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Published: 2010-09-07 14:53:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1036; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 2
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Description The dusk finds 221B Baker Street in languid peace, a striking contrast to what has been before, and will be on another day.

John's laptop resides on a side table, while the man's lap is decidedly occupied by Sherlock's head, and Sherlock watches keenly, mesmerized, as John's mouth moves, when he reads out loud his latest blog entry.

Mischievously, Sherlock complains about the fantastical twist John gives to the writing instead of sticking to the facts and deductions.


"Wrong!"

"Would you shut up and just listen?"

"I thought you wanted my input."

"I didn't. I just wanted you to listen."

"But it's not correct. Why would you inflict such grievous lies upon the world?"

"Trifles," John murmurs, palming Sherlock's chin and glaring at him sternly to drive the point home… Although Sherlock grinning back at him and taking John's hand to his lips may soften John's look slightly. "Giving the thing a bit of colour isn't exactly lying."

"It might as well be," Sherlock nips John's thumb between his teeth, and stares up at John innocently, the blogger pursing his mouth shut, gathering himself.

"There is nothing so important as trifles."

"Oh, give it a rest already, or I'll have to shut you up myself."

Sherlock focuses on John's fingers, sampling the salt on John's skin with a lick up his palm. "I'm merely suggesting--"

But that's as far as he gets before he's pushed and lifted, tackled and pinned to the sofa, John's lips pressed tightly against Sherlock's, his tongue begging for entrance.

After Sherlock obtains his presence of mind and stops smirking into the kiss, allowing himself to fully enjoy the taste of his lover, John parts, his breath short and ragged, pushing his hips forth as Sherlock throws one impossibly long leg over John's thigh.

"Told you."
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Comments: 42

Geilie [2011-01-26 22:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh I love this! I've been reading your fics all day and I aint even tired yet! But sadly I think I only have one or two left now. And I think I've read them before, but what the heck, I'll read them again just for their awesomeness! I read this one before too, but, awesomeness!

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danglingdingle In reply to Geilie [2011-01-29 03:36:18 +0000 UTC]

You spoil me rotten with your words, darling

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Geilie In reply to danglingdingle [2011-01-29 13:07:56 +0000 UTC]

Sadly I think I'm much better at giving compliments than constructive criticism. But every word I say I truly mean, so no lies to make someone feel better.

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danglingdingle In reply to Geilie [2011-01-29 15:05:38 +0000 UTC]

I am perfectly happy getting compliments in stead of criticism. I mean, I o this as a hobby, there's not a nickel in it for me, so why would I want to read people flogging me alive and telling how shit my stuff is?

You're a dear

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Geilie In reply to danglingdingle [2011-01-29 16:35:42 +0000 UTC]

Nice! Never thought of it that way! Now I feel less guilty for not giving constructive criticism! Thank you!

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sweet92590 [2010-12-17 12:17:48 +0000 UTC]

aww so cute!

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danglingdingle In reply to sweet92590 [2010-12-17 14:42:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you darling

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sweet92590 In reply to danglingdingle [2010-12-19 16:04:19 +0000 UTC]

always my dear!

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Splashabelle [2010-12-15 01:12:30 +0000 UTC]

Cute.

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danglingdingle In reply to Splashabelle [2010-12-15 06:22:17 +0000 UTC]

:tackleglomp:

Thank you <3

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Splashabelle In reply to danglingdingle [2010-12-15 06:30:30 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome my dear!!!

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alihay [2010-12-14 19:25:46 +0000 UTC]


ah, loving it again . . . you're a pretty darn good writer!

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danglingdingle In reply to alihay [2010-12-15 06:21:32 +0000 UTC]

Gosh! *whirls*

Thanks so much, darling, again. Your support is positively invaluable

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alihay In reply to danglingdingle [2010-12-15 11:47:49 +0000 UTC]

anyday!

