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This is an experimental character page for a comic that doesn't exist. I was just messing round with layout and stuff. Not sure how I feel about it.Related content
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Gothick-Kimmy [2008-04-21 21:33:23 +0000 UTC]
"our heroes"
The type is ugly (small especially) and would benefit from being in the middle of the boxes provided. Which look a bit too digital, imho.
Yojimbo's colouring is the least believable for me (he's at the front, come on) especially the coat and skin. More variation in colours could help. Ekkor's skin tone could use a tune up too.
The bottom box might look better if it weren't flush against the bottom of the page. A border of that blue/pink background at the bottom and sides would integrate it better into the image?
Th-this is how I feel about it.
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