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Description EDIT: I FINALLY MADE THE FANFICTION SEVERAL PEOPLE HAVE BEEN REQUESTING! IT'S ONLY CHAPTER ONE BUT PLEASE ENJOY!: cloudthehen.deviantart.com/art…

Also I made cover art for it: cloudthehen.deviantart.com/art…

So this is my first EVER competition I have ever participated on dA. *exhales really loudly* BOY this took literally a week. Not to brag, but I'm kinda proud of it (I would LOVE some constructive criticism on this pic though!). It looks like a screenshot of an anime.

Okay, maybe I should explain this pic a bit (careful this desc might be long and MAJOR SPOILERS OF THE LAST EPISODE OF GRAVITY FALLS, but if you've watched it and want to know the full story of this entry, read on).

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In this particular alternate universe of Gravity Falls, when "Standford" accepts Bill Cipher's deal of sparing his brother and the kids in return for the equation to cancel the forcefield around GF, Bill sees through the two Stans' plot and catches Ford off guard. Using this surprise as an advantage, the dream demon manipulates the real Ford's hand to open and forces the deal. Bill searches through Ford's mind and Dipper and Mabel try to stop him, but to no avail. Bill finds the equation and releases all the weirdness confined in GF into the world, causing incomprehensible chaos and anarchy.

Time Baby, in the future after his molecules had gathered themselves back together, sees this as a major concern and goes back in time to stop this from happening. Since he can't go back to the point before Bill's deal was made, since Bill created a permanent time loop spreading in infinite multichotomous directions, Time Baby returned to the point AFTER Bill left Stanford's mind, left the Fearamid to spread the oddpocalypse and left the Pines family to watch the strangeness spread helplessly (Bill had kept his promise and didn't harm the Pines since he didn't see them as major threats to his world domination scheme). Time Baby offered assistance to the Pines as long as they didn't mess around with time and space.

Taking the Pines to the future with him, Stanford and Time Baby's best minds set to work to create weapons that could eliminate supernatural beings based on energy. Dream demons like Bill (in my theory) are surrounded by potential energy (which acts like a forcefield) which they use to regenerate and maintain their physical structure. In order for them to create and store this potential energy, they need a stable physical body (it's like in Minecraft where to get gold nuggets you use a gold ingot and to get a gold ingot you need gold nuggets). However, if the energy being is severely injured AND doesn't have potential energy, they cannot maintain physical stability and have to feed off their knowledge/mind in order to regenerate, which is apparently really exhausting. This is why Bill needs lots of knowledge.

Soon, weapons were created that not only harm beings of energy but also absorbing the potential energy around it in a approx. 65'6" ft (20m) radius. Each Pines member got on of these weapons (appearances uniquely varying depending on each person) and went to hunt down Bill and destroy him, founding the corporation P.I.N.E.S (Professional Incorporated Network of Eradicating Supernatural). When the Pines found Bill (and this was when they were somewhere in Europe), the demon was not expecting the weapons to be effective, only to be almost completely destroyed. In his desperation, Bill teleported away to the first place that came into mind: Gravity Falls.

The Mystery Shack had been repaired (as wished by Mabel because she promised to come back next Summer) and the unicorn magic was still active, so Bill short-circuited the magic with some gnome vomit (such ancient race respectively possesses special properties within their stomach acids) to make the magic recognise him as a "normal" thing. He made the shack his hide away in order to regenerate (regenerating using his knowledge makes him very vulnerable and he was in no shape to teleport anywhere else, so this was his best course of action). From staying inside the Mystery Shack and being unexposed from weirdness for a long period of time, Bill slowly regains his sanity.

Meanwhile, the P.I.N.E.S slowly LOSE their sanity from looking everywhere for Bill. Stanford, being the lead general of their now enforced army (Time Baby revived the people stuck in the banners and made them part of the corporation), was getting frustrated, crossing out every place Bill could be (except for GF because he though it wouldn't be logical). The P.I.N.E.S eliminate all Bill's henchmaniacs (and potential allies of Bill) just to be safe. They also take over all of the world's military force, overwhelming all the presidents, dictators and prime ministers and ruling over the globe with a strict government of anti-supernatural based laws. The Pines family and their army become blinded by their superstition and torture innocent people/creatures, thinking they are spies for Bill. The P.I.N.E.S begin acquiring characteristics of sadism, like actually ENJOYING torturing the life out of things (which sound a LOT like a certain dream demon). Anyone and anything even remotely suspicious is assumed to be related to Bill and tortured and killed if necessary.

