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Description Heaven - Dreams
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- devolution(Sean Maisch): copyright 2001-2005



Such emotion
Such devotion
Brought to me with a motion
As if it was through the waves of an ocean.

Heavenly breeze sweeps us away
To a better place and day
Somewhere where we can live
Soon enough, we'll be on our way.

Whether in sickness or in health
I will hold you close, I will be your wealth
With all sorrow is swept away
Our love shall never gray..
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Comments: 7

itirep [2001-01-26 06:05:13 +0000 UTC]


wow-such an expression of light hearted yearning and appreciation of another from a 13 yr old!keep this up,you have a tremendous talent for expressing yourself...

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digitaldecay [2001-01-11 19:01:23 +0000 UTC]

AAAA BBCB DDBB

Heavenly breeze... is a breath of fresh air.

[-diGiTaLdecay-]
wet.pixel.cont est

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psyfect [2001-01-10 14:39:00 +0000 UTC]

very nice. very rhymy. heh.

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matteo [2001-01-10 04:54:04 +0000 UTC]

nicely written.. i like that scheme..i'll have to use it sometime

-- matteo --
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himynameiznate [2001-01-10 04:23:08 +0000 UTC]

bomb, very good job here. Very thoughtful, but also uplifting. I esp. like "i will be your wealth"

Nate
http://www.hotspots.cjb.net

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jsenn [2001-01-10 04:22:34 +0000 UTC]



Such wise and wonderful words in your poem, and from your commenter, vaeltaja.

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vaeltaja [2001-01-10 03:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Staying by someone's side thru times of sadness and joy is what love is all about. Sweet poetry devo

~ Where the are Dreams, there are always Dreamers ~

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