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Commentary for April 13, 2013:

Drawing rifles is hard, especially when you don't have any props to work from... Just getting the security guards posed correctly was tricky, since I've not got a great deal of experience drawing that kind of pose. Still, I'm rather pleased with this page, overall. The docking area was fun to create and I'm generally pretty satisfied with how my hand drawn stuff turned out too. The only thing I'm not terribly happy with is the corporate aid welcoming Eon aboard Astro Station 25, but it's not a fatal flaw in this page by any means.

Addendum for October 3, 2019:

In order to bring the format of the earlier chapters into line with Chapter 7 onwards, I’ve made an updated version of this page, which is larger, with clearer text. Hopefully, this will make the earlier chapters easier to read.

I also tweaked the dialogue a little bit on this page to make the guards sound more aggressive, but that’s the only notable change here.

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