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Description
Name: Devilrose (Delvina)
Species: Genie
Age: Lost count after the year 1658
Sexuality: Straight
Likes: Blood, Aladdin (the movie), cheese, the fear of others, money, and her friends. (and partners in assassin crime)
Dislikes: Mushy food, the sound of styrofoam, pastel colors, ladybugs.
Weapon: Fist, death bubbles (they are next to her right hand), and her tail
(SHORT) version of her back storyelvina was a happy genie and hs have many masters in her long life. She was in her lamp on a beach when a man named Robert Duncan rubbed her lap and asked for 3 wishes, 1, change her bright pastel colors into something dark and evil, 2. give him a huge hotel so he can murder innocent people, and 3, change the way she acts, thinks, make her have a bloodlust and be is wife in murdering crime. However in this world, after the 3 wishes are up, you get a slave and to set them free you cut off there arm braces and they will go off another place to have it happen again until they get damaged enough to die, that our there lamp gets busted. Robert how ever died in a police shoot out after being caught, before he could let her free and now she kills people to satisfy her bloodlust of her new changed self. One day she met yukari when god sent her to kill Devilrose (Yukari back story soon) and she met gray when she was paid money to kill him while he was in a nut house for killing a family of 6. She now lives in a cabin in the woods, killing people with her best friends/roommates/business partners

PLEASE GIVE ME CRITICISM

Description
Name: Devilrose (Delvina)
Species: Genie
Age: Lost count after the year 1658
Sexuality: Straight
Likes: Blood, Aladdin (the movie), cheese, the fear of others, money, and her friends. (and partners in assassin crime)
Dislikes: Mushy food, the sound of styrofoam, pastel colors, ladybugs.
Weapon: Fist, death bubbles (they are next to her right hand), and her tail
(SHORT) version of her back storyelvina was a happy genie and hs have many masters in her long life. She was in her lamp on a beach when a man named Robert Duncan rubbed her lap and asked for 3 wishes, 1, change her bright pastel colors into something dark and evil, 2. give him a huge hotel so he can murder innocent people, and 3, change the way she acts, thinks, make her have a bloodlust and be is wife in murdering crime. However in this world, after the 3 wishes are up, you get a slave and to set them free you cut off there arm braces and they will go off another place to have it happen again until they get damaged enough to die, that our there lamp gets busted. Robert how ever died in a police shoot out after being caught, before he could let her free and now she kills people to satisfy her bloodlust of her new changed self. One day she met yukari when god sent her to kill Devilrose (Yukari back story soon) and she met gray when she was paid money to kill him while he was in a nut house for killing a family of 6. She now lives in a cabin in the woods, killing people with her best friends/roommates/business partners

PLEASE GIVE ME CRITICISM