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Published: 2002-12-03 23:21:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 74; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Standing StillThe emptiness fills
My very being
So lost I feel,
So incomplete
Time has no meaning
Seconds fly by
But it stands still
For me
Yes for me
Forever time will stand still for me
Everything around me is so fake
Wrapped in plastic and concrete
Rooms small, enclosed
I cant get out
Things donβt change
All will remain
Evolving into something better perhaps
But it cannot change its purpose
It all stands still for me
Forever things will stand still for me
Along the roads
Along the minds of time
Nothing changes
Always remembering and seeing what was there
Caring for nothing
All falls apart in the end
Love ones die and others cry
But it all stands still for me
And only me
Forever people will stand still for me
I know not this death
Whom everyone fears
He cannot touch me
Iβm just out of his grasp
In reality, if there is such a thing
Time stands still for no one
People come and go
Things change
People die
But no matter what people say
it stands still for me
Everything will always stand still for me
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Comments: 3
Nothing wrong with some good ole repitition, especially for song-writing (its poetry too). I like the concept, and I like your style-you remind me of how I wrote when I first joined. Hmmmm...
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thanks.. i should have added this in the description but its a song so... thats why its kinda long and drags.. its the way i want it to be though. but thanks for the comment
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strange this... good... but strange...
it seems to drag on... be somewhat repetitive...
"Rapped in plastic and concrete"
Is that meant to be Wrapped?
erm, other than that... it's an interesting concept... and I think if you maybe tried refining the verses down, to concentrate more into less... I think you'd have a kickass poem...
hope this helps...
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