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this....is a new RP I created and the very first error I have made so if anyone has any question just ask meplus if u wanna put your OC or just you in the RP that's fine
plus Im very VERY new to this ^u^
soooo....DONT HURT ME!!! DX -flails-
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I looked at Vincent confused as he tilted his head. "Do you know this guy...?"
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Vincent: ..........just....take him to the Storage room....I'll deal with him.... -eyes him with a smugged look that doesn't look plesent-
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I nodded and dragged him into the storage room.
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-once in the storage room, Vincent took care of the blond night guard as he sets him on the metal table and strap him on it so he wouldn't dare go anywhere-
Vincent: -examines his face- .......hmm....-fiddles with his locks of hair-.....this...boy....he's so ssssimilar....to him.....
Corr: ugh....hmm....-still faintly asleep-
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I watched as he examined the nightguard's face, wondering what Vincent could be talking about.
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-Vincent gets closer to his space-
Vincent: .......Jeremy? -tilt his head squinting his eyes just looking at him-
-soon Corr begin to steer and wake up-
Corr: ugh....wa... -opens my eyes to see was right at my face- OH CRUD!!!! -tries to sit up but find myself strain on the table with both my arms, body and legs tied to some metal table- GRR!!
Vincent: - soon once his eye's were wide open they were golden yellow. not normal people has those- .....hmmm~ -floats around him and examining him-
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I watched, looking at the nightguard curiosly.
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Corr: -tries to struggle to get free- GRRrr l-let me out!!
Vincent: hmhmhmhm ahhh~ you act like he does too~ hooowww predictable~<3 -leans in with a sinister grin-
Corr: AARG!!! -squeezed my eyes shut to not see him-
-Vincent pat his cheek-
Vincent: now tell meee~ what is your naaammee.....-messing with his hair-
Corr: C-C-Corr....b-but p-please d-don't touch me....
-Vincent just laugh at his oh so stuttering word that it so greatly reminds him of his other night guard he used to know-
Vincent: HAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
-Corr flinch from his great laughter feeling scared of what will happen next-
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I watched, knowing the human was doomed.
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Vincent: oooohhhh yeeesssss -sigh- you knooowww.....Im keeping thiiisssss -gets very close to Corr's face-
Vincent: your soooo much like Jeremy~
Corr: w-who's Jeremy? -tries to look away but my face was cupped and was looking at the purple phantom-
Vincent: letsss just saaaayy....he'ssss and old frieeenndddd.....-grins wider-
-soon Vincent looks over to you-
Vincent: Saammmm~ go to the office and bring me the wheelchair if you pleaaasssee~ -as his whole claws were on Corr's face as Corr was scared to move-
Corr: HMM!!!
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I nodded and went to the office to get it.
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Corr: - looks up to him- W-Wha are you doing!? -with a very scared look on my face-
-Vincent look down on Corr and grin at him and just chuckled-
Vincent: hmhmhmhmhm~ I'm jussst...gonna have alittle fuuunnn with you goldie lockssss~ -he flew over to retrieve some wires and tools as he came back to the metal table with Corr-
Corr: w-whats this...-tries to twist my wrist free as it slowly makes its way out from its binding grip of its strap-
Vincent: well....since....you DO look like Jeremy'ssss look-a-like~ -shrugs- Im guessing you don't need a suit......
-Corr's eyes were on the tool he was holding-
Corr: but.....wa..wa are you gonna do with those.... -makes a worried look-
-Vincent just snickers-
Vincent: hmhmhmhm....since I thought suits isn't very...suiting for you.....hehehehehehehe -smiles wider from that joke- I guess making your inside more....not you....
-Corr's eyes were all wide thinking he might die as a corpse with mechanical parts inside of him-
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I brought back the wheelchair from the office.
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Corr: p-please let me go!?! -my hand was almost free but just need to wiggle it some more as I struggle from what this purple phantom was going to do to me-
-Vincent saw you with the wheelchair-
Vincent: good, you have it....now... set it over there...once Im done I'll-!?
-Corr's other hand was free as he reaches for the strap to get himself free from the straps that restrains him on the table-
Corr: Grrr!?!
-Vincent was startled and not pleased to what Corr was doing so he stabbed one of his sharp tools in his hands right to Corr's shoulder-
Vincent: OH NO YOU DONT !!!! -snarls-
Corr: AAAHHRG!! -I yelled in pain from odd sharp object that was impaled on my left shoulder as I stop for a sec but continue to try to get free-
Corr: n-n-no... -reaches for the strap-
-Vincent grabbed his free arms and sink it back to the table and strapped back on again-
Vincent: Grrrrr your a real stubborn one aren't you goldie? -glares with a scold on his face-
Corr: l-l-let me goo....-feeling so much pain on my shoulder but feeling so scared to see him might torture me-
-Vincent look over to you-
Vincent: SAM!!! -in his upset voice- bring me a cloth if you may~ -glares dangerously-
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I nodded and went to get a cloth. I found one and gave it to Vincent.
