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Hello! (This is my first critique done judge uvu)
First off, I love the way you drew him. As all of the other ones said, the lines are a bit shaky, but It still looks fine. I know you were going for chibi proportions, but the shoulders to me are a little bit too broad, but it is chibi so idk but I think that if you made the torso a bit skinnier and the arms going in a little bit, it look great e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Overall, the art itself is amazing, but all it needs is better lines and possibly a change in proportions?! If its your style then great e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Hi!
First off, I really like how you kept this piece simple, and the overall style relates well with the character. It's good that you keep characters with a 'chibi' proportions in a rougher style. Ok that sounded kind of weird lol what I meant was that its good that characters with this body proportion are drawn in a simpler way, which gives it a more funny and appealing feeling.
However, in my opinion, I think that the shading could use a little bit more detail, and the lines could be smoother. But in the end, that's my opinion, so its your call e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
To me, its very cute, and his face seems to tell me that he's either confused or annoyed at whoever's staring at him. Its adorable XD.
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this is so adorable
i love the colours, they are simple but they stand out
he is so smol and squishy :3
the body shape is perfect, its smol and detailed
the shading is very very good i love very much
BUT
i think the costume could be a wee bit more detailed and shading would be nice
no offence
but apart from that this is absolutely amazing
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