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TREASURY APPROVAL COMMENT: comments.deviantart.com/1/6682…

EGG APPROVAL COMMENT: comments.deviantart.com/1/7068…

UPDATED SUBMISSION SHEET TO FIT SUBBMISSION CRITERIA.

And she is born! Hopefully she will be approved. :> If the Betta tail is deemed unrealistic then I'll just make it a Fantasy tail. 

Holy camolli, this gal has been in limbo LONG before the Blessed Eggs were introduced. Lol.

Let me tell ye the tail of Brevil here. 

Originally, a couple months back I was secretly imagining how I would one day convince to maybe have Zanzibar and Tyto "breed" and have some direct descendants. I imagined like two babies each for us. One of them for me was gonna be a boy named Jarl and the other, a delicate female named Brevil. She was gonna be pure white and stoic and lawful (Not too different from Ammit is sorta now.) and she would be sorta an aquatic, air type. (Like Lugia from Pokémon.)

Course I kept that to myself, too soon to be thinking about that sorta stuff. Lol. Then this event came up and the Blessed Eggs were introduced. Now I had my chance. >:-D

But I noticed that the old Brevil design was... Kinda boring. The upgraded version was gonna be awesome, but would be something draconic and in cohesive that I've drawn a lot of times before for other characters or pictures for my gallery. (She'd also be too complicated.) So, I began changing the design. She switched SO MUCH this past month. At one point she was gonna be like a giant leviathan when she grew, then she was a mer, then she was gonna be grey with a white back and the same markings as on her egg, THEN she went from an undersea beast to being a swan like male with wing arms, blue eyes and calm, sweet demeanor. The last one almost came to be, but I realized my heart wasn't in that one too. He was an awful lot like other characters I had made, he didn't have much substance to him and really I didn't want another bird boy.

So I took a step back and looked at all the loons I have already and kinda went back to step one.

I have an emotionally constipated bird boy, a happy-go-lucky, flirty, clever little cloak child and a big, monstrous, lawful, eye-for-an-eye, scary, hungry and HUGE lady loon.

So I went to bed recently and all of the suddeny the image of a black koi evoloon popped in me head and BAM. BREVIL.

Then her name was a problem. It Went from Notte, to Niagara to Solstice to Fathoms to Solitaire to Solstice again and then after  along battle between weather to call her Solstice or Brevil, I chose Brevil. (Mostly because I had a feeling that Solstice has most likely been used for an evoloon name already and that she has literally NOTHING to do with any actual solstice of anykind.)

So yeah. Behold Brevil. XD Her personality will become more apparent as time goes on. I may yet change some things about her, but that's the beauty of evoloons, am I right? XD

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Comments: 67

KrestenaWolfShadow In reply to ??? [2017-10-22 22:33:30 +0000 UTC]

If it looks to much like tyto I can try to change it.

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CoffeeAddictedDragon In reply to KrestenaWolfShadow [2017-10-22 22:43:09 +0000 UTC]

If you want then go ahead. I'm not accusing you of anything I hope you know.

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KrestenaWolfShadow In reply to CoffeeAddictedDragon [2017-10-22 22:44:53 +0000 UTC]

ok.
I know.

I am doing to change the design.
I just have a really hard time picking colours and how the evoloon should look

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CoffeeAddictedDragon In reply to KrestenaWolfShadow [2017-10-22 22:45:44 +0000 UTC]

I suggest looking at mammal images on google and looking t other people's evoloons

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KrestenaWolfShadow In reply to CoffeeAddictedDragon [2017-10-22 22:49:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I have just looked at some fish pictures to get some ideas.

Thinking of something like this maybe:
seaunseen.com/wp-content/uploa… OR rules.fish.wa.gov.au/species/i…

And also just re-red the upgrades sheet and after a certain amount of time I can chance the colours o the loon if I want so it works out.

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CoffeeAddictedDragon In reply to KrestenaWolfShadow [2017-10-22 22:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Welp so long as the colors are natural then they should be accepted.

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KrestenaWolfShadow In reply to CoffeeAddictedDragon [2017-10-22 22:50:31 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking a golden colour. Hopefully it will be ok.

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CoffeeAddictedDragon In reply to KrestenaWolfShadow [2017-10-23 03:04:04 +0000 UTC]

If its golden like a lion pelt or something then it should be okay. 

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KrestenaWolfShadow In reply to CoffeeAddictedDragon [2017-10-23 03:04:50 +0000 UTC]

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CoffeeAddictedDragon In reply to KrestenaWolfShadow [2017-10-23 03:13:29 +0000 UTC]

OOOOOooooooh! Nice! It might be a bit to bright but it looks great!

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KrestenaWolfShadow In reply to CoffeeAddictedDragon [2017-10-23 05:29:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks star.
Hopefully it will be ok.

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CoffeeAddictedDragon In reply to KrestenaWolfShadow [2017-10-23 05:30:22 +0000 UTC]

np!

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KrestenaWolfShadow In reply to CoffeeAddictedDragon [2017-10-23 21:58:24 +0000 UTC]

My evoloon got approved star.  

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CoffeeAddictedDragon In reply to KrestenaWolfShadow [2017-10-23 22:00:08 +0000 UTC]

YAY! Good for you. ^^

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KrestenaWolfShadow In reply to CoffeeAddictedDragon [2017-10-23 22:00:27 +0000 UTC]

 

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KrestenaWolfShadow In reply to CoffeeAddictedDragon [2017-10-23 05:41:22 +0000 UTC]


nice to hear from you star.

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