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Vincent: now be good...so I can examine you better....just....cloooosssee youuurrr eyyeesss.....-covers his eyes with the cloth and ties it up-
Corr: p-please d-don't...-I flail my head but he already covered my eyes as now I see darkness as I whined hoping I don't die-
-Vincent just turned from an smugged frown to a sinister grin once more as he was ready to proceed with his experiment-
Vincent: nooowww~ tiimmmee......for....the fun part....-he raised Corr's shirt as he extended his sharp claws to his top torso to his belly making a large scorched mark while doing the operation-
-Corr screamed and wailed in pain as he feel the blood leaking from his chest-
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I watched and smiled as Corr screamed.
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-it was going on for hours until Corr's body died and this whole inside was now mechanical-
Vincent: phew~ took lots of thosssse piecessssesss of scrap metal from this storage just to be ready for him....-looks at him as he was pale and dead as dark rings was around his eyes and his hair was blond and dirty up with blood and oil -
-Vincent smirk at his success and ruffled his hair-
Vincent: once he comes up......he might feel....odd....-chuckles- oooohhh I love to see this fleshling of a corpse walk -laughs-
Vincent: Sam....untie him....he may coommmee around, once he wakes up....but be sure.....-in a deep voice- He...DoSeN't...LeAvE... -phases through the walls-
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"Ok, Vincent." I untie him.
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-Corr's corpse was cold but showing he still has his clothes on but some major stitches all over him even his face has a major scar across his face with blood and oil leaking out from the surgery-
Corr: ........
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I smiled a little as I saw the stitches, and watched him to see if he would come back.
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-soon Corr's finger twitched and curl them but he steers from his slumber-
Corr: hmmm......
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I watched as he woke, staring at him curiosly.
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Corr's Pov*
-once I was out like a light I woke up but....it was still dark...oh..wait...the cloth...right... but somehow I was alright but something doesn't feel right....was I suppose to be dead?...did that Purple guy killed me?....and...am..am I still safe? but...for some weird and odd reason....I don't feel right...like....my hold body feel....well...I don't know how to put it but....kinda cramped? -
-tries to twitch my hands and flex my wrist to see if my body was ok and once I raise my arm...I found out I have no bonds-
-phew~ no bond so if no bonds then that means im safe....right?-
-tries to sit up but my body feels like lead as I decided to lay down. it feels so weird that why my body is like this....and...how long will I keep seeing this darkness in this stinking cloth-
Corr: -sigh- .....-frowns-
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Corr's Pov*
-soon I felt the cloth lift off from my face but my vision was blurry and hurts as I squinted to see who removed it-
-there you see his yellow golden eyes were now surrounded by black instead of white as his golden irises glows from the dark-
-soon my vision was clearing up bit by bit as I look up to see that scary puppet as my eyes were wide open from horror. then suddenly I try to scream but I was having a coughing fit as I spit up something, something that was not suppose to happen-
-soon he started spitting up blood and oil from what was pilling up in his lungs as he leans over and hurls up what was inside him over the edge of the metal table onto the floor as the floor was filled with blood with a mix with oil-
-I hurled up feeling sick like thing was caught in my lungs, but once that was done I flop on down back on the metal table feeling like my whole body is lead-
Corr: -gasp- -pant- -sigh- -looks up to you like you might do something- ....w-w-wha I-is -cough cough- it....-feeling scared but doesn't know what happen to him-
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"Vincent told me to keep an eye on you."
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Corr:....V-Vince?....y-you -cough- you mean...the purple man?
-feeling like having the chills just to see that guy again or better yet...away from that psychopath of a killer if he tries to do it again-
-Meanwhile with Vincent-
-Vincent stole some bread from next-door neighbors as he decided to head to the kitchen to make toast-
Vincent: -noms on toast - =3=
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I nodded. "Yeah, that's who I meant."
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Corr: is....is he here....-looks around the room hoping he's not here, but good news he isn't then that means I might have the chance to get out of here before he comes back but....-
-looks at the puppet-
-there is still this puppet watching me....wa am I gonna do....-
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"He went off to do something, he should be back later." I looked at him curiosly. "Don't mind me asking, but how does it feel to have all those metal parts inside you...?"
