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Published: 2013-08-27 15:04:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 2017; Favourites: 150; Downloads: 0
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Finally a finished scan of this A3 drawing, take a look please
Made for a friend, it was supposed to be gothic themed but the only thing that it is is kinda dark
Please give me some critic, I want some improvement ideas for the next drawing that might be similar in style.
Also please check my similar newest drawing!
I'll love you for that!
Thanks for checking this out, I love your support, it means a lot
Media:
-Pencils
-0.05 marker
-(Exclusively black) markers
IF you feel like coloring things, you can color this drawing, I'm curious to see how would it look colored by anyone else.
All I ask for is the link or a thumbnail to the original drawing, and the original artist of the drawing (in the description).
You can find more of the B&W drawings that you can color in this folder: roxy932211.deviantart.com/gall…
If you color any of the drawings in that folder, including this one - notify me and I will feature your version on my profile.
roxycloud.deviantart.com/art/C…
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Comments: 126
True! It is good to have some self awareness
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I LOVE the detail and textured look to it! You did a great job!
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Details are my favourite snack, I'm kinda obsessed yea... Gonna have to visit an institution or two sometime soon 
Thank you so much
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I'm trying to work on loose sketches because my unofficial OCD causes me to put too much detail into my sketches...
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I'm selfish and talking about myself, don't get me wrong
Your sketches and details are fine, I like them a lot!
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You're not being selfish at all. And thanks! :3
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I so love the mood in this picture and tbe details are amazing! The design of the castle is very well thought and gorgously done and I like the arrangement of your picture.
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Although it was supposed to be more "gothic".. I think I kinda missed something x.x
But thanks so much, seems like It succeeded somehow xD
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Awesome work. A really impressive level of detail but still completely legible.
In terms of a critique - I wonder if the moon and clouds match the mood set by the rest of the drawing? The moon against the night sky has the greatest contrast, and becomes the focal point, but it seems to be of a more cartoonish style compared to the old-school gossamer style of the rest of the work, creating an inconsistency in mood. The more subtle patterning and texture of the night sky (as in the horizontal lines of light surrounding the moon) seem to me to be more interesting than the more cartoony clouds – was there potential make more subtle clouds from the patterning in the texture of the sky (like Van Goghs The Starry Night ) ? These are just random thoughts – the drawing is very compelling and a wonderful achievement.
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Now that's probably the most advanced critic I've received in a while (or since I came here?!). And honestly I have no idea about theory of art and all the logic behind it so this is really helpful and is giving me a lot of insight!
I can only say I agree with you, I didn't realize it before about the moon and clouds being " cartoonish " but it's true
And less contrast in the sky the next time (if I'll use such a way with markers again 
And clouds stick out a 'lil bit too much..
This is a really awesome critic and I'm really grateful for it !
Thanks a lot (and for the compliment(s) too
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Very nice! you are better and better in drawing!
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Thank you
I really hope so, but it's probably just because it was a special drawing and I put more time in it hmm :S ...
Have a nice day
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You are most welcome!
Have a nice day!
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I LOVE THIS!!!!!! I dont know what i would say if i was critiquing, because i cant find anything wrong with this beautiful piece of art.
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Thanks a lot 
(ok, my stupid jokes started, time for bed 
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OMG, that's awesome! I wouldn't be able to do such a big drawing. Wonderful!
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You just have to try harder then, eventually you would made it!
And especially if you drag the process through half a year ..
Thanks a lot
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