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DerRiedl — Rising of the Hawk

Published: 2007-02-27 00:07:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 2133; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 124
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Description Background: Photograph of the sky

Hawk: dead one, photographed in biology class

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DerRiedl In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 22:58:58 +0000 UTC]

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Pi-Tec In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 16:46:25 +0000 UTC]

I like the concept. However, the hawk is pretty dumb-looking (well, you can't help that), and the shadings oppose the background. You should apply an inner shadow with multiply blending or linear burn blending, or something like that, and liven it up with a lens flare, put on the original sun, so that it looks as if the bird was part of the picture.

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DerRiedl In reply to Pi-Tec [2007-02-28 16:41:52 +0000 UTC]

i did it again.... how do you like it now???

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Pi-Tec In reply to DerRiedl [2007-02-28 21:43:49 +0000 UTC]

Its lighting is awesome, but I noticed the reflections on its leg are also a problem. If you could retouch that one too (I suggest blur tool or paintbrush), it will be a masterpiece!

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DerRiedl In reply to Pi-Tec [2007-02-28 22:08:00 +0000 UTC]

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Ladyeternalflame [2007-02-27 15:45:48 +0000 UTC]

It seems to me like that branch is awfully high up...maybe put some more shadows on the hawk, otherwise it's lovely, I like birds, hawks are cool, very nice pic.

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DerRiedl In reply to Ladyeternalflame [2007-02-27 15:49:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!

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Ladyeternalflame In reply to DerRiedl [2007-02-27 16:01:12 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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nibs89 In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 15:42:53 +0000 UTC]

This looks pretty good, a couple of things though. I know how big a pain it is to selectively knock out an object or thing (such as the hawk) from a picture, I can tell you did a good job, but it's still pretty apparent that it was done.

Areas like fine fuzzy feather areas like around the ankles are too clumped compared to what they would normally look like. Suggestion on how to fix that could be to take the picture of the hawk in front of a blank color screen or paper, would make cutting it out from the background significantly less painful. Either way though, this really does look good and really, most people probably wouldn't notice the insignificant stuff I mentioned.

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DerRiedl In reply to nibs89 [2007-02-27 15:48:26 +0000 UTC]

great critiqe!!! i appreciate that!!! thanks a lot!!! maybe i'll do it again...

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nibs89 In reply to DerRiedl [2007-02-27 15:50:03 +0000 UTC]

Glad I could help

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DerRiedl In reply to nibs89 [2007-02-27 15:51:01 +0000 UTC]

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Celestial-SeraphiMan In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 15:42:02 +0000 UTC]

Excellent!

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DerRiedl In reply to Celestial-SeraphiMan [2007-02-27 15:42:51 +0000 UTC]

thx a lot!

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serekan In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 15:39:10 +0000 UTC]

The hawk looks awesome against that sky! very nice

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DerRiedl In reply to serekan [2007-02-27 15:40:10 +0000 UTC]

thank u!!!

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PinkRockZz In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 15:03:36 +0000 UTC]

hehe na KUHL ^^ haste fein gemacht

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DerRiedl In reply to PinkRockZz [2007-02-27 15:19:21 +0000 UTC]

dankesehr!!!

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theichibun In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 12:51:30 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done. I love the clouds.

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DerRiedl In reply to theichibun [2007-02-27 15:20:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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zinemerald In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 00:54:48 +0000 UTC]

it's a good clean cut, can't tell it was added in.

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DerRiedl In reply to zinemerald [2007-02-27 15:25:39 +0000 UTC]

thx... but the lightning... does not fit perfect!

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Chickwcam In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 00:51:55 +0000 UTC]

very cool!! I like the way you put motion into a stuffed hawk... he looks like he's ready to fly off.

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DerRiedl In reply to Chickwcam [2007-02-27 15:26:16 +0000 UTC]

haha!!!... great thank you!

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hosmer23 In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 00:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Great put-together-itive-ness..... The hawk fits nicely into the background Kudos!

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DerRiedl In reply to hosmer23 [2007-02-27 00:46:05 +0000 UTC]

yepp.... thank u sooo much!!!!

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clistiastas In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 00:38:19 +0000 UTC]

This is nice. Isn't it creepy how realistic stuffed and preserved birds look?

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DerRiedl In reply to clistiastas [2007-02-27 00:39:52 +0000 UTC]

thx, yes it is...!!!

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irish1989 In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 00:37:27 +0000 UTC]

such a nice sky! looks real good!!!

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DerRiedl In reply to irish1989 [2007-02-27 00:38:05 +0000 UTC]

thx

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UntitledArtist-01 In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 00:35:36 +0000 UTC]

Not a bad concept. The light on the hawk should better match the sky's strong backlighting though. Pretty cool, though.

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DerRiedl In reply to UntitledArtist-01 [2007-02-27 00:37:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Desertfire In reply to ??? [2007-02-27 00:32:57 +0000 UTC]

It's very striking!!!

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DerRiedl In reply to Desertfire [2007-02-27 00:36:47 +0000 UTC]

thx!

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Desertfire In reply to DerRiedl [2007-02-27 00:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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NEDxfullMOon [2007-02-27 00:28:01 +0000 UTC]

thats a nice sky

and the hawk.. well... im not so into dead animals

keep it up MOon

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DerRiedl In reply to NEDxfullMOon [2007-02-27 00:30:39 +0000 UTC]

haha thx

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SaldaeanFarmgirl [2007-02-27 00:09:38 +0000 UTC]

It's very pretty and almost flawless... maybe you could make the branch shade darker... the shadow and place on it seem odd compared to where the sun is. PS: How do you use CS2? I have it and I hate it, I have 6.0 and it works so much easier for me...

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DerRiedl In reply to SaldaeanFarmgirl [2007-02-27 00:12:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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SaldaeanFarmgirl In reply to DerRiedl [2007-02-27 00:30:10 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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