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Published: 2003-10-05 23:30:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 3730; Favourites: 143; Downloads: 212
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Description                                   I thought I knew you.
                              I though you knew me.
                          Why is it when you need help you ask for me?
                      Yet your not there for me?
                  All I wanted was a hello,
                                                     but why do you make me feel alone?
             Who do you think I am?
           Do you not know of my powers?
          Why do you treat me like dirt,
                                                     and step all over me?

     If you want I can be your friend.
     I will never leave you,
                                      but you have left me.

   Give me a sign,
                        let me know if you want to go.
   Let me know if you don’t want me as a friend,
                                                                      since I am still waiting.
                                                                      still waiting for your reply.
      I don’t know how long I can wait.
       It’s been months
         It’s been years
          I don’t know how long it has been anymore.

              I sit here all alone,
                                          wondering how it could have been.
                      I still have your memories in my head,
                                                                             they still haunt me
                                They still haunt me today....
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Comments: 67

DarkS0uI In reply to ??? [2003-10-09 07:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow thanks! Don't know what to say... like one of those movements when you get on the spotlight and are like um.... why am I here again? hehe.

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lovely-death [2003-10-09 00:34:52 +0000 UTC]

Me really likes the screenshot. It's saying, "I'm eclipsed but my words still live on." That's what I got out of it. The poem is so emotional. I think many of us have walked through that path or been walked on like a path.

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DarkS0uI In reply to lovely-death [2003-10-09 00:39:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow you saw that hehe... kind of how I wanted it . The darkness shows the light and the light shows the darkness.... That’s sad to hear many have traveled the same painful roads… the paths of our lives… Yet a universal feeling I guess… Thanks! .

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lovely-death In reply to DarkS0uI [2003-10-09 00:50:19 +0000 UTC]

WHAT?!? Well...well, you have to bounce. lol By the time I finish READING and signing the papers you're going to be gone. hehe

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DarkS0uI In reply to lovely-death [2003-10-09 00:52:24 +0000 UTC]

I have to bounce?.... hurry up with those signings... faster...
/me makes a stamp for lovely-death.....
/me for that matter...
/me scans in the signature... copy paste all done

/me I don't have to bounce much muahahhaa....

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lovely-death In reply to DarkS0uI [2003-10-09 00:42:32 +0000 UTC]

Yes...well, did you take that picture? Anyway, woul d you mind me adding you to YIM?

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DarkS0uI In reply to lovely-death [2003-10-09 00:45:24 +0000 UTC]

Actually it is a 3D image made in 3dsmax I created it and then decided to turn it a bit reddish… Sure you can add me . /me pulls out the 15 page disclaimer… and sign here and oh here… and here… and you have 14 more pages to go, good luck .

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domeafavor [2003-10-07 19:14:39 +0000 UTC]

I love how you formed it in the shape of a moon and all that. So sad.. I know the feeling well.

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DarkS0uI In reply to domeafavor [2003-10-08 03:34:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah thanks... it was a sad moment when I wrote it.... yet don't think much of it now.... but thought I submit it anyways.

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danceman [2003-10-07 17:56:25 +0000 UTC]

holy shit... how the hell do you do it? your poems of lately really have griped my heart this is painful to read but beacause of what it make me feel... and remember.

simply incredible and calls for a fav

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DarkS0uI In reply to danceman [2003-10-08 03:26:46 +0000 UTC]

I don't know.... how life comes I put before me..... I try to write it out..... yet it can't ever be written fully... So that is how I write them…. Thanks for the fav , and sorry for the past memories...

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sweetflower [2003-10-07 05:17:11 +0000 UTC]

yup bringz back some memoriez from my past....ah wellz ...deeply described... brought ur point/feelingz out well ...helpz get through woteva it is dat was unpleasant....welll at least i know it was like dat for moi

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DarkS0uI In reply to sweetflower [2003-10-07 05:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and I am glad it helped you! . Check out my journal .

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azurainsides [2003-10-07 02:19:10 +0000 UTC]

This brings back saddened memories...

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Darknessofthesun In reply to azurainsides [2011-01-30 22:42:28 +0000 UTC]

yes it brings back dreaded memories but we live on...

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DarkS0uI In reply to azurainsides [2003-10-07 03:52:30 +0000 UTC]

*Sighs* yeah..... I know how that is.... Sorry that I made you sad... I guess I shouldn't have submitted it... Heh... but it was something lost in my journal and it wanted out :/. So I put it there and now it hurts others .

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