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DarkEyesofMine — C: Fake Mary Sue Contest Entry
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---No flames please, it's for a contest and is a JOKE---(
= suu langage~!, 
= translation) LIEK OMFG, tis es mah ttly origenel karactar Preencess Raynebow Sparkel Hibbasaki~!Shi iz fromb da vilege hiddan en da spwelling eroarz hoo iz a pwincess aynd haz ubber supah powerz ob DOOMZ!
Wen shi waz lihtle hur famibly waz kielled cauze dey werre 2 powahful aynd evry vilage waz jellous ob der powah!
Shi haz a awsum Iye tecnik, wich iz ttly nut teh sharingan... butt doez teh sayme tings onli sicks millyon tiems bettah! Howevah, shi's rly silf-cuncious abaut et onli bein en won ob hur iyez su shi cuvers teh UTHER eiye!
Orochi-jackson wunts hur az hiz neckts bodeh, butt shi keicked hiz butt... shi eventoaly weant too sounde bcause Sasgay beggd hur aynd ttly luvs hur!
Shi gott board thogh aynd raan oof too de Akatsuki!!! Shi marryed Itarchi, hayd niyne mellion baybiz, aynd hayd ayn affare wit Sasgay. Itarchi aynd Sasgay endeden dere fiting cauz dey new et wold huurrt Raynebow~! Dawww~! So Kawai~!
Like Oh My F*cking God, this is my totally original character Princess Rainbow Sparkle Hibasaki~!She is from The Village Hidden in the Spelling Errors who is a princess and has uber super powers of DOOM!
When she was little her family was killed cause they were too powerful and every village was jealous of their power!
She has a awesome eye technique, which is totally not the Sharingan... but does the same things only six million times better! However, she's really self-conscious about it only being in one of her eyes so she covers the OTHER eye!
Orochimaru wants her as his next body, but she kicked his butt... she eventually went to sound because Sasuke begged her and totally loves her!
She got bored though and ran off to the Akatsuki!!! She married Itachi, had nine million babies, and had an affair wit Sasuke. Itachi and Sasuke ended their fighting cause they knew it wold hurt Rainbow~! Aawww~! So Cute~!
-----XD This was SO much fun to write----
---Entry for 's contest---
---Village Hidden in the Spelling Errors copyright to
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Comments: 139
ILURV HER! SHE'S SOO KEWL!
DOES EVERYBODY WANNA RAEP HER?
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Well duh!! Cauze shis ttly Bewtaful!
X'D
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OHH CHA! SHE NEEDZ BIG BOOBIEHZ THO
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OMGLIEK! SUPER KAWAII!!11!! SHE CAHN B FRENDZ WITH: PRINCESS-NEKO-LAURYNN-DARK'NESS-DEMENTIA-KAWAII-CULLEN-UCHIHA!!!111!!!one!!1!
Hehe... This is funny... It shows what Mary-Sue's really are. Like always and I stick by it; I dislike it when people accuse an OC of being a Sue because she's paired with a Canon character.
I'm going to upload my made-up Mary-Sue Neko Uchiha. Thankfully she will never appear in any stories, if I write any.
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ZOMG~! ANuther preencees! XD
I know, I really hate that : ( luckily, I've never had any of those problems with Sorano, I was kinda worried about that at first with the number of Deidara fangirls out there... ^w^
XD oh jashin, I'll be bracing myself, I hope my eyes don't melt from the sue-ness.
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Same here and yes, I was worried of the fan-girls. However, I've always loved Hidan before he was cool, he didn't have many fan-girls at first.
Oh, yeah. Definately be careful. I choked on one of Neko's natural sparkles which is caused by her uberly godly powerful 13-tailed unicorn/pegasus called Bob which is actually a girl unicorn/pegasus by the way. o_o
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XD I liked Deidara ever since he first appeared in the manga... and when he said katsu, the pyromaniacy was the icing on the cake~! <8D (lol, yes, I'm a fire bug)
Oh wowowow!!! that's so kawaidesu!! does bob have blonde piggytails and ribbons and does Neko dress bob up in pwetty dresses?? XD
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Deidara is awesome. I did kind of have a little crush on him, but now I don't due to crazy 10-year-old "MINE!" fan-girls on Quizilla. But even Hidan gets it, I took a quiz once and I got 'killed' by the quiz-maker's OC in a result because I got Hidan. I wants mah Hidan!
Oh yesh, she does dress up Bob! Bob and Neko lubs teh pink sparkely dwess, they have matching dwesses which they wear together, desu-ne? Bob doez have blonde hair in pig-tails with rainbow coloured steaks! ZOMG, so goffik! She even has her ears peirced and glowing eyes which she can shoot supa lazur beams of doom from her eyes and fart out sparkly bloo firee!!!111one!!. [Gosh, I can't even make it out. 
I hate to snitch on other people's OCs but check out this OC, Mary-Sue alert! Even her comments are... weird. She attacks/kills anyone who comments. What the hell is she thinking? But then again, it might be one of those "trolls".
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XD I just kinda ignore the other fangirls if they start hating on me... in fact, three of my closest friends on DevArt are all Deidara fangirls, it's just we know how to share.. XP
Lol, don't worry, you can have Hidan if I every get non-lazy enough to make a quiz... X3
KAWAI DESU !!onE!!1!!eleven!!!111!!
