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ChilledCubchoo β Absolute Mayhem for May, Maybe.
#crystal #giantess #leaf #macro #maid #may #micro #miku #mmd #pokemon #shrinking #mikumikudance
Published: 2016-04-15 23:46:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 10069; Favourites: 95; Downloads: 1984
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Description
Just a short comic x3 Nothing too special.Also, this was somewhat lazily done so i apologise if it doesn't seem to entertaining or anything Dx
Kudo's to you if you guess who's that giantess at the end xD
Credits~
Thanks to Darkliger01 for May! (And certain other characters too!)
Thanks to Mamama-P for the Miku Maid!
Thanks to HR-01SuR(I think) for the Suziki (The red car) and the Nissan (The Crushed car)!
And thank you for taking your time to view this x3
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Traaaaaa-lah! It's here!Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=UZA4jnβ¦
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Oh my gosh that's great xD
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Heheh, glad you like it!
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It May'ed your night huh? xD
Glad you enjoyed it so much xD
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Lmao very much so! My night has been May'd by that comment too XD more pokemon gts love!
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YAY giantess!!! *Clicks download repeatedlyΒ
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Well, Brief spoiler alert, there's only 6 frames of Giantess there xD Out of like, 21 frames so xD Yeah xD
Anyway I hope you'll enjoy! Well, even if it was lazily done xD
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You are toooooo late π: 0 β©: 1
Maybe you just fell for my bait?...QUICK CLOSE THE GATE!..Ooh, Too late... Now you'll have to wait....Don't hate~ xD
Okay That's enough from me xD
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EDIT- Hmm, quick question, how do I read this after it is downloaded?
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You extract the Zip file and then you should be able to access the folder and then view all the pictures inside that folder. x3
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Oh man, that was awesome.
Me says;
"THANK YOU for such a wonderful experience!!! Also, don't you worry, Girl In Red, in fourteen days, it's May. You have room to grow! It's going to be such a knee-slapping good time, it'll knock your socks off!" XD
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xD Glad you enjoyed it!
If i decide to use May in May that is xD
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Oh, that's the character's name? Oh wow, that is certainly a play on coincidences.
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Yeah, if you didn't know that, I'd assume you've never played or watched PokΓ©mon before. May is basically the female "heroine" or "Protagonist" of the 3rd generation PokΓ©mon series.
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I figured it was pokemon. I saw it when I was 3 (I guess that age?). It was back in Franklin, OH. while I don't know if it published the same one, I wrote a short episode. The only character I know of who is named May is from Guilty Gear Xrd SIGN. Any others it's Maya or Mayo. Anyways, let me know what you think of my short story, feedback is always big, even when it's small.
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Well, unfortunately i do not know about the RWBY series, so i can't really be of much help to you in giving good feedback.
However, the story you wrote: "a rwby story by me" looks a little messy. What i learned about dialogue in stories is that whenever you have a different person speaking, you start a new line. An example of this would be:
"This Growth potion costs HOW MUCH?" exclaimed the tempered woman, losing her calm attitude over a simple object that increases one's size.
"L-Like I said M'am, it cast Two and a half million dollars." stuttered the retailer.
"THAT IS ABSURD!" the woman yelled with furious rage
"This whole example is absurd..." Muttered the poor man in the corner.
I hope you get my point xD It's just so that the Paragraphs would look neater and easier to read.
It seems like your detail in your stories is alright~ In my opinion, more description would be nice at the beginning, i mean, all's i got was that it was a cold stormy night...where? Next a store? ...So there's just a few people and a store? Sounds like they're making a play~
Ohh but don't mind my opinions~ I'm no writer so don't take my opinions too seriously xD
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Β Β I'm only writing how I've seen it in books. There literally is no double spacing in most novels typewritten.
Please don't mind the vague stuff. This is my first attempt at a story/episode altering of a show. Things took off as soon
as I got to writing about the interrogation room. Also, in the show RWBY's first episode, a gang of criminals robbed a
Dust Shop. I tried to match to every thing that took place during the episode, but deviated from it when I saw that
there was no need to keep every single dialogue option. Just the important things were kept. Oh, and at the beginning,
I tried to create a setting for the story. It'd be easier to comment on that page so I could review what I wrote at the
same time of replying.
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I realise it is your first time~ Sorry if i seemed too harsh Dx,
Ahh if that's the case~ Don't mind what i have to say. Just keep having fun with your story. Everyone improves with time and practice, so keep going and you'll do well :3.
I wish your story goes well! x3
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Contains giantesses?! Do you know what kind of power you have unleashed upon us?!
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Unleashed Power? Well, it can't be all to bad right? I mean....
www.youtube.com/watch?v=t30E6Qβ¦
xD
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That face from May on frame 8 XD
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The "Not Happy Jan" face xD
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