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DaniDragongal — Dinner Date (+ Animation Meme)
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Published: 2019-09-01 20:17:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 449; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Yay!! My fourth and final detailed drawing for my BANG BANG meme is up, and you know what that means??You can now watch the meme right here: www.youtube.com/watch?v=A9lCUg… !!!!
But woo mama this piece took an entire day longer that I thought it would, thank goodness It's finally done...
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Thank you so much for your comment and critique, they're greatly appreciated!
I'm glad you liked it, at least for the most part ^.^
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You certainly have a signature style, the colors and hard shading give your artwork a stained-glass appearance. And considering that your gallery has fantasy/medieval undertones I would say that those two features complement each other pretty well 
With that said, it is refreshing to see bold lineart used like this, when razor-thin lineart seems to be more prominent. Yet the lineart is still nevertheless smooth. Another plus for this picture is the composition, providing a nice sense of depth with the varying size between the young man and his date (who makes a good focal point at the same time), plus the negative space is nicely utilized with the banquet tables and windows
As for what I have to critique about this painting, is that there is a little too much contrast. (Which I find funny because most artists seem to have too little 
Overall though, this is a well done, atmospheric and fun piece. Good job
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Thank you so much for all your kind words and criticism!
For the contrast, that is definitely understandable haha. I have also noticed that many artists don't use enough, so I always try to add as much contrast as possible, I had not realized it actually hindered the pieces at points!
I also hadn't thought to add swirls to the sky, but I think that would definitely help to unify the piece more
And oh man I was drawing the background and ready to move on already! The idea of drawing more chairs was not appealing, I guess the consequence of that is a distracting background haha
Once again thank you so much for your comment, I greatly appreciate it!
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One can never tell how a dinner date like this will go down. She seems like the kind of person who likes her drinks but you have to be careful with her because she could do something unexpected.
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Oh man that's for sure, she's fun to be around but overwhelming at times! In my head I imagine she tosses the glass away and pulls him across the table for a kiss
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She's a gal who gets right to the point!
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It looks really nice, but the shininess if everything is too exaggerated. Aesthetic purposes of course, it doesn't matter. But i think that the shines should really be dominate on chairs, hair, and maybe floor. Otherwise, it looks great and well shaded!
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Thank you so much for your kind words and critiques! I like to add low opacity overlays to unite a piece better, but this time I wanted to try out adding direct shine to the outline of the character closest to the light source. I hadn't noticed it until you pointed it out, but that definitely detracts from the overall flow of the piece. Thank you again for pointing that out, I will keep it in mind while creating future drawings!
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No worries, he'll shoot himself instead of me anyway
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Well he tends to do that a lot lol
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ALSO, You did the animation meme VERY well! I don't often watch them anymore due to most people not putting in a load of effort, but the amount of work you did in every frame of animation REALLY shows, especially for the BANG BANG part!
If I could suggest where to improve on this for your next meme (if you do more), I would say either try making the tweening animation (namely where the hourglass is held up) smoother, or change to frame-by-frame for that too. The consistency of using the same type of animation throughout the video would be a bonus too! It is a bit more work but it'll look a whole lot better, since I can see you're pretty skilled with FBF anim already!
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Thank you so much, I am honored you like it aahhh!!
I'll admit that's my least favorite part too, but by the time I noticed how out of place it was I REALLY didn't want to finish, really lazy I know
But I have started my next Animation meme, trying out ToonBoom for the first time as well, so I'm focusing extra hard on the elements of FBF!
Once again thank you so much, I'm extra inspired to do better next time!
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heck yeah!! I can't wait to see your next work!! : D
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Yay, that's so good to hear!
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Wow, that's a VERY unique way to shade! I really like it, it adds a extra whimsy to the already caricature-esque style! Vert well done!
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Oh thank you so much, that's exactly what I was going for!
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BRO THIS DRAWING AND THE MEME ARE A+++++++++ FUCK YEAH
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