Through his limited peepholes (most of them being erased as a law made by the P.I.N.E.S), Twist!Bill sees the work of the Pines and is infuriated of people being killed in his name (he, now having most of his sanity back, can now see the bad things he has done and differentiate what is moral and immoral). He had almost no chance in taking over the world now, since such powerful weapons exist now, and he lost interest in taking over the world during his time in the shack. He decides he must do something to fight of the Pines and return the world to what it was before, while leaving that dimension (for the greater good).
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That's all I have for the story. The pic above kinda represents paragraph 5 of my little story just now. And just so you know, the little sparrow came in through the vent and was chirping randomly, looking for its mother who had flown off for food and never came back. It was old enough to leave the nest but found itself in the vent and got a liking to Bill. Bill found it annoying at first, but warmed up to it, which I find really adorable (cuz it's SO tsundere, you adorable evil tsundere cactus dorito).

Ah this desc is too long. I hope this entry is good dA!

Gravity Falls is by Alex Hirsch!
Twist!Bill + the sparrow belongs to me, I guess.
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Comments: 2840

CloudtheHen In reply to ??? [2018-11-18 20:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Timber-wolff In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-11-18 20:23:09 +0000 UTC]

No problem 

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rtrtist In reply to ??? [2018-11-15 18:23:40 +0000 UTC]

<3 !

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CloudtheHen In reply to rtrtist [2018-11-15 19:58:30 +0000 UTC]

^v^

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Sky-L-ar In reply to ??? [2018-10-31 22:33:15 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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CloudtheHen In reply to Sky-L-ar [2018-11-03 01:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! ^v^

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333KanochiSause In reply to ??? [2018-10-25 16:03:00 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing!

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CloudtheHen In reply to 333KanochiSause [2018-10-27 11:06:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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333KanochiSause In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-10-27 16:42:02 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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MysteryB0X [2018-10-24 14:37:00 +0000 UTC]

I really like the black borders it brings more "scene" look to it ^^!

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CloudtheHen In reply to MysteryB0X [2018-10-25 06:42:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! ^v^

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BluJayPJ In reply to ??? [2018-10-15 00:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Hey, that's pretty good

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Llamagal21 In reply to ??? [2018-10-13 20:44:28 +0000 UTC]

AHHH!! I totally love this! Bill is like that everyone hates to love or loves to hate. I'm sad that the series is over but it was fun while it lasted. I gotta say, Gravity Falls was one of the best shows to air on TV!

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CloudtheHen In reply to Llamagal21 [2018-10-14 20:25:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and yes, I agree!! ^v^

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Llamagal21 In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-10-14 22:44:21 +0000 UTC]

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rutilated-quarz In reply to ??? [2018-10-12 15:45:52 +0000 UTC]

Ooo nice! A really in-depth AU you've got there, and a fun read too! not to mention the art's pretty good, as well
(and yeah, i know im like a year and a half late to this hahah)

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CloudtheHen In reply to rutilated-quarz [2018-10-12 20:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh thanks so much! Wow, I supposed it has been almost two years, but I'm glad people still like it!! ^v^

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JayDee1201 In reply to ??? [2018-09-24 20:00:06 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty cool!

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xPineTreeANDipPinesx In reply to JayDee1201 [2018-10-11 23:30:36 +0000 UTC]

*Screech*

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JayDee1201 In reply to xPineTreeANDipPinesx [2018-10-12 02:34:59 +0000 UTC]

oh

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sf-leafy In reply to ??? [2018-09-24 05:29:03 +0000 UTC]

SWEET!

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sammich In reply to ??? [2018-09-16 09:07:38 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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CloudtheHen In reply to sammich [2018-09-18 09:24:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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SpringtrapsTARDIS In reply to ??? [2018-09-16 04:24:49 +0000 UTC]

sounds awesome.
really, really late response.
and there were dorito shimejis everywhere while I was reading that.
good job.
it's beautiful.
and now I really, really want to do something like that ._.

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CloudtheHen In reply to SpringtrapsTARDIS [2018-09-18 09:24:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, and go for it!! ^v^

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SpringtrapsTARDIS In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-11-03 05:43:07 +0000 UTC]

(LATE AGAIN SORRY HNNNN DONT CHECK HERE OFTEN >m<)
To be honest everything I do is bill ._.
So I don't know if that would be taking what you have or not, by doing him ._.
Hnnnn ._.
I just want to do a comic series ._.
or a fate swap ._.
But all I see is smol doritos ._.
Or animatronics ._.
ahgjhgk ._.
sorry about this. It probably annoys you.
but what should I doooo?
there's so many things I want and can do.
BUT MY BRAIN IS EXPLODING RN
hnnn . . .
sorry about all this. don't know why I'm even typing it.

