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Description
Updated her description completely + added history at last + updated Relationships, removing some not so important characters from her life (from StarClan section) and added new onesName: Fallpetal
Age: 17 moons (1year 5months)
Gender: She-cat (female)
Clan: FeatherClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance: white-and-tortoiseshell she-cat with bright Lime Green eyes.
Personality: Fallpetal is sweet, warmhearted, cheerful and kind she-cat. She is very energetic too but since her past events from her history, she has calmed down, becoming more respectful warrior who keeps her nose out from trouble. She has pure loyalty for her Clan and she is ready to defend it with her life. She is scared of losing the ones that are close to her yet she has already lost the closest for her, including her family.
Family:
??? - Mother
??? - Father
Autumnpaw - Brother
Mate: **None**
Kits: **None**
Mentors (from newest to oldest):
former - Oakshade
former - Gorseblaze
former - Tigerflight
Apprentice(s):
current - Tinderpaw
History:
Fall and Autumn were born for two loners who lived outside of the Clans. Their life was peaceful until their mother died and two siblings were left to live alone with their father. Their father took good care of them until they came to the age that they could eat proper food without any help with chewing. Their father began to get more distance and one day he just disappeared, saying nothing about his leaving.
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The two kits were left on their own and they wondered around the forest. When they were old enough they began to wonder further and soon they found themselves in FeatherClan's camp. Leafstar offered them to stay and as two kits agreed on this, Leafstar named them as Fallpaw and Autumnpaw
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The first moons of Fallpaw's Clan life were full of joy as she and her brother were so bonded together. They shared a lot together and they were at the time known as the loudest and the most energetic apprentices.
Fallpaw got to known into apprentice called Nightpaw, who soon became her and his brother's target of their tricks. Soon enough Fallpaw though began to grow more and more feels for the warm gray tom and she watched how only her brother made tricks on Nightpaw.
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Time passed and Fallpaw along with Autumnpaw went up towards MistClan's border, spotting one of FeatherClan warriors, Dustlight, meeting up with black-and-white tom. They promised to be quiet about it as Dustlight seemed to be more than embarrassed by the situation.
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One day, Fallpaw decided to ask Nightpaw, would he like and go hunting or just randomly to walk with her. He agreed and they headed to the forest where they both get into a tiny competition, who can reach the top of the highest tree of the area. As they both reach the top, they admire the sighs of it, vowing how FeatherClan cats were the best.
Without them expecting, an eagle attacks them and Nightpaw protects Fallpaw from it, causing that he falls from the tree all the way down and at the result breaks his jaw and leg. Fallpaw blames herself for the event and still feels guilty about it.
Nightpaw recovered yet he couldn't be a warrior anymore. Soon Leafstar announces that he becomes an medicine cat's apprentice and for Fallpaw's bad, he leaves the den that she, he and Autumnpaw used to share. He also gets named as Nightbreeze.
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More time passed and Autumnpaw came up to Fallpaw, deciding to take her sister to the edge of one mountain (or highland area) he had found. As the siblings spent time there, a badger came and before Fallpaw could notice, Autumnpaw protected her from the evil badger, managing to get it flee but he fell of from the cliff into the water. Screaming out for his name, Fallpaw ran up to the shore and watched how Smoke, a loner, pulled her wet and lifeless brother from the water. This event broke her heart and all she could do was to cry for the lost of her dear brother who was the only one left from her family.
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Time passes and finally Fallpaw reaches the end of her training, earning her full warrior name, Fallpetal.
*WIP*
Relationships:
- Don't know.../Not sure about
- Friend
- Good Friend
- Best Friend
- Crush/Attraction
- Love
- Hate/Jealousy/Dislike
- Respect
- Family
- MateFeatherClanLeafstar (BizTheWolfLover )thoughts: "Our Clan leader. I respect her yet I don't know much personal about her."
Dustlight (FlareAKACuteFlareon )thoughts: "FeatherClan's deputy. I have high respect for her too and I can say that she is my friend. She has been around ever since me and my brother came to this Clan."
Duskflower (FlareAKACuteFlareon )thoughts: "Our Clan's senior warrior and Dustlight's mother. I have high respect for her and she is kind~ Understanding too"
(Chissanity )thoughts: "I have barely ever talked to her; only thing I know is that she was my ex-mentor's, Gorseblaze's, sister. And now she is in the nursery. I guess I should get to known her..."
Softdawn (DevilsRealm )thoughts: "Softdawn is a very good friend of mine! I am happy to be her friend and it is fun to spend time with her~"
Settingsea (EeveelutionsGoddess )thoughts: "Other friend of mine and Softdawn's sister! She recently became a warrior"
Sorrelpaw (FlareAKACuteFlareon )thoughts: "I met her as a kit and haven't spoken to her since. I wonder how she is doing? She at least seems cheerful alike me when I was an apprentice yet we don't share the same blood."
