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PauloNeshter [2016-08-11 02:02:59 +0000 UTC]

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I liked this art. It is quite striking. I like the colors and enjoy the beauty. The two girls are beautiful and attractive.
Some improvements can be made.
for example, the collar of the girl with more clothing has a far fit the center. In a quiet position as it is the distant collar neck does not seem natural.
I think you should have the tips of the spinal column on the back of the naked girl. with relevance to your body. The hair trim seems to follow a 2D logic, does not invade his back.
Because of the hair arrangement of the girl with clothes, I imagined longer hair appearing in the background.
about the naked girl. I liked her legs. I liked their pubic hair. However, according to the angle of view, the support leg should hide the leg rest further back. To this magnificent angle of the glutes, the rest of the leg should be back.
great job. very cool. ")

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saloniko [2016-08-22 05:03:21 +0000 UTC]

very nice atmosphere - hesitant pose on the left

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Arokhrynn [2016-08-13 21:26:49 +0000 UTC]

Excellent

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