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Published: 2012-05-25 06:21:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 54984; Favourites: 560; Downloads: 466
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:< I have no idea...Did i say, last comic for three weeks?
Well my internet got cut out two days ago for 7 hours. Got bored and ended up making a comic :3 Well here's a rarirty and fluttershy comic... Two of the ponies i have difficulty in drawing :< Flutterxtree shipping :\ And my first comic with Rarity :3
No background ponies though... Sorry junny xD
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Programs : Paint Tool Sai and Photoshop
Cutiemarks : ancientkale and grendo11 (notsure if it was him) lol.
Edit: theres some confusion with speech bubble at panel 3... Read it from right to left xD
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I hate to make it seem like I'm picking on you, but this comic has the same problem as "Sandwich". In the third panel when two characters both have speech balloons, they which are presented in the wrong order. Dialogue needs to be read from left to right.
Currently it looks like Rarity asks were Fluttershy met the tree and then Fluttershy dismisses her question and suggests they go to the spa instead, only to finally answer the question in the following panel. Her responses feels very much out of place.
This can be easily fixed by just replacing the text in Fluttershy's balloon were she says "Lets go to the spa" with "Sweet Apple Acres" so that it appears she is actually answering Rarity's question after she asks it. Perhaps put the line about going to the spa in the final panel instead.
You have some great art here and some very funny ideas, but these last two have been hampered from their full potential because of the execution.
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Thanks for your honesty :3 I'll keep that in mind... I've been doing this for only 4-5 months. I still have a lot to earn
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You're welcome. Hopefully it was helpful.
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There's a much simpler solution. Mirror the entire comic horizontally, and then mirror all the mirrored text back to normal.
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It took until you pointed out the tree for me to get the joke... I understand this now!
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I was wondering why I wasn't understanding it lol. Other than that good art OP!
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Just like Ranger Gord from "The Red Green Show." [link]
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[link]
this link shows how much she loves him lol XD
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lol so silly , great work
+scene aj: now who's stealin ma tree's?
or - at libery aj: twi has spike been takin stuff again? :twi: no why? :aj: coz some pony been stealin ma tree's again?
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i didnt even notice the tree he must be very ordinary
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He is a very well to do branch in society.
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he must have an impressive family tree...
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Well, the acorn doesn't fall far!
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but he is an apple tree i think how does he have acorn parents this leaves me stumped....
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Oops; my bad. I should have said apple. lol
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maybe we should stop these tree puns and leaf
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Or mayhap we branch out to the rest of DA and spread the seeds of de-pun-struction
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mayhaps we leaf the tree puns for now and branch off to more awesome puns cat puns are purrfect or maybe we cod try fish puns but there is norway i will do dog puns they are ruff no pun intended...
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ahaha i win woo yes no one dare challenge my pun powah
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i think you are barking up the wrong tree. i wood say that even if you branch out and spread the seeds you might find yourself on the root end of an ash kicking.
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Ouch. I guess I'll go back to my homepage and tend to my wounds, then.
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You two are just making an asp of yourselves.
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i'm confused, where's Fluttershy's date?
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the tree... its the only thing out of place aside from the rock
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oohhhh! i saw it but i thought they were just outside.
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Yeah, me too. It blends into the background too much.
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Those shipping are to funny, the Fluttershy one reminds me of a story I read about her. Lol
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guess this is how it started with her?
[link]
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