Nettlepaw (Gingerblazee )thoughts: "Sorrelpaw's brother, who became an apprentice before she did. Haven't spoken to him in a while either"
Oakshade (RandomKittyArtist )thoughts: "My latest mentor who finished my training. He was kind and I was happy he could finish off my training!"
Tingerpaw (MissMaple79 )thoughts: "He is my very first apprentice! I hope he will learn a lot from me"
Skylight (Music-Soul-Eon )thoughts: "Haven't spoke to him in ages"
Sunpaw (xMochaMint )thoughts: "She used to be one of my den mates~ I wonder how she and Berrypatch are doing"
SparkClanMistClanTornadoClanClawClanOtherStarClanNightbreeze (XxAyakoxX )thoughts: "I loved you and I never got to say it aloud for you... I still miss you and I hope you'll never stop visiting me in your dreams... I still would've wanted to tell you how I honestly felt and I hope you know the truth now..."
Autumnpaw (XxAyakoxX )thoughts: "Oh my dear brother how I miss you so... All we have experienced together and then you saved me from that badger... I could've never payed back what you did for me... I love you my brother and I'll never forget you...Ever"
Tigerflight (Kimi-Celine )thoughts: "My very first mentor who treated me alike a crow food! I'll never forgive him how he ignored me and my training..."
Gorseblaze (Flaring--Supernova )thoughts: "He was my second mentor and he at least paid attention on me. I was happy how far he got with my training yet he went and died... I hope he rests in peace"
Other cats of mine (in The-Six-Clans ):
Dustlight - FeatherClan
Duskflower - FeatherClan
Fallpetal - FeatherClan
Sorrelpaw - FeatherClan
Flamedapple - SparkClan
Redpaw - SparkClan
Minkkit - SparkClan
Ripplewing - MistClan
Burningpaw - MistClan
Shadestream - TornadoClan
Bluepaw - TornadoClan
Froststar - ClawClan
Blaze - Rogue
Persephone - Loner
Screen shots/Pictures where Fallpetal is included
The-six-Clans - Seeing as FeatherCln is the best!
Splishhhh Splassshh
three friends
TsC - Fallpaw's assessment
TsC - Track down your mentor
TsC - Are you seeing me Autumnpaw
TsC - I wished I could feel you again
Roleplay scenes where Fallpetal is included
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"yup! got it" he mewed and copied her, with his claws extended but not aimed at anything in particular, just the air in front of him
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Nodding, Fallpetal tilted her head for a moment. "Other quite simple strike is a strike shot straight forward", She crouched, pulled her paw back and as she broke into a jump she stroke her paw upwards, from around her cheek's level into the straight air in front of her. "That one is more trickier but it is quite useful trick if you got an enemy who is afraid of torn ears or scars on a face that move will back those down easily" she explained as she landed on the paws in front of her apprentice.
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"Ok! That's a useful trick" he mewed waiting her demo straight the attack. "Like this?" He crouched, lifted his paw to his cheek like she did and quickly shot it forward and his large, powerful paws looked like that blow could have been very effective
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Fallpetal nodded and gestured him to repeat the move. "Yes, around that" she agreed what he had just done and then began to think for few more moves. "Next theeen...." She wondered which move to pull out first so she laid on her belly to the ground. "Try and attack me!" She ordered keeping her face as neutral as possible.
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Tinderpaw padded a few paw steps away to ready himself. He crouched down like he had seen Fallpetal demonstrate many times. He slunk along the ground in a wide circle around her then pounced straight towards her with out streched paws
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Quickly turning around she rolled on her back and her hind legs ready, she waited her apprentice to land close enough then she kicked aiming at Tinderpaw's belly and sent the apprentice flying few fog lengths away from her.
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Tinderpaw let out an "oomph!" From the air getting knocked out of his lungs. His frustration got him up quicker and he let his muzzle scrunch into a snarl, and he lunged at her again, this time aiming for her belly when she would roll over again to kick him away
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Fallpetal narrowed her eyes, obviously notifying the young tom's plans. As he was about to leap at her, she quickly shifted herself from her back to her paws and rose on her hind legs, letting the tom hit empty ground as she slammed down at him again her fore paws pushing down on his shoulders hard enough to knock him out from breath again. Backing off she crouched down, once again ready to see would the tom try even more to take her down.
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Tinderpaw stayed laying on the ground but instead he reached out his paw quick as lightning to trip her, pulling her front paw out from under her. As she fell he got up and batted at her ears
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Gasping by surprise, Fallpetal felt how ground disappeared from underneath her feet and staring up at her apprentice she couldn't help but laugh for a moment. "Look at you~" She mewed and smirked after as she rose on her paws. "How did you feel?" she asked as she sat down and wrapped her tail around her paws.
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Tinderpaw smiled and looked down as his mentor praised him "uh well.. Um, in power?" He mewed to do his best to answer her question
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"Hmm~" Fallpetal nodded approving and smiled. "That, using your hind legs, is very powerful and useful move when you're being in very low situation comparing to your enemy." She explained and sat up, her tail swishing from the other side to the other through the ground.