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CloudtheHen In reply to SpringtrapsTARDIS [2018-11-03 08:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh it's okay?? ^v^

Of course you wouldn't be taking from what I have, Gravity Falls is for everyone!

Your style is very cute and simplistic, so it would definitely work well with a comic where you have to draw characters over and over!! If you're not confident in that, than fanfiction is fine as well!

No, it doesn't annoy me at all! Talking about evil doritos drawing is fun!!! I'm actually thinking of making an comic too, but I'm still working out the plot and I'm too busy to put it all together... -^-

What I think you should do is start small. Get down your ideas somewhere at least and gather your favourite bits for a small project. Then start, I guess??? If you don't start from somewhere and wait until you're "ready", you'll have nothing to improve off of and you'll never be ready! Also, remember to draw not because of wanting to be popular/noticed, but because you enjoy what you do!

Well, I don't really have a right to give you advice since I myself haven't started any of my own projects, I just got it off YouTube writing and drawing advice videos... >v<

Don't worry, venting is good! I'm sure you'll put all your emotions into a super cool project one day!! ^v^

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SpringtrapsTARDIS In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-11-03 18:37:59 +0000 UTC]

Hm. I think I know what to do.
You are really good at inspiring things.
And I've got a LOT of things to do if I want to make a sort of comic- but if it's really easy at the core then . . . I already have everything I need! Just a pencil, paper, sharpie, and a camera, and editing software so I can fix it up.
Besides, I've got a story inside my mind right now. Why not let everybody see it?
So . . . thanks .w.

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CloudtheHen In reply to SpringtrapsTARDIS [2018-11-03 19:35:21 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, and I can't wait to see what you come up with!! ^v^

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SpringtrapsTARDIS In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-11-17 05:43:49 +0000 UTC]

alright. I thought of something.
I made a wall post on pmc to those there (at least I'm active somewhere!). I'll just give you that link to make it easier . . .

www.planetminecraft.com/member…

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CloudtheHen In reply to SpringtrapsTARDIS [2018-11-17 09:17:20 +0000 UTC]

Ooh! I really like this idea!! If you couldn't tell from my Twist AU we're commenting on, I am a big fan of fantasy dystopian settings!! ^v^

Wow, you worked out a plot line so quick too?? As long as you're not rushing too much, I bet you can already start fleshing out the characters (unless you'll be using characters already from OG Gravity Falls, of course)!!!

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SpringtrapsTARDIS In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-11-17 18:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Already got two sides of paper of clones (partially because that was somewhat inspired by S3N027, which is one of my characters who is a dorito clone and. . . I used to rp as them on a FNaF minecraft server. Apparently literally everybody there knew gravity falls. they earned the name 'smol dorito'). I'll try and draw digital versions. And then I'd be able to start with the mutated human race. They'll probably be my favorite part. Maybe a few can be melting sorta like amalgamates, others maybe with animalistic parts on them, others with only internal changes. . . ooo~, maybe there'll be somebody who'll be able to turn inside out!

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CloudtheHen In reply to SpringtrapsTARDIS [2018-11-17 20:03:48 +0000 UTC]

!! So passionate?? (You even RP-ed as one of your own characters... That's actually really good for fleshing characters out. Nice!) And I fully support your human race ideas. Let's. Go. Body. Horror!!!

Question though, will you be posting on deviantART or another platform like the website from before?

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SpringtrapsTARDIS In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-12-01 20:06:01 +0000 UTC]