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Corr: w-wha are you talking a-cough- about? wa you mean by met...al....-then it hit me, the reason why my body feels like lead, the reason I feel sick, the reason why I feel my body feel so.....stuffed.....-
-I try to sit up quick to know what happen to me to see my security clothes was in a bloody mess with black stains on it I do not know of. I feel like panicking but I need to know if I can stand, as I toss my legs over to stand but once I'm off the metal table, I collapsed to the floor like I didn't know how to stand anymore-
Corr: G-GRAAH!! aahh!! -clenching on the floor coughing as all this goes in my head thinking why....just why am I alive, why am I here like this.....why.....-
-soon I whimpered on the ground as my own human tears was now turned to blood and oil leaking out of my eyes as I wiped it off until I saw what was on my hand to find my tears were now black bloody tears....I turned into a monster-
-with Vincent-
-once Vincent was busy noming on his toast and looking over some stuff he steals he usually does over his years, he heard a thump and a moan from the other room-
Vincent: hmm?.....-smirks-....hmmmm~ I guesssss he's awake then....hehehehehe.... -he left his stuff where its at as he was on his way to the storage room-
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I looked at Corr in pity as I saw him whimpering.
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-I laid on the ground in utter fear, as I saw my own hands were stitched up as well and....have these...metal...claws...these...these weren't mine...not at all...im not me anymore...that...purple guy what that puppet calls him Vincent, just ruined my humanity. and I'm too scared what he might do next if I see him near me-
-soon I decided I couldn't stay here, I need to get outta here and find help as I started crawling and whimpering as it was horrible that I couldn't stand with these metal parts inside me...I don't know what they really do...-
-soon Vincent phased through the wall behind you with a grin-
Vincent: sooooo~ how our little friend? -tilts his head-
-soon Corr's lifeless skin jump as he hear that familiar voice as he start to crawl faster out of the door to get out of here-
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I grabbed Corr to prevent him from escaping. "Besides the fact that he's dead, I think he's doing fine. He might need some time to adjust, though."
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-soon once I felt someone grabbed me, my panic meter hit the roof as I...well...screeched-
Corr: SCREEEEEEEEEEAAAACCHHH!!!!!! -it was so loud that I couldn't believe it was coming from me...it...was my scream....-
Vincent Pov*
-once I heard his screech I cover my ears from that noise that it sounds like a ear splitting car crash plus a chalk board and a ignoring fire drill horn combined to one...I was impressed I can make him sound like that as my eye twitches-
Vincent: GRAAH!! -flies to the other room to get away from the noise-
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I jumped in shock and let go of him. "Oooooooowwww......" I whined as I covered my ears.
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-soon my screech eased as it turned to a whine as I look back with a sad look as I start to crawl away from the storage room to get to the office to find a phone-
Corr: -mumbles quietly to myself- c-come ooonn come ooonnn g-gotta get there....-sinks my metal claws on the floor making a tapping noise. I look down at my metal nails as I try to curl them up so it'll be silent so I can ease my way to the office-
-Vincent Pov*-
Vincent: uuggh -rubs his ears- to think...I made a hybrid out of that goldie...-looks at his suit and decided to dive in a posses his original corpse...Springtrap....- welp....looks like were playing a game now......-smirks inside the suit speaking darkly-
OoOoOhH~ wHaT fUn We ShAlL hAve~<3 hmhmhmhmhm
-as he walks down the halls hunting down Corr-
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I smiled and watched Vincent hunt Corr. I decided to check the vents just in case he was in there, and maybe check the office.
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-soon as the coast was clear, I crawled to the office to my safe haven as I look up to the wall and it was 5:28 in the morning. I decided to see if my bag was still here but thank god to find my bad was still safely on the counter with my sketch book-
Corr: -whispers- yes~ -smile in victory as I grab it and goes under the table to dig to find my IPhone-
Corr: come onn...come on~ ....where is it...
-Vincent was still roaming the room looking left and right to find Corr like it was a game of hide and seek-
Vincent: maarrcoooo~.......maaarrrcooooooo~....hehehehe come out....come out...where ever you arrree....you immortal fool....-snicker-
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I come out of the vent into the office, my head poking out a little. I looked up to see Corr. I waited for Vincent to come so he'd have nowhere to run.
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-I wasn't paying attention to the doorway as I was focused to find my IPhone until-
YES!! -I finally found it, and I was so clueless to think it was right in my front pouch of the bag as I try to dial to my very good friend, but my metal clawed nails were in the way-
Corr: grr...w-why me... -I try forcing my metal upwards as I try to dial until my phone began to ring with the tunes of "Spooky Scary Skeletons Remix" by " The Living Tombstone" as I jumped from the loud noise it made-
Corr: OH SHHHH!!!! -I try to put it on vibrate but my hands were clumsy, but I managed to turn the sound off- ....-sighs-.....
-I looked at who was calling me to find it was Scott, my Manager and Boss for this awful place. I thought of dialing him but I decided to call my friend to pick me up as I dialed but it was so difficult with these claws in the way-
-soon Vincent/ Springtrap was roaming in the hall quite close to the office when he heard the tunes coming from the office but was shut off quickly just a sec, as if it was just shut off by someone-
Vincent/Springtrap: hmmm....looks like some ooonnee.....turned off the jaaammm.....-snickers-......looks like I forgot to grab that awful deviccccceeee.......
