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daveyrocsmysocs — close your eyes
Published: 2004-12-25 16:18:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 60; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description pulverisation of this day dream,
leaves me dry of contemplation,
and the sky never looked so blue,
and your words never seemed so smooth and soothing,
too bad it's just my deep day dream,
sorry it's such a lovely silhouette,
and your eyes are the sea i escape to,
without any worries or direction,
how it must feel to live forever,
too bad it's just my imagination,
sorry it's such a vivid dream,
you smashed my every sense of wonder,
and i'm left with nothing but confusion,
your harsh words drive me insane,
too bad it's not just a deep day dream,
sorry we're such an empty silhouette,
and my tears are the sea that i can't escape,
without any worries or distractions,
how it must feel to live a life of rotten memories,
too bad it's not just my imagination,
sorry it's not just a vivid dream,
you took my every sense of wonder and peace,
and now i'm left with nothing but confusion and this box of matches,
i use to burn you from my memories.
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Comments: 5

JenniferStarling [2005-08-17 22:49:50 +0000 UTC]

I think this could be taken two ways, either a murder by fire or simply burning the belongings and memories that you have of someone else's. I'm unsure which it is- but that doesn't stop me from liking this poem.

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to JenniferStarling [2005-08-21 02:23:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you. i'm glad i got you thinking.

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medusa11 [2004-12-26 17:57:58 +0000 UTC]

i could read your poetry all day

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to medusa11 [2004-12-27 18:47:52 +0000 UTC]

that's a very flattering compliment,thank you

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medusa11 In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2004-12-27 19:21:11 +0000 UTC]

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