortal Draco... In the "so bad it's good" way.
Thank you!

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Cassiemon [2009-11-26 06:03:01 +0000 UTC]

hahah yes twilight sure is a depressing book
its just sad to think that its so popular lol

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Nekorin-Gatacat [2009-11-19 04:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Wasn't it a "deprzzing" book? XD Is that Kitsune in your icon btw? I love the page!

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ChazieBaka In reply to Nekorin-Gatacat [2009-11-19 07:28:45 +0000 UTC]

Yes it is Kitsune!
Thanks.

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TimeDawg In reply to ??? [2009-10-31 21:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Draco making the "Awesome" face. Epic. This is almost as good as the cool version of "Sonichu"...no. I think it's better.

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ChazieBaka In reply to TimeDawg [2009-10-31 21:13:49 +0000 UTC]

Heehee I'm glad you noticed that.
The cool version of what?

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TimeDawg In reply to ChazieBaka [2009-10-31 22:09:43 +0000 UTC]

Sonichu...it really is a long, long, long story, but cutting it short, there's this 27 year old guy who writes a godawful Sonic/Pokemon fan comic starring Sonichu-the bastard child of Sonic and Pikachu. It's really terrible. Both the writing and his art. He has his own wiki if you're still interested. First, I advise reading the "Christian Weston Chandler" article and then "Sonichu (comic)"...if you DARE!

Hmm...strangely enough, putting the link in this message will cause the system to think it's spam. If you're interested, I guess I'll put it in a different message...

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ChazieBaka In reply to TimeDawg [2009-11-01 21:20:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh God... it sounds almost as criminal as My Immortal.

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TimeDawg In reply to ChazieBaka [2009-11-02 00:13:05 +0000 UTC]

Just google "cwcki" for more info on the guy. It's really hilarious.

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Ashkihyena In reply to TimeDawg [2010-04-02 18:04:31 +0000 UTC]

I think what you meant to say is "it's really scary" particularly Sonichu 10, *shudder*

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TimeDawg In reply to Ashkihyena [2010-04-02 23:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Well yes, but the Julie Saga. I haven't laughed so hard in forever.

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thepersonwithstuff In reply to TimeDawg [2010-08-08 23:29:44 +0000 UTC]

The less said about the manchild
s exploits, the better.

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xEbonyxJade [2009-10-31 12:59:35 +0000 UTC]

My Immortal may be pure comedy but your drawings are so cool and beautiful. Definate fave!

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ChazieBaka In reply to xEbonyxJade [2009-10-31 21:18:25 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you!
I thought I was kind of rushing the drawings but if you like it... x)

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boog4m [2009-10-14 20:52:35 +0000 UTC]

I love the Marilyn Manson 'THis is the new shit' reference XD

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ChazieBaka In reply to boog4m [2009-10-14 21:01:30 +0000 UTC]

lol it's the only Manson song I could think of, and I got the lyrics wrong too xD

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boog4m In reply to ChazieBaka [2009-10-15 00:02:50 +0000 UTC]

is it 'babble babble bitch bitch rebel rebel body body sex sex sex and don't forget the violence'? I can't remember, I'll have to listen to it tonight XD ps, I love the comic adaptation.

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ChazieBaka In reply to boog4m [2009-10-15 06:38:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I wrote "battle" instead of "babble". My mistake, I guess it doesn't really matter anyway xD

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boog4m In reply to ChazieBaka [2009-10-15 21:57:44 +0000 UTC]

it's still a kickass adaptation of the incredibad fanfic.

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