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"ok! thank you fall petal" he wiped his head slightly.
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"Your welcome~" She purred and smiled. "Do you want to return back to the camp or do you wanna train a bit more?" she asked while tilting her head on her shoulder.
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"could we try a bit more please?" he asked
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"Sure~" Fallpetal nodded with a smile and tilted her had for a moment. "Well I just showed you the kick move, it is quite hard to avoid so I donno do I have any tricks for that..." She mewed and tilted her head to the other side. "...How good you're at climbing?" She asked after a moment as she had laid her eyes on her apprentice.
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"i thikn I'm decent at it.." he mewed calmly. "would you like me to show you?" he asked
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"Yes, please~" Fallpetal mewed with a smile nodding at the closest tree that was nearby them. "Show me."
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Tinderpaw stepped back to give himself a running start. he sprinted towards the trunk and lept up as far as he could. he latched his claws into the bark and clawed his way up, a decent speed but not very clean, a little clumsy
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Fallpetal followed him with her gaze and as he thumbed at the bark, Fallpetal began to lift her gaze up as he began to climb; quite slowly. "Alright Tinderpaw, try to lift yourself up a bit more; give more focus on your upper body too than only your lower body!" she mewed her advice to the tom.
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Tinderpaw oblidged and did as she suggested. he felt himself being lifted higher up the tree faster "it worked!"
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Smiling for his success, Fallpetal kept her eye on her apprentice as he climbed higher and higher. "Try to reach the nearest branch and get on it", She ordered after watching awhile.
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"ok" he grunted with a bit of struggle as he clung to the tree and tried to scramble higher. his weight was a lot to carry, but he had strong limbs with helped him. he reached the branch eventually and pulled himself with his front paws, his muscles rippling as they supported his weight onto the tree limb
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Watching him to heave himself on the branch, Fallpetal tilted her head for a moment in thought wondering between two things she could make her apprentice to do. "Alright Tinderpaw!" she called and straightened her back once again. "Stand on the branch; walk back and forth. You can practice some of your balance now as well as you're on top of that branch!"
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Tinderpaw turned his head and looked at the branch she wanted him to walk across after she had told him what he needed to do. "ill try my best" he mewed, half to himself. he placed each large paw in front of the other. his big paws helped him spread out his weight and balance easier, but his weight made it harder at the same time. he slowly but surely made his way up the branch until it started to dip in his weight. he then looked back at his hindquarters to watch where his paws went as he walked backwards towards the base of the tree. he did this about three times, each time slowly getting more comfortable
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"Keep going! It is looking good!" Fallpetal called after him as her gaze flickered from side to side along his padding. "Lets keep going with this 'til you walk naturally there for at least five times. Keep your mind straight."
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Tindpawpaw tried to clear his mind and just focus on keeping his paws in the right spot and balance himself. he was still a little wobbly still, but slowly was getting more3 comfortable up there. he started walking as if he was on the ground along the branch, back and forth back and forth
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"...Looking better." Fallpetal commented, mainly by tone that she could hear by herself. "We can practice that later! Come down there and we shall return to the camp; we can continue later on." She mewed a bit louder so Tinderpaw could hear her also and glanced at him. "You've done well today!"
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Tinderpaw started to climb down steadily but decided this wasn't very efficient so he changed his pace and quickly scrambled down butt first. He flicked his front paws around and landed on all fours beside fallpetal stumble and not very graceful. "Thank you" he mewed great full for her praise. "Thank you for showing me"
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Smiling, Fallpetal gave a flick to Tinderpaw's ear with her tail tip and purred: "Your welcome!"
As they reached the camp, Fallpetal padded up to the fresh-kill pile and picked up a sparrow. Turning towards her apprentice, she put the sparrow briefly down before she spoke. "You're free now; eat, rest, do whatever you wish! You deserve a good rest", Fallpetal mewed with a smile before she picked the sparrow again and padded away, leaving her apprentice by the pile.
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"Alright, bye fallpetal" he mewed before picking up something from the fresh kill pile for himself. He trotted away to eat in peace
(thanks for the RP :3)
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(Your welcome! It was fun~ :3)
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Just let me know when you'd like o o another one ^w^
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Tinderpaw trotted over to her, bursting with excitement. "Hello fallpetal! I'm your apprentice" he said as he reached up to touch noses with her
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"Yes!" Fallpetal replied and shut her mouth quickly noticing she sounded too high-pitchy-excited as her apprentice. "Ehem... Hehe...~ So..." She tried to build up her words again. "Yes I am your mentor" She smiled as she touched his nose with her own.
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I'll note you and we can continue :3
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I think I lost our RP, have you gotten the next one from me yet?
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(Lol so she has a brother named Autumnpaw and I have a character named Autumnpaw XD)
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(Autumnpaw, Fallpaw, I wonder what seasonal names will be next...)
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wanna rp later when i make a new character :3
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