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beanmachine [2002-12-09 23:24:36 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting. I really like the contrast between the water and the sky.

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aeritype [2002-12-09 23:17:57 +0000 UTC]

interesting, may i sugest some pointers?

i think that you shouldnt just give the sugested audience (us) it plain and simple as it doesnt give us anything to think about, it is all there plain and simple, also i think it needs more perspective to give it a more real feel and not everything needs to be in frame, you could have a real close up of a mountin only halph showing and in shadow. Also i think it lacks movment witch makes it lack in feel, to me everything looks in the forground so it also lacks depth , bluring of far away object maybe? to make the eye focus more on the centre peice of the image, this also gives it purpose and menaing to the person who is looking at it. Also things to me look nicer when they come in 3's this image is very uniformed with 2 planets ,,,,, ect. i think it also lackes emotion as everything is calm and ok with the world in this picture, u want to play with our emotions and make is really think about whats going on, its all about how we intermrete it, usually in my experience its what the viewer doesnt see is more affective than what he/she does see,

well this has took me years to type and now im really really tired, i got colledge tommorrow lol i better get some sleep,

hope this helps, id rather give a constructive critisism than anything else, but in the end you are the artist and this is your style its entirly up to you he eh


this took me so long to typ so the least u could do is take a looka t some of my art and maybe comment

well, this is the longest ever comment iv ever written and seen, sry for my bad grammer, i cant spell when i type really fast, anyway hope this helps,

aeri,

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tmpst24myst [2002-12-09 23:12:02 +0000 UTC]

this kicks ass!! i wish i was there right now.

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