HOME | DD
Published: 2005-09-16 00:36:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 196; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
Redirect to original
Description
It takes one kiss to set my soul aflameAs silent smile's breath sends the body rushing.
Her eyes capture embers in a picture-perfect frame,
And another lips carress leaves the body blushing.
Each deep inhaling touch fans the tine fire,
But the fog chokes my vision and I feel rash.
The first fight burns away the clouds with words of 'liar'
While the passion fades a little after every time I ash.
The swiftly scorching love fleets as knuckles start to burn.
I'm down. Nothing left to ash and no more second tries.
A kiss can't keep this love alive no matter how I yearn,
So hearts are thrown to the ground as everybody cries.
Love wedged in a sidewalk crack with nothing left to say,
And I'm left with an addiction to get me through the day.
Comments: 2
AzalinRex [2005-09-17 01:39:39 +0000 UTC]
Ooh~ I really like this one. Gonna go +fav it now :3
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
sworndestiny [2005-09-16 00:40:18 +0000 UTC]
Excellent variety of vocabulary and imagery! I really liked this, how it seemed to deal with multiple topics. Good job.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0