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Published: 2011-07-18 12:14:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 8240; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 18
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.................shiiiitttttttt....
so now that LOST's done, i'll do the next chapter
should i?
it's been nothing but crap from page one....
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The least used emote!
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I lost track about what we were talking about. Not your fault.
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omg i got cold in my spine just hearing that
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NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! do u knw what u're DOING!?!?!?!?! u're breakin their friendship!!!!!!!!!! WAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!
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i believe that means 'sorry', right??
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orang bilang, kalo amnesia gara kepentok, cara sembuhinnya getok pake barang yg bikin dia amnesia
QUICK GET A BOULDER!
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dipublish ajj gpp...
biar pada ngeliat...
BTW di grup sy kamu dimasukin jadi admin
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group mana? dA? FB? kalo disini ga bisa. udah admin 3 group. harus punya premium dulu
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do the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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will do!!!!!!1111!!!111!!!!!!!
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NO RED NO!
*grabs a chair to hit Red's head again*
(always works)
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no don't use a chair! that'sgreen'spart#SLAP
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this is nowhere NEAR bad! don't put yourself down!
O.O WAT.
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NO.... NOOO WAY!!!!! YOU HAVE TO BE KIDDING ME!!! GRAH!!
I swear to god if you leave this as a cliff hanger.. omg >.<" WE NEED TO SEE THE REST OF THIS!!! >
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kidding with what?
no, i'll do the next one in a while
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Well... you know how people say "Are you kidding me?!"
they basiclly mean how the twist puts them off so much...
its so beautiful... yet agitating... the twist was so unexpected.. you have a devious little mind >: D, any who... like i said before, LOVE IT
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well, uh, was this one too weird?
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eh? no no it wasn't weird at all! some authors do that to make the story more interesting... but the problem is that if the author were to leave the other character with just amnesia, it would be a punch to the face to the readers XD
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meh? just amnesia? what do ya mean by that?
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well, not just amnesia, anything that throws off EVERYONE, i did not expect Red to get that until the last part... the whole entire storyline revolved around the two, just to be hit by another catastrophe that could lead to a new storyline
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he~ i take it that's a good thing?
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Well, kinda! Just dont over do it and it will be unpredictable ^.^ but it depends on the taste of both the author and reader!
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OMG!!!!! You got to continue!!!!
It never had been crap! It is awesome!!!!!!!
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