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Published: 2001-02-06 14:44:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 456; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 109
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Description Dying Words...
- by Sean Maisch (aka Devolution) (no copyright, I just hope no one ever has to use this poem for anything, because I know for a fact it won't cheer anyone up)

Why do you think
Certain ways about me
When you know
How truly I love thee

I try so hard
to show you my overwhelming joy
but you turn
as if I were a used up toy

I know you just want the best for me
But you don't know
How deep inside of me
My happiness with you dos't grow

So it seems
that this may be the end
but I just want you to know
that I will always remember my body against your loving hand

So Kaleigh
I must know
Is this the end?
Should I just go?

If this is so
then I must be heard
I will always love you
And, Kaleigh, you will be my dying word.
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Comments: 11

capnpants [2002-01-20 03:40:22 +0000 UTC]

wohoo...sweetness This is sweet! You inspire me.

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nurikoluver [2001-03-22 05:15:08 +0000 UTC]

Emotions can be deep...It's well-depicted in this poem.

/me huggles you.

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sanctus [2001-02-08 00:39:07 +0000 UTC]

..see isonica's post..

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hellphyre [2001-02-07 10:21:28 +0000 UTC]


This poem IS good. Nothing is in a competiotion here devolution. No matter what you write, if its about your feelings and it helps YOU through the experiance or even gives you a memory of whats since past, it will always be good for its from the soul.

he||phyre... Implicit Abyss

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matteo [2001-02-07 05:53:27 +0000 UTC]

hehe.. this is cool, glad you two are able to share ur feelings on our site

-- matteo --
https://www.deviantart.com
http://www.wastedyouth.org

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motion [2001-02-07 05:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Call each other an talk!!!!!

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kaleigh [2001-02-06 23:43:10 +0000 UTC]

Well this poem....is uh....well what can I say, it's about me. I don't really have any other comments except that in reply to it I wrote my own poem. But being the computer illiterate one that I am, I don't know how to submit it so I'm jsut gonna put it right here. It's name is, uh, it doesn't have one, it's special.
You say you’re happy
And you know that I tried
I know that you loved me
You were there by my side

So where was your smile
When I needed it most?
You left me here alone to cry
With only these tears to boast

You tell me not to leave you
And you’re lost without me here
You’ll always know I need you too
And I’d die without you near

You know you are my happiness
The only one for me
So to stay is only best
Thanks for making me see

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snickel [2001-02-06 05:39:06 +0000 UTC]

This is nice

::snickel

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ele [2001-02-06 05:12:15 +0000 UTC]


love it. -elemen- aka ele

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-silversurfer- [2001-02-06 05:11:30 +0000 UTC]

like is sounds deep,
i hope she stays man. good luck

why drink and drive when you can smoke and fly?

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isonica [2001-02-06 05:08:33 +0000 UTC]

This is nice. I feel you have changed some important values in your life. It has meant a lot to you and it has changed your way you see things.

This is good. It brings good energy within yourself, and can make you stronger.

isonica.com

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