I don't know, honestly. I usually am more active there, but it's a minecraft website. . .
then again, I could start a sort of art blog there and do it that way . . .
but if I posted here, then I could get more used to this place and such, not to mention easier access.
But I also tend to put it through imgur before posting it anywhere, and use pmc as the test run, so . . .
hm. How about I try putting humorous comics somewhere as a test run for how to set it up, and then make the actual comics in yet another area?
Or I could try animating it all out, since that's something I want to get better at . . .
Then again, I don't really have all the skill I'd need for something like that.
hm . . .
I know twitter is something people often use for comics and such, but I don't even have an account there, so I have no idea what I'd even do with that platform. I suppose whichever website or platform proves more comfortable to use will be where it's placed, as well as any joke comics, which as it turns out are where I'm naturally inclined. I actually made a dream demon fart joke on paper recently, the last frame was WAKEMEUPINSIDECA- so I could do both the actual comics and just silly jokes based on the other comics somewhere else.
But then we have the characters again. I had an idea recently where this could have characters from other realities warped into the mess, such as Fran Bow, William Afton, (cheap 4th-wall breaking joke that you can probably guess), The Doctor or a Dalek since those things are the best bois, and maybe Yuelia from fantasy life if I really want to go nuts.all dream-demonized, clearly. I could finally get my 'bill's one stop apocolypse shop' inside joke out there,with the silly comics. VIRUS could actually get a significant position in all of that. Just writing down my thoughts at this point.

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CloudtheHen In reply to SpringtrapsTARDIS [2018-12-02 08:43:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh, don't feel the need to post on dA if it doesn't suit you!! I'll gladly follow your work in other places, even if I don't make accounts on them...! As long as you keep consistent on said websites, you're bound to gain some interest. Although, I've heard that Line Webtoon and Tapastic are good comic hosts? I know nothing about Twitter either, sorry!!

Hmm, as this is your first big project (right??) I don't recommend full blown animation for now (I've been taking some basic IRL education into it for a while now and I still haven't produced anything submission worthy, to my terribly high standards at least)... Honing your comic skills will help with your animation skills more than vis versa, since its just storyboarding! Basically, its good you're keeping your goals realistic.

Speaking of realistic, I like your pre-comedy comic plan! But perhaps it should not only be for testing setup, but also for project management in general? I know you're very passionate about the Gravity Falls AU you've been explaining up until this point, but you seem the most comfortable with light-hearted stuff. Unless you're confident you can pull of intense messages, you could start an independent mini-project first?? That way, you experience what it means to make comics earlier and learn from mistakes faster??? After that, you can slowly integrate deep lore before linking it to a "prequel" of sorts, which would be your serious comic. Idk, testing beyond your comfort zones is healthy too, I guess!

As for your crossover idea, it is quite ambitious...! It could be a double-edged sword though: so many universes could expand your audience range but it could also repel readers who are only interested in specific ones. But if they are just easter eggs, then it's fine I guess?

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SpringtrapsTARDIS In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-12-03 03:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I got something more comfortable. I'll post it here, and maybe on pmc as well.
Using the clones anyways.
and nooo dialogue, because I suck at not turning dialogue into a mess of puns and fourth wall breaks

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CloudtheHen In reply to SpringtrapsTARDIS [2018-12-03 08:41:03 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, I'm invested so far! Even without dialogue, I can tell what's going on. But what's so bad about puns and fourth wall breaks?? >v<

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SpringtrapsTARDIS In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-12-03 13:39:13 +0000 UTC]

EVERYTHING becomes puns and broken walls.
EVERYTHING. I've got to know myself over time, and that always happens.
Roleplays or just silly joke images I never upload because none of them have any relevance, it's ALWAYS that EVERYTHING is puns or broken walls. And I love it, but it's excessive, so . . .

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CloudtheHen In reply to SpringtrapsTARDIS [2018-12-03 19:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Well, I think you could make it work! Puns and broken walls could be your "gimmick", I guess??? But idk, do whatever you feel comfortable with. ^v^

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creampoff In reply to ??? [2018-09-15 17:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Gosh I miss gravity falls ; v ;
Such lovely work!

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CloudtheHen In reply to creampoff [2018-09-15 19:06:47 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh same, and thank you!! ^v^

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FlareFolf In reply to ??? [2018-09-06 07:02:47 +0000 UTC]

dude, this looks really good!

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CloudtheHen In reply to FlareFolf [2018-09-06 21:15:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you think so!!

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Milkycreamsicle In reply to ??? [2018-09-05 23:47:11 +0000 UTC]

Great job!!

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CloudtheHen In reply to Milkycreamsicle [2018-09-06 21:15:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! ^v^

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Milkycreamsicle In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-10-17 20:48:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome :3

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TechJolteon In reply to ??? [2018-09-05 19:49:50 +0000 UTC]

cool

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CloudtheHen In reply to TechJolteon [2018-09-06 21:16:48 +0000 UTC]

^v^

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TechJolteon In reply to CloudtheHen [2018-09-07 03:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Nice storyline btw

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DERANGEDDUDE In reply to ??? [2018-09-04 18:01:24 +0000 UTC]

this is weird...

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