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ddrcoke21 — Hicktown, USA
Published: 2008-12-01 03:03:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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I live in Hicktown, USAYou can buy a pack of socks here
For just a dollar oh eight
Wearing hunting jackets to work
Is perfectly okay
Where the first day of buck season
Is a holiday
Guys in beat-up red pickup trucks
They all remember the girl they fell in love with
In the backseat of that car
We do our own landscaping here
Because every day is like sunny California
We just try to get by
On blue collar jobs and cheap wine.
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Comments: 2
Hm. I don't see anything to criticize. The details are unique and interesting. I love how your works are unstructured but your words still have a great rhythmic quality. The occasional rhymes are nice, too.
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