-as he was closing in to the office but once there, he finds you standing there-
Vincent/ Springtrap: hmm?.....
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i was just coming out of the vent when Vincent came in.
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((he's under the table where the window is 
-soon Corr was having difficult time to dial his friend's number, but was successful to make his phone ring her number-
Corr: -whisperly speaking to himself- yes~ come ooonn come onnnn pick up the phone.....
-still curls up under the desk as his back was on the wall-
Vincent/Springtrap: -looks at you asking quietly- ....is he heeerrreee..... -looks in the office window but doesn't see anyone in there-
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I heard faint whispering and looked under the table.
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-soon once I keep my phone up to my ear it just goes to voice mail-
Corr: nonono......-soon looks at the corner of the upper table of where I was hiding to find the puppet staring at me-
-I stud there frozen with my eyes widen, but kept the phone to my ear waiting to go to voice mail so I can leave an important emergency message-
Vincent/Springtrap:...hmmmm? -tilts head as he was still outside the office-
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I pointed under the table to signal Vincent that he was there.
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-Vincent smile on the inside of his suit as he make his way to the Office-
Vincent/Springtrap: hmhmhmhm~
-soon I heard his laugh, but then my phone beeped as I was ready to fill the voice mail my emergency message-
Corr: -whispers- h-hello...hey I-its me, Corr, l-look y-you gotta help me...Im stuck in this Fazbear Fright and they did something to me and--!!!!
-soon I felt my leg was caught by an animatronic hand as I was dragged out from the table and out of the Office-
Corr: SCREeeAAAH!!! -I try focus on the call but the phone slipped out of my hand from the shock that scared me to make me drop my phone as I scream to the phone- HELP ME!!!!
-I try digging my nail to the floor but only leaves makes on the ground and make an irritating screeching noise like a chalk board would do. so I let it go as this animatronic....bunny....thing....take me back to the storage room-
Corr: l-let me leave!?!
-Vincent was humming and snickering, hearing his prey screech and whine as he drags him back to the storage room to tie him to the wheelchair that Sam brought him so he may not go anywhere till he learns-
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I picked up the phone and turned it off.
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-once they made it to there little room, Vincent sat Corr to the office chair and pins him there as he ties his arms to the arm chair with wires. soon he tied his body to the chair as well.-
Vincent Pov*
-I snickered to see him all like this, it just so happens to really bring back memories of Jeremy when I scare him until he runs to Mike. soon it was quiet adorable I pinched his cheeks to see if he turns red like Jeremy does, but so happens....he did...he was exactly like Jeremy....soon I laughed at his face to see how awful he look right now just by looking at him....-
-soon he left his suit as his suit collapsed on the floor and floats right to Corr's face as Corr's face was turned away from his-
Vincent: hmhmhmhm~ myyy~myyy~....aren't you fun for gaammesss~.......
Corr's Pov*
-I was so scared of my life....that I might not have a life at all since he took it from me....soon I saw him got out of his suit as he floats right at my face as I turn away thinking he might double kill me again. I was too scared to look at his sharp grin and white eyes stare just looking right at me. but then I felt something sharp to my cheek as I flinched as I try to turn away from it but instead to look at Vince. I just feel like I wanna go to a place and crawl in there until I completely die....if I was able too...-
Vincent: nooowww....before you gooooo ....leaking again from those eyes....I really like to tell you something that you might not escape from....-he grins wide ready to say something-
Corr:.........-stays silent-.......
Vincent: weeelllll~....since I~ well...-chuckles- made some adjustments on you....-points at Corr-.... there is something you should know about....being dead.....
-Corr felt sad from being dead-.......
Vincent: well...-sigh- cut to the chase......-tries to rush it- .....your immortal....your dead...yadi yada~ good luck being a freak goldie~ -he laughs as he left the room but soon heard the storage room door was clicked as if he just locked the door to the other side-
Corr: W-WHAT!?! W-WAIT!?! -tries to free myself from the bounds until-
DING DING DONG DONG!!!
-the shift was over...it was 6:00 -
Corr: oh nonononono I-I cant stay here...n-not like this.... -tries to yell out for help- HEL--!!! -my mouth was covered in a cloth-
Vincent: hehehehehe~ whoops~ don't want the others to know where you are my little goldie~ -pats his head- and by the way....welcome home....Jeremy~ -grins wide as he phased through the wall-
Corr: HMMMHMMM!!!!-tries to spit it out but it was useless.....I sit there bound in the chair with my dead life bound to the building with no escape what so ever. now my only hope....was if...and only if....my message went through-
-I set there whimpering as my tears fell from my face hoping that my friend may come and find me soon-
.....-whines-......
((OMFG THIS IS LONG @ 3@;; I feel like I did a story -faints- ))
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