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Published: 2008-09-24 08:09:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 127; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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AuroraThe thundering rain cuts through the crowd.
It's the voice of madness amplified loud.
Screams of joy, rage, sorrow and pain
Too many emotions to palm in this melodramatic rain.
A tiny flicker sets off in the gloom of the night.
Glimmer of hope saying, "Everything is going to be alright."
Promises made at the hold of both hands
But broken dreams seep through like sand.
The wailing winds burn through the walls
With a dancing rhythm and a trancing squall.
Breathing the life that cannot be seen
Leaves one to live a life on the in-between.
The shattering silence speeds in all directions
Eliminating all doubt and bequeathing only a reflection.
Looking deep it's a pull in into the final hour
Where the angels are waiting for the bloom of a flower.
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Comments: 4
Very nice. I like the flow. It carries it's self along well. I like the imagery as well. Pretty much hits the target perfectly. The rhythm isn't constant, but i like the switch-up, and it would work well in a song.
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Very interesting poem. I love the imagery, especially that of the "broken dreams seeping through like sand"
Some of the lines don't quite match the rhythm, the main two being "Too many emotions to palm in this melodramatic rain." and "Glimmer of hope saying, "Everything is going to be alright.", both needing less syllables.
I like "angels are waiting for the bloom of a flower" best of the three.
Anyway, I liked this poem very much. Keep it up
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wow, that is beautiful.
the imagery is brilliant, and it flows so well
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This is a lovely poem! The imagery here is amazing. Keep up the excellent work!
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