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deepinsidemyself — Over Distance
Published: 2003-01-02 02:02:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description Over Distance

You stand on beaches of far off shores
Looking out and wondering if I am thinking of you
And over rolling seas and crashing waves
I am standing on my own beach
Wondering if you are thinking of me

You are in my head
In my very thoughts
And since you wont come out
Forever you will ever stay
Locked in my heart

CHORUS:
But you’re so far away
I can’t reach out
To have your hand stroke my face
To share moments of passion and desire
So far away, that’s where you are

Our love stands strong
Through our distant connection
A ribbon of red
Linking our hearts
A ribbon that is invincible

I look over the horizon
In your direction
A tear streams from my face
Because you are so far away
That we can’t share this moment together

CHORUS

Through sunrise and sunset
My heart beats strong
And even though you are not
You are standing by my side
Whispering all you feel

The wind blows past my check
Carrying your kiss
Warm morning grasses
Are you loving hands
You are all around
CHORUS

But no matter what
Even though you are far from me
You are near
Closer than any other
For you are in my heart

And that’s the closest anyone can get
And you have seized that special place
Defend it always for
It is your fortress
It holds you in my heart

So keep in whispering into the wind
For it will get to me
Keep kissing the breeze
Soon it will touch my lips
And keep loving me
For I will not stop loving you

For you are not so far away after all
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Comments: 2

deepinsidemyself [2003-01-11 00:24:45 +0000 UTC]

yeah, i was wondering about that. i changed it so now.. its different. so no worries on that anymore. thanks chris!

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thetangyzip [2003-01-09 00:29:22 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like a really cool song in my head, do you have music for it? If not, I can send you some ideas. Anyway, this is a good poem for a song, simple and rhythmic. The only thing I don't like is the word "uncuttable". "invincible" would also fit, as would "stronger than death" or some other one-sylable word. I really like the second to last stanza, a lot.

So keep in whispering into the wind
For it will get to me
Keep kissing the breeze
Soon it will touch my lips

Beautiful, I love the way you make the distance between you two seem insignificant. Good poetry, I like it.

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