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She posed for the artist to paint herShe sat so perfectly still
A tremble came across her body
That was way beyond her will
"For that, my dear" said the artist
"I'll paint your blue eyes shut
Forever you'll be cast into darkness
Before you return to dust"
The subject, the model, the lady
Laughed and was not so fussed
"You think you have such power, my dear
In the stroke of your brush?
Don't forget it is I, your subject
That brings beauty to your piece
Without me you would be nothing;
A lush drunk on self belief"
With that the artist grabbed his palette
Ferociously began to paint
Till fatigue encapsulated his bones
And he began to feel faint
"How dare you bring into question
This masterpiece, my life's work
From my hand to brush to canvas
My unique view of this world"
"Artist you are not so special
With strokes many could make
Where as my beauty is as unique
As a falling snowflake
And it is I that fell from Heaven
Onto the blank canvas Earth
As potent as God's silence
And as beautiful as God's words"
But your beauty will fade my dear
Where as my art shall last
It will indeed live on forever
Long after we have passed
And what is beauty without someone
To witness and to observe
And re-create that beautiful vision
Of God's elegant, wonderous work
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Comments: 199
CloudNumber8 In reply to ??? [2012-05-17 20:46:08 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the comment my good sir
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CloudNumber8 In reply to CorinaTanase [2012-05-17 20:33:25 +0000 UTC]
thank you! and thanks for the fave
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CorinaTanase In reply to CloudNumber8 [2012-05-17 20:36:47 +0000 UTC]
you are welcome. I think i just discovered something quite unique inj and through you photos, that I haven't read for quite a while.so I also have to thank you.
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CloudNumber8 In reply to CorinaTanase [2012-05-17 20:40:02 +0000 UTC]
i am grateful for the watch too. Multumesc (hope thats right lol)
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CorinaTanase In reply to CloudNumber8 [2012-05-17 20:52:12 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome for that too. And yes, it is correct and I appreciate you searched for this translation. Cu placere, din nou. (It means: You're welcome, again)
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CloudNumber8 In reply to CorinaTanase [2012-05-17 20:57:25 +0000 UTC]
i have a few Romanian friends on here
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CorinaTanase In reply to CloudNumber8 [2012-05-18 10:00:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh, nice! Then you are familiarised with these words
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yogika In reply to ??? [2012-05-17 20:12:49 +0000 UTC]
stupendous poem..trully, trully touching.
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CloudNumber8 In reply to yogika [2012-05-17 20:24:05 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much. I am glad it touched you
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Cutetiger40 In reply to ??? [2012-05-17 19:57:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is really deep and well thought out!
Without one, the other is nothing. They rely on each other to bring beauty into the world and make it seen.
Awesome and amazing job!
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CloudNumber8 In reply to Cutetiger40 [2012-05-17 20:23:50 +0000 UTC]
thank you. I came to that conclusion too
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CloudNumber8 In reply to LucarioFangirl01 [2012-05-17 19:51:34 +0000 UTC]
thanks! and thanks for the fave too
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Social-Insomnia In reply to ??? [2012-05-17 19:45:17 +0000 UTC]
very amazing, and philosophical too
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CloudNumber8 In reply to JadeMcHugh [2012-05-17 19:30:49 +0000 UTC]
thank you for reading and commenting
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Laaaaay In reply to ??? [2012-05-17 19:17:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh my. The sheer beauty that comes through your words, love it!
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CloudNumber8 In reply to Laaaaay [2012-05-17 19:18:15 +0000 UTC]
glad you liked it. Thanks for fave too!
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CloudNumber8 In reply to MauroMunir [2012-05-17 19:16:57 +0000 UTC]
thanks for reading and glad you liked it
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AIR-IS-LIFE In reply to ??? [2012-05-17 18:55:39 +0000 UTC]
This was very unique! The style almost had a Seussical feel... yet it was like an adult version. Very nice I like it!
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CloudNumber8 In reply to AIR-IS-LIFE [2012-05-17 19:16:44 +0000 UTC]
ahh yeah i see what you mean. I feel honoured to be mentioned in same breath. I dream in future people will say a poem has a Soulacolical feel lol jk
thanks for comment
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AIR-IS-LIFE In reply to CloudNumber8 [2012-05-17 20:10:02 +0000 UTC]
your welcome!
And maybe someday it will... or maybe when you write about a different topic?
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CloudNumber8 In reply to pappayamonster [2012-05-17 19:15:49 +0000 UTC]
glad you liked it, cheers
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Yangyexin [2012-05-17 18:39:25 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful job and two very unique point of views ;D
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IpomeaTricolor In reply to ??? [2012-05-17 18:15:20 +0000 UTC]
amazing! love how it tells a whole story
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CloudNumber8 In reply to IpomeaTricolor [2012-05-17 19:15:17 +0000 UTC]
thank you. I like telling stories
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Mymagic1212 In reply to ??? [2012-05-17 17:57:40 +0000 UTC]
haha almost comical i love it <3 though i feel as though it ended a little bit abruptly o.o I'm adding this to my faves folder
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CloudNumber8 In reply to Mymagic1212 [2012-05-17 18:06:41 +0000 UTC]
aww thanks
maybe there will be a part 2 at some point just for you
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Mymagic1212 In reply to CloudNumber8 [2012-05-17 18:44:05 +0000 UTC]
haha awesome i would love that
<3
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talesofasunsetrider In reply to ??? [2012-05-17 17:53:16 +0000 UTC]
O.o woah!!! sweet.
Inspiration is the source, it is the artists themselves that decide what to do with it and how....true story
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CloudNumber8 In reply to talesofasunsetrider [2012-05-17 18:07:11 +0000 UTC]
i like the comment, excellent this is what i was hoping for from feedback
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talesofasunsetrider In reply to CloudNumber8 [2012-05-17 18:11:13 +0000 UTC]
thank you.
A great piece of art needs a great comment i suppose
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Doodelay In reply to ??? [2012-05-17 17:45:35 +0000 UTC]
love the concept.
my fav line "As potent as God's silence
And as beautiful as God's words"
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CloudNumber8 In reply to Doodelay [2012-05-17 18:07:31 +0000 UTC]
glad you liked that line. Thanks for taking time to comment
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