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(quick note: i cant post drawing because my computer is being difficult so i will mostly be posting chapters of my little story,also i am new to deviantart so don't judge me. :/)

prologue
(swords POV)
it all happened so fast...
the explosion, the fall, the impact... and then... "hello? jack?" a voice? "earth to jack... brother? come on! wake up!!! wakeupwakeupwakeupwakeupwakeupwakeupwakeup!!!"
(riyanna's pov)
"did you just wear yourself out saving me from meta knight?" it HAD been quite the brutal battle.
"guess he's in a coma... *sigh* typical. well jack, i'll take good care of sparkcia for you" she said drawing the sword from the ground "huh. weird... usually this is bigger... but this is the size of one of my golden cutters!" "ugh" the sound made her jump. "where... am.. i? and wheres my sword?
"jack?!?" she was so overjoyed that she rushed over to hug him. "get your hands off me woman!" he threw her off. "who do you think you are!?" "what do you mean? i'm your little sister!

end of prologue
hey guys!jake here.i just thought i would end it on a cliff hangar to key you in on the plot. so first you need to know who these characters are. they're names are jack(split into fourths) and riyanna. jack is riynna's older brother and quite a tough cookie. has many talents, such as b-boying,fencing and building stuff. he is a carbon color kirby with roller skates, a yellow and blue backwards cap,and a blue and red yo-yo. his weapon is the electric sword sparkcia, which grants him electrokenesis, even when disarmed. his yo-yo is actually quite versatile. it can grab opponents, ledges, and even projectiles. thats about it for jack so onto riyanna.

riyanna is basically a hot pink kirby with a pony tail. she is jacks younger sister and isn't as strong as jack but is still quite tough. her weapon is a pair of golden boomerangs. she was once a ninja (but you wont see it in this story) her boomerangs have a small slot for an elemental orb or a round bomb. her talents are: skating and piloting

the plot:
meta knight kidnapped riyanna! jack immediately rushed to her rescue, he saved her but inadvertently caused the halberd to crash into green greens. before jack could get off he was sliced into four by something using dark meta knights sword. these four parts are called sword(duh), yo-yo(another duh),spark (electrokenesis),and wheel (rollerskates) they each have a personality. i will go over each of their personality and more story details regarding them in the chapter they appear in. so sword has a sword (again duh) and a red sword hat. he is the embodiment of jacks chivalry and honor. because, surprisingly, under that yellow and blue cap is quite the chivalrous warrior. anyway back to the plot. the 4 of them landed on the corners of dreamland. sword was the first to wake up after the fall and riyanna thought he was jack so she tried to wake him up and here we are..

so thats all for today! k thanks for your time byeeee!!!!!