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Redline for ~Shadowpal

Hopefully this can help you a little bit more with your canines. Here are some of the things that I fixed:

1) The muzzle was very short. It needed to be a bit longer.

2) The ears were too far back. The ears need to be a bit farther on the head. It kinda looked like it was on the back of the head.

3) Also you needed to add some curve to the spine. Even if the wolf/dog is sitting up straight, the spine is still curved.

4) I read in the comment that you didn't want to completely cover up her eye. I just left the bangs there, but put a separation so her eye can still show. You can change if you want to though.

Overall you a very good job on the pic. I like the design of the character and her name is pretty cool Maybe look for some animal anatomy books or go to the museum. There were some animal skeleton books I found, but I can't remember them off the top of my head

Again I hope this helps and if you any questions feel free to ask

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Description
Redline for ~Shadowpal

Hopefully this can help you a little bit more with your canines. Here are some of the things that I fixed:

1) The muzzle was very short. It needed to be a bit longer.

2) The ears were too far back. The ears need to be a bit farther on the head. It kinda looked like it was on the back of the head.

3) Also you needed to add some curve to the spine. Even if the wolf/dog is sitting up straight, the spine is still curved.

4) I read in the comment that you didn't want to completely cover up her eye. I just left the bangs there, but put a separation so her eye can still show. You can change if you want to though.

Overall you a very good job on the pic. I like the design of the character and her name is pretty cool Maybe look for some animal anatomy books or go to the museum. There were some animal skeleton books I found, but I can't remember them off the top of my head

Again I hope this helps and if you any questions feel free to ask

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