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Published: 2002-09-04 03:46:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 202; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 39
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Twisted sight, centers my soulFeel my presence, no longer whole
Fly through reality, crash trough dreams
Wake up to a new life, new things to be seen
Watch the tower slowly crumble
See my empire start to fall
Reach out to grab a future
Mangled between my wretched claws
Perceive the flight of one in solitude
Watch as he tries to fall
Wait with a newfound ambition
Discard yourself for a fucked up religion
Life through one of which I dream
Collect the whims of hollow thoughts
Fall from heaven straight to hell
Left behind with no-one to tell
Fight the roots from which I sprung
Let the world ascend the rung
One step closer to a new oblivion
Step back further for a new rendition
Life has led me back from hell
Let my death consume the well
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Comments: 5
ice-dite [2003-11-16 14:04:32 +0000 UTC]
hehe, forgot something!! it was supposed to say:
no hollow thoughts here, love the feelings it evokes
it's well written
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ice-dite [2003-11-16 14:01:07 +0000 UTC]
no hollow thoughts> here ...love the feelings it evokes
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hideko [2003-09-18 06:54:50 +0000 UTC]
I don't know why but its like how i feel sometimes though i aint really a poet and good at grasping my emotions...But i really like it cos theres just well...i dunno i just like it...no explaination for it man...=]
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nene-chan [2002-09-05 01:38:43 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure of the meaning of this either, but I like the rhythm and there were a few lines that jumped out at me.
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waterrat [2002-09-04 16:58:27 +0000 UTC]
I agree I'm not quite sure what the meaning of this one is!! Cuss words don't normally do poets justice but I think you get away with it here especially in it's context. Nothing jumps out and grabs me about it though. Keep up the good workβ¦
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