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So, quite a lot of explaining to do around this.
First idea - An ugly, lonely pony who is different to the rest.
I wanted this to be, a pony who was changing into something, but he didn't know what, so he hid away in a cave and pretended to not exist. Sad, i know.
BUT, then my brain started functioning and i remembered a scene from the book, the hunger games..
so its kind of the first idea, improved. anywayss, this horse has been running from the unknown, and now he has found himself alone in a cave, breathing fire.. things have been happening, like others being killed and hunted, and now, he has changed in many ways. the way he seeks solitude for clarity, has come to life, and saves himself from being the hunted. he's scared & confused, and while running from himself, stumbled upon this mini canyon and feels safer within these walls.
I'm unsure what i want to do with this.. I might even make a few changes.. overall, i guess its okay, right?
All constructive criticism appreciated!
Background - Burtn
Horse - upandy
Fire - reincarnationOFfoxes
All else - Yours truly.