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deepinsidemyself — They Are Comming
Published: 2002-12-13 01:24:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 78; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Description They Are Coming

Sitting in corner
Holding my legs to my chest
Rocking back and forth
For I just found, I have failed life’s test

I am so scarred
Some just hold me
Hold me so tight
So I cant breathe

They are coming to get me
To take me away
I ask you this
For me please pray

For I am so frightened
Of what is to come
I am a fool
How could I be so dumb?

For I failed life’s test
It's me they will take
The men in white coats
My soul they forsake

They are at the door
Ringing that damned bell
They are going to take me
To my own white hell

Please just hold me
Don’t let me go
This is your test
If your friend or foe

Save me from them
Don’t let it be me they take
Cause they don’t know
That it was all fake

Why have you let them
Come through the door?
I just found
I can trust you no more

I will never forgive
What you have done to me
I can’t believe
You didn’t answer my plea

Condemn you to hell
You fucking bastard
For no more
Will I call you master

I hope you never forget
What you have done
You have ruined everything
You fucking cunt
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Comments: 2

lathe [2002-12-14 03:44:29 +0000 UTC]

really nice work, i think, but you lost me on the last two stanzas. my dad always tells me that most of the time "when you cuss, it means you have nothing important to say." I disagree, in that sometimes it can make something more powerful because they are taboo, but this is not the case. just thought you'd like to know.
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solocommand [2002-12-13 01:29:43 +0000 UTC]

o_o...reminds me of a song i heard a while back "they are coming to take me away, haha, to the funny farm..."; with a twist. lol

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