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Published: 2012-04-14 10:02:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 160; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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My application for the group byAll criticism on the app is highly welcomed!
EDIT: The app was denied, there were fair reasons for doing so.
“You mad, bro? That sounds nothing like me. That sounds all dramatic and sappy, like a chick flick! If you’re gonna write my story for everyone to read, then you write it my style.”
“S-Sorry Damo, I’m an author, not a delinquent. Now, let’s see…”
Damo grew up in the city, originally living with his parents. He attended school like normal Pokémon do, but quickly grew sick of the boring routine. Because of this, Damo turned to illegal activities for excitement after school. One particular instance involved a race between his mates, riding shopping trolleys down Skyarrow Bridge. His friends from school – no, his ‘bro’s’ – and him formed their own gang. Though these thrill seekers continually searched out risky activities to do, Damo especially enjoyed ‘tagging’, that is, painting graffiti. With his green-tipped tail, Damo painted their gang’s insignia all over the city. He also enjoyed hip-hop dancing and considered himself a professional. But no hip-hop dancer is great without some rap music beats. Mike the Croagunk provided the beat boxing and Shaun the Makuhita rapped the lyric.
By the time they reached 18, Damo and his friends decided to leave home and share an apartment together. This became the base for their gang; their safe house to return to if any dangers arose. Here, they were their own bosses. Damo was beginning to enjoy his city life, but of course, things don’t run that smoothly for lawbreakers…
The problem for any gang is rival gangs. Scrafty, Treeko and Timburr were all part of the rival gang known as “The Berserk Bleeders”. Err… we can’t go into much detail about these guys, but let’s just say they were feared. Boss Scrafty challenged Damo to a battle for territory; refusal brought about great danger. The only way to settle it was… a competition – a dancing competition.
They took to the club, where Damo and Scrafty battled it out. With music pumping, they unleashed combinations of dance moves, until finally time was up. The judges’ scores revealed Scrafty as the winner and so territory went to “The Berserk Bleeders”. Loss of territory meant Damo had to leave Castelia City or face dire consequences. He bade farewell to his bros, and they split paths, deserting their former apartment. Damo chose to take the first ferry out of Castelia City, with no idea of the destination. When the ship finally docked, it was revealed to be Pokette Town. Damo was dazzled; he had never seen such a quiet and whimsical land. Boldly, he decided this is where he now belongs.
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Comments: 16
chrispybacon3 In reply to ArisaDragonMasque [2012-04-14 11:23:27 +0000 UTC]
Yep! If I get in, you can expect to see a lot more about him.
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dizzyrin [2012-04-14 11:13:05 +0000 UTC]
There is a paragraph space between 'Treeko and Tumburr'. Thought you ought to know
Found the words yet?
Also, keep the correspondance message. Do not delete it!
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chrispybacon3 In reply to dizzyrin [2012-04-14 11:22:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh! Thanks so much!
I found them a few days ago, they aren't that hard really.
Is this message when you complete the join form?
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dizzyrin In reply to chrispybacon3 [2012-04-14 11:26:45 +0000 UTC]
Welcome
Good. I thought they were nice and hidden
Yep, a message comes up when you finally click the join us after you fill out the join form and all that.
It says something like,
'Your request for membership in PKMN-Crossing is at it's Approval stage'
You just have to wait until they sift through the apps after the 16th to see if you got in or not.
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chrispybacon3 In reply to dizzyrin [2012-04-14 11:29:37 +0000 UTC]
They just force you to read through all the rules thoroughly, I suppose.
Okay.
I just need to decide on an Acre to live in now.
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dizzyrin In reply to chrispybacon3 [2012-04-14 11:38:06 +0000 UTC]
Pick an Acre with less people in it. Otherwise it gets.... crowded, I suppose.
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chrispybacon3 In reply to dizzyrin [2012-04-14 11:45:32 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that's what I did. To keep an even consistency.
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dizzyrin In reply to chrispybacon3 [2012-04-15 01:12:33 +0000 UTC]
Good onya. Which one did you pick?
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dizzyrin [2012-04-14 10:09:38 +0000 UTC]
Aw, he looks so cool! Nice job on the colouring! And OOOH! Hipster spacer earring, I spy
I don't see any problem with his history, though make sure that you remove the unwanted paragraph spaces that are there.
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chrispybacon3 In reply to dizzyrin [2012-04-14 10:13:40 +0000 UTC]
Yay, thanks!
Okay, will do.
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