O.M.J... that's all I can say... X'D It's funny how serious she is about it, it makes me laugh more than the sue-ness it's self!!! pft.
!!!!!!!*SPOILER WARNING*!!!!
Lol, and the 10 tails is not a phoenix. It's a demon that resembles Kyuubi and is sealed inside the moon. Therefore me and my friends have come up with the theory that Madara will EAT THE MOON! X'D
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*END SPOILERS*!!!!!
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Yeah, I know and I don't think mythical creatures like that live in the Naruto-verse. 10 Tails looks scary! It does look like Kyuubi, but mixed with a frog [it looks like it has frog legs] and No-Face from Spirited Away. Noes! Madara don't eat the moon! 
Atleast there's no more crybaby Sakura for now. I think she belongs in Jurrasic Park with her own kind, not the Naruto-verse.
I know, she even thinks the character is herself. A lot of OCs appearance/personality do resemble the creator's appearance/personality, I don't really mind that. But you can't go around stabbing people with kunai unless you're not scared of a life prison sentence.
Hidan! Hell yeah! Speaking of quizzes, I did make a new Akatsuki one a little while back. *victory dance moment*
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And she totally doesn't look like someone puked rainbows on Sakura!
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I know hey! 8D
XD lol.
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XD that's what my sister said... lol.
Thanks ^w^
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*Roflsnort* Sound like one of those jokes XD
:3
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The sad thing about the message behind your pic? I've seen an actual OC just like this. The most terrifying thing was it was a SERIOUS character, not a joke!
But you made me LOL with this, well done!
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Lol, I know, I swear I've seen an OC with rainbow hair and she was a Hyuuga, but somehow an Uchiha at the same time, or something like that... i just don't understand how the hell people can actually take their own character seriously when they're like that... I cracked up every second of recolouring this!
XD your welcome anytime~! Glad I could make you smile.
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OH.EM.GEE shi izs liek SOOO KAWAII DESUDESUDESUDESUDESUUU!!!!!!!!!
shi`z so awsum desew!!1!1!1!!!1!11one!!11!!111
ttly betr thn tha mein charaktour offf Naruto!!!!!1!1111
((OMG She is like, so cute!!)
She`s really awesome!!
Totally better than the main character of Naruto!!))
P.S: I had fun writing this. XD
P.P.S:I hate Maru-Sues as much as you do, believe me -_-;;;
P.P.P.S: SOOOOO KAWAII DESUDESUDESUDESUUUU!!!!!1!1!1!!!!!!1!1!1!11one!!11!!!!eleven!!!1!!!11
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EE~! Thank u!!!one1!!!1!!!
RAYNEBOW SPARKEL LUVS YOO!
XD I know, it gets so annoying... you can't take Mary-sue's seriously...
@__@ bad grammar overload!!! Ahhhh! XD
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ORLY!!!1///?????/ 83
I know what you mean. -_-;;;
People create Uchiha kids, Uzumaki kids and so on and so on...
And NOT from the 'next generation', Sasuke`s sister 'who haz the sharringun and ish moar powerfull than sasu-chan and ita-chan and MADARA!!!! and eeeeeeveryone ish in lub wiff her!!11!!1) or, Naruto`s twin 'who haz a demon insied her and everyone h8ter hurr but then LUFFED her b`cuzz shi was sooooooo butifeaul!1`1111!'
YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH THAT PISSES ME OFF!! >_<
nuu!!!! D8
dun die on meh!!!111!!!
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That pisses me off cause it doesn't even make scene. Naruto's mother was the last Uzumaki apart from him, so I doubt any others will be popping up any where...
And don't get me started on Uchiha OC's... Sometimes, the plot's are well thought out an don't intefere with the actual story.. then it's okay. But Itachi killed EVERY Uchiha, at least who lived in Leaf Village... Madara helped, and Sasuke was left alove. NO ONE ELSE. XD
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It really DOES get on your nerves, no? -_-;;
Well thought out?? Do you call 'awh, Ita-kun told her what he planned to do, and he let her live because he loved her more than Sasu-san.'
And this was copy-paste.
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Yeah, no doubt about it.
XD noooo, I call well though out... possibly, many years back a member drifted away from the main clan and decided to live in another village or something... but then if this was the case, you'd have to admit the OC's sharingan wouldn't be as refined or powerful as Itachi's or Sasuke's due to lack of training. XP Idk...
Oh god no, send me the link, I need a laugh this morning... X') pft.
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P.P.P.S: Pwease hide the comments after this. XDDDD
PWEAZZE!! *puppy eyes*
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-.- oh lord... X3 I'm gonna go look... teehee.
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Go if you wish, but if you starts talking to her, most responses you`ll get are 'OK'.
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XD lol, don't worry... I just browsed her gallery and gave her a llama...
what? it said give a llama get a llama OwO XD
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Alright. XDDD
See? Colorovers or traced.
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Lol, yes... and alot of bases... at least I sometimes try (and fail) at free hand.. XD
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Yes, true..
She doesn`t even TRY...
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XD
RAYNEBOW LUVS U TOOO!!
XD Lol, thanks~!
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Oh lord lololol. That's scary. XD
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XD I know right!!
It nearly burned my eyes out doing the hair e.O
X'D all for the lolz...
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