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deviantRealism — Solitude.
Published: 2008-03-11 08:37:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 132; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Like a rock,swaying in the solid sea.
Bending to the caressing torrents.
Folding on the beating waves.
A soul cut sideways by the storm,
untill but shards remain,
a reminder of what once was.
Washed upon the weathered shore,
in longing, in silence,
forever waiting.
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Comments: 3
... whotf is rach 1607 and why is she so dumb? the first line fits GREAT, it ties superwell with the last three.
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The imagery that lies here is quite strong and nice.. and quite relevant...
good job!!
do read my posts if you get time.. and leave a comment ...
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oh dear.. i meant to tell you the first line is shit.. the rest is good but a rock doesnt fit in
much love x
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