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SabethaLamora [2010-12-14 17:50:24 +0000 UTC]

Awwe, really cute. ^_^

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danglingdingle In reply to SabethaLamora [2010-12-15 06:20:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the kind words, and for reading (Also, good to see you again )

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theChocolateFrog [2010-12-14 16:21:53 +0000 UTC]

This is adorable and very well written I love it

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danglingdingle In reply to theChocolateFrog [2010-12-15 06:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! So glad you enjoyed

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theChocolateFrog In reply to danglingdingle [2010-12-15 20:21:55 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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danglingdingle In reply to theChocolateFrog [2010-12-16 06:27:23 +0000 UTC]

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xxsatinangelxx [2010-09-10 23:17:37 +0000 UTC]

sooo sweet... great as usual x

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danglingdingle In reply to xxsatinangelxx [2010-12-15 06:18:34 +0000 UTC]

I don't know how I've missed this comment, but here I am, thanking you most humbly for reading, and apologizing. I never meant to ignore you.

Thank you for your kind words

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xxsatinangelxx In reply to danglingdingle [2010-12-15 17:06:09 +0000 UTC]

lol its okay
and I do tht sometimes, but no worries x

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danglingdingle In reply to xxsatinangelxx [2010-12-16 06:29:15 +0000 UTC]

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Luincalen [2010-09-08 16:06:52 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, I likes me a bit of John/Sherlock kissage. Well done!

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danglingdingle In reply to Luincalen [2010-09-08 17:49:09 +0000 UTC]

I really, really, really, REALLY need to write some kissage when they're standing up. I've a massive *thing* for their height difference

*nuh* They're so adorable *hugs laptop*

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Luincalen In reply to danglingdingle [2010-09-12 19:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, yes!

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ThePuddingMolester [2010-09-08 04:23:05 +0000 UTC]

Heehee. Reminds me of Taming of the Shrew. "I shall stop your mouth! *kiss*"

Or maybe that was just my imagination doing that. I DIGRESS. Awesome as always, hoping to see more more more! I do look forward to something more.

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danglingdingle In reply to ThePuddingMolester [2010-09-08 17:51:52 +0000 UTC]

Fear not, m'dear, there shall be more (though there will be a short-ish gap when I leave to England on Friday for a week..but then it will be all FIC AGAIN!! BWAHAHAHAA! ...ahem.)

Here I am, thanking you most kindly. You always manage to make my day

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ThePuddingMolester In reply to danglingdingle [2010-09-09 00:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Alright, England! FISH AND CHIPS! Have a lot of fun c:

Groovy! That is now my job.

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SabethaLamora [2010-09-07 18:52:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww, they're so damnably cute!

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danglingdingle In reply to SabethaLamora [2010-09-08 17:54:15 +0000 UTC]

They seriously are. Mostly, all I can do is to stare at them with my hands to my heart, head tilted, and making embarrassing little *hhnnngggghhhh*- sounds.

When I'm not writing, that is

Thank you, darling

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SabethaLamora In reply to danglingdingle [2010-09-08 17:56:34 +0000 UTC]

I suffer from the same infliction I'm afraid.

My pleasure. ^_^

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My-Revival [2010-09-07 15:10:21 +0000 UTC]

AW!

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danglingdingle In reply to My-Revival [2010-09-08 17:54:47 +0000 UTC]



Thanks very much *bows*

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My-Revival In reply to danglingdingle [2010-09-09 15:55:56 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome!

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LadyRavensknot [2010-09-07 15:06:05 +0000 UTC]

So lovely again! You really do have the talent of writing such a romantic scene and yet keep both Sherlock and John in true character. I love it!

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danglingdingle In reply to LadyRavensknot [2010-09-08 17:57:09 +0000 UTC]

You do realise that telling me that I've managed to keep them in character, instantly, instinctively, makes me want to cuddle you, don't you?

Thank you, sweetheart. I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed

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LadyRavensknot In reply to danglingdingle [2010-09-09 09:30:43 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you feel like that! But I mean it, you really bring them to life and placate my need for more Sherlock. (I can't wait until next year! ) I wish this was real.

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danglingdingle In reply to LadyRavensknot [2010-09-09 20:38:34 +0000 UTC]

Who says it isn't real? It's right there, you know

To hear that I bring them to life is so much more than any fanficcer could ever ask for. I just...I'm all over myself here. I can only hope I can keep up to par *hugs*

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deRanny [2010-09-07 14:58:12 +0000 UTC]

I love it.

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danglingdingle In reply to deRanny [2010-09-08 17:58:19 +0000 UTC]

And I am truly pleased